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Summer Vacation. Chapter 6
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“No” said Bette, thinking, “no, take it down would you? … and put that overpriced Duncan Smith print in it’s place.”
“Okay,” said James, “what should I do with it?”
“I’ll get back to you on that” Bette replied, “look James, my car’s here, I’ve got to go.” she added, waving as the car pulled up.
“Sure thing …” replied James, as they both hung up the phone.
“Terry! …” Bette said, as she stepped forward to greet the now slightly balding man who got up out of the car to meet her.
“Bette,” he replied, pulling her into an embrace “it’s so good to see you.”
Lottie left Lisa and Tina where they sat finishing their lunch and went over to the counter to speak to Kit,
“Hey girl! … you want something?” asked Kit, expecting to be asked for a second espresso, she’d never seen a young person drink so many of them, not since Shane,
“No thanks Kit,” Lottie replied, “well, yes … I mean … yes I do want something, but not to drink.”
Kit put down the towel she was holding and gave her full attention.
“I was wondering if you had any jobs going?” Lottie asked
Kit looked surprised, “You want to work for me?”
Lottie nodded. “Not much … y’know … I just wondered, if you had something on at the weekends maybe, and needed extra help.” she paused, “I’ve done bar work before,” she added.
Kit looked as though she were thinking about it. Truth was not ‘every’ weekend, but most weekends they had stuff on and even though she tried hard not to, Kit herself always ended up working because they would be so busy.
She smiled at Lottie, “Look, let me think about it … let me talk to Tina,” she added, “You’re her student and it has to be okay with her.”
Lottie agreed, pleased in fact that Kit would be the one to speak to Tina and not her,
“Thanks Kit”
Bette watched out of the corner of her eye as her cell phone lit up for the fourth time. Across the table from her Terry seemed totally oblivious to it, he’d not stopped talking all afternoon, gushing about how amazing it was to see her after all this time, how successful she’d become.
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I am really enjoying this story. I am anxioulsly awaiting the big reveal!
I made my comment on your last chapter and then I found out you posted another one. But I am still no closer to getting who Lottie is. Please don’t keep us haning too much longer on this. You are really good at giving us just enough info but not enough to figure it out. Thanks
Okay, you keep leaving us on the edge of the cliff. You are good not even a wee bit of infornmation on Lottie. PPS thanks
Charlotte Elizabeth…well someone must’ve been thinking of Bette in some capacity if not Bette herself. PPS!
Oh and the phone conversation about B&T’s first anniversary was HOT!
okay you teaser!tibette anniversary was STEAMIN!HOT! please post soon,and we need more info about lottie.i bet tina figures it out before too long.
i could just about strangle you now (lol) becuz i am desperate to find out who lotte’s mom is; i suspect that its Maxine and Mel’ granddaughter to their son/daughter; maybe Maxine was pregnant when she left Melvin and had a son/daughter and Lottie is this person’s child or Maxine had another relationship with an afro-american and this is their daughter/grandaughter but I am so hanging out to know so u betta post soon!!!
i think lottie is bette’s half sister…and i really hope bette will be home soon because they both are miserable without each other
this is so interesting story i am diying to know what is all the secret! post as soon as you can please
I still think that Lottie is Bette’s half sister but she could be Bette’s child. I do not think that Bette would have kept that quiet but you never know. Lottie is very mysterous. Can’t wait for Bette to get back and finish the job that she started with Tina.
So Lottie is Bettes daughter!
I’m with the others about that phone conversation, but then again, when it comes to B&T loving, I’m a bit biased… Still, that was both tender and so hot, and in that style of yours that I’m really starting to cherish! ;) Great story… Please have Bette come home soon!
I am so waiting for the B/T reunion. Will the real Lottie identify herself soon? Love the cliff hangers.
Was that really 3 pages? That went by quick…so Tina is becoming a regular Angela Lansbury huh? Please post soon so we can find out these mysteries…they are killing me!
your still killing me… i can’t wait to see how you tie them all together… and how long before bette comes home… and will tina be able to still walk… lol… please continue
I hope you tell us soon who Lottie is. Because this is starting to get to me. I just hope she is Bette and Kit’s half sister. Thanks PPS