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Sun Salutations: Chapter 5
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“I think you are a fan of impromptu visits.” Bette replied snidely.
“Why do you say that?” Â
“Because the other day when you popped by to get your mail, it was an impromptu visit “
 “That doesn’t count.”
 “It so counts.”
 “You knew I would be coming by.”
 “That, I did know. But I didn’t know when.  So your visit was spur of the moment, hence impromptu.”Â
 “OK.  I’m not going to get into a game of dictionary football with you Bette.”
Bette let the subject go and relished in her victory of the verbal debate.
“So, what gives Bette?” Tina asked inquisitively.
Bette searched Tina’s face for signs of humor. She found none.
“I don’t know Tina. I got a call today from some reporter with the Times asking if she could have a follow-up interview with me to discuss the whereabouts of my husband. Sorry. My estranged, ex, what the ***** -however the ***** you classify it. I was so relaxed before I received the call. You know, I finally felt like a weight had been lifted from my shoulders and now it feels like someone put it back plus another 100 lbs on top of it.”
“Well Bette, the good part about yoga and relaxation is that you can practice these repeatedly throughout your day. It doesn’t have to be a one-time deal like an early morning run. You can integrate them into your normal routine as you see fit. You laughed when I did a little yoga in your house the other night. I knew that I needed to calm myself down.  My mind was too busy and it was driving me crazy. Once I reset, I was good again.”Â
“You know all the right things to say, don’t you Tina.”Â
“No. Not really”.
They looked deeply into each others eyes and wondered what the other was thinking. As they were staring at each other in the backyard, Helena was staring at the both of them through the kitchen window.Â
Tina was the first to look away.  Breaking eye contact, she looked down to the fabric of the lounge chair and started running her fingertips over the designs on the material. She took a breath, hesitated and then began speaking.
“Bette, I wanted to te.”
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I’ve read all 5 chapters of this story today. I’ll have to say, I’m eagerly waiting to see what happens next. And although, Helena is rather NICE in your story…reading her name still makes me kinda ill. LOL. I hope Tina settles down a bit and that bet starts taking care of herself…..but, we all know what love can do…and it’s in the air for these two….Great writing, keep ’em coming!
Woo Hooo!! This is one great chapter! I love the way Tina is the “playa” in this one, so aggressive! Damn, that is sexy! And, I love it that she and Helena can go toe-to-toe! That’s right, Tina! Don’t back down. Give Helena a run for her money, Babe! And, Bette, “Get Ur Freak On”, my innocent li’l lady. I love the role reversal here. Great storyline, simply marvelous! Please, keep the chapters coming!
this is gettin better every chapter i read!!
just remember green, im your first, ;). im really grooving to this story. love tina being the shiznit. see i knew hellno couldnt keep up being nice. oh that green (heehee) eyed monster in hellnos eye. hopefully youll get another one in today. loving this. thanks.
Ok, I just read all the chapters. I’m not critic but I can tell you what I like.
1. I like that though the rolls seems to have been traded somewhat between Tina and Bette (when it comes to the sexual agressor) they still have the same character traits…control freak, being left (bette) warm, giving, gardener (tina).
2. I like the pace of the story as well.
3. Liking this Helena even though I’m still wary…she may become a little psychotic with her Bette obsession
4.I’m liking how Tina has to work to get Bette…it’s always the other way around.
There’s more but I’m at work so you know the drill.
Hey that was so great please continue I Love it it’s interesting I can’t wait the next chapter Please post soon.
YAY I logged on and i had 2 more hcapters to read, and dont apologise for not giving me time to comment cuz then i get to write a longer comment. i love this story, its weird to see bette and helena so nice to each other (most of the time) and i liked how u switched B&T’s roles. post soon!!
Dayum – I love fiery women! Good writes keep it up. Can’t wait for the next post.
I just took in all 5 chapters. I absolutely love the role reversal; Tina as the aggressive playa has me here in stitches.
Somehow my mind cant process Helena as a sweet, caring, nuturing friend….I’m sure the shoe will drop where she’s concerned. Eventually she will have to share with Bette what she is feeling…..hmmm, Tina pursuing Bette, Helena wanting Bette…do we have some DRAMA on the horizon?
Please post again soon
I am lovin this story. I am a HUGE B&T fan…..but I find myself wanting bette and Helena together in your story. (Hangs head in shame)!LOL
I just read all the chapters and I must say that I like your story very much. I do hope that Tina will not break Bette’s heart. Is there a reason Tina doesn’t do relationship’s?
hey greentea! just wanted to say that iam enjoying this story..the title caught my eye, ‘sun salutations’ or ‘sooryanamaskar’ (do u know what iam talking about?). u into yoga? thanks for the story!
Wow that was a great fight, I love your twist having Tina and Helena fighting over Bette. And from such different vantage points. Your writing is very fun to read. Thanks for each post and the time you take ( steal from your day) to do this.
Oooh. I love it. I think I’d rather see Helena/Bette though. huge fan of that ‘ship, though it’s much too rare, hehe. Helacious though, rocks!
the green eyed monster can be a bitch sometimes!!!!!!!!!!!
god this is good..reading on
Good chapter!