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Sun Salutations: Chapter 5
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When Bette finally left the backyard and went in the house the next morning, Helena was buzzing around the kitchen like a busy bee. Pots clanked noisily on the counter and storage containers were hurriedly shoved in the refrigerator.
“Good morning Bette” Helena said sullenly.
“Morning Hel”
“Did you sleep well?”
“Didn’t sleep at allI stayed up all night.” Bette bragged.
“Hmmph , that figures” Helena replied annoyingly.
“What exactly does that mean?Â
“You know Bette? It’s terribly early in the morning. You haven’t had any sleep and I’m trying to get out of here to catch a plane. This may not be the best time to have a much needed discussion.  How about I ring you later to chat? Yes?
“I understand Hel. If possible though, I’d like to discuss at least some of what’s bothering you while we’re face to face. We have some time before you have to leave right?”
“Bette, I am so upset with you right now that I can’t see straight.”
“And why is that Hel?” Bette said looking at her stressed roommate like she had a third eye.
“Are you serious? You’ve got to be ***** kidding me. You don’t have any inkling why I’m upset.” Helena said with her hand on her hip and weight shifted to one foot.
“Let’s try to maximize our time Hel. Please tell me.” Bette opened the fridge to get some chocolate milk.
Helena crossed her arms defensively. She was beginning her attack on Bette. “Since when did you become so chummy with Tina Kennard, Bette?”
“Why do you care?   What are you getting at?” Bette spat as she whipped her body around to look Helena in the eyes.
“Are you aware of her reputation Bette?”Â
“Yeah, I know she’s a womanizer. But I play for a different team remember?”
“She’s recruiting you to join our team Bette. You’ll look up and you’ll be part of the starting lineup darling.” Helena said in a extremely condescending tone.Â
“Hel, I don’t know about all that. What I do know is that I enjoy her company. She’s a very nice person and a phenomenal yoga instructor.”
Helena starts scribbling something furiously on a piece of paper. Bette interrupts “Hel, could you not do that why we’re talking unless you can do it and still maintain a conversation.” Helena slams the pen down and returns her angry eyes to Bette.  “Well Bette, not everyone can do 10 million things at once like you. Some of us need to take “Multitasking for Dummies!” She continued her icy glare. “Like I was saying, how would you know what a great instructor she is?   You haven’t been to any of her classes. Have you?”
“How do you know? You don’t know everything I do. *****! I feel like you’re my mother sometimes. I know we’ve both had some rough times but dammit, I need to breathe Helena. You’re suffocating me.”
“Well guess what darling. You’re going to have a couple of lonely weeks to catch your breath. You get on my bloody nerves Bette.”
“***** you Helena.”
“You wish you were so lucky Bette Porter. Do me a favor will you? Don’t call me the next time you need rescuing okay?” Helena hurriedly sashayed by Bette barely clearing the small space between them.Â
They both muttered the same word under their breath to describe each other. “*****!!”.
TBC…hopefully today
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I’ve read all 5 chapters of this story today. I’ll have to say, I’m eagerly waiting to see what happens next. And although, Helena is rather NICE in your story…reading her name still makes me kinda ill. LOL. I hope Tina settles down a bit and that bet starts taking care of herself…..but, we all know what love can do…and it’s in the air for these two….Great writing, keep ’em coming!
Woo Hooo!! This is one great chapter! I love the way Tina is the “playa” in this one, so aggressive! Damn, that is sexy! And, I love it that she and Helena can go toe-to-toe! That’s right, Tina! Don’t back down. Give Helena a run for her money, Babe! And, Bette, “Get Ur Freak On”, my innocent li’l lady. I love the role reversal here. Great storyline, simply marvelous! Please, keep the chapters coming!
this is gettin better every chapter i read!!
just remember green, im your first, ;). im really grooving to this story. love tina being the shiznit. see i knew hellno couldnt keep up being nice. oh that green (heehee) eyed monster in hellnos eye. hopefully youll get another one in today. loving this. thanks.
Ok, I just read all the chapters. I’m not critic but I can tell you what I like.
1. I like that though the rolls seems to have been traded somewhat between Tina and Bette (when it comes to the sexual agressor) they still have the same character traits…control freak, being left (bette) warm, giving, gardener (tina).
2. I like the pace of the story as well.
3. Liking this Helena even though I’m still wary…she may become a little psychotic with her Bette obsession
4.I’m liking how Tina has to work to get Bette…it’s always the other way around.
There’s more but I’m at work so you know the drill.
Hey that was so great please continue I Love it it’s interesting I can’t wait the next chapter Please post soon.
YAY I logged on and i had 2 more hcapters to read, and dont apologise for not giving me time to comment cuz then i get to write a longer comment. i love this story, its weird to see bette and helena so nice to each other (most of the time) and i liked how u switched B&T’s roles. post soon!!
Dayum – I love fiery women! Good writes keep it up. Can’t wait for the next post.
I just took in all 5 chapters. I absolutely love the role reversal; Tina as the aggressive playa has me here in stitches.
Somehow my mind cant process Helena as a sweet, caring, nuturing friend….I’m sure the shoe will drop where she’s concerned. Eventually she will have to share with Bette what she is feeling…..hmmm, Tina pursuing Bette, Helena wanting Bette…do we have some DRAMA on the horizon?
Please post again soon
I am lovin this story. I am a HUGE B&T fan…..but I find myself wanting bette and Helena together in your story. (Hangs head in shame)!LOL
I just read all the chapters and I must say that I like your story very much. I do hope that Tina will not break Bette’s heart. Is there a reason Tina doesn’t do relationship’s?
hey greentea! just wanted to say that iam enjoying this story..the title caught my eye, ‘sun salutations’ or ‘sooryanamaskar’ (do u know what iam talking about?). u into yoga? thanks for the story!
Wow that was a great fight, I love your twist having Tina and Helena fighting over Bette. And from such different vantage points. Your writing is very fun to read. Thanks for each post and the time you take ( steal from your day) to do this.
Oooh. I love it. I think I’d rather see Helena/Bette though. huge fan of that ‘ship, though it’s much too rare, hehe. Helacious though, rocks!
the green eyed monster can be a bitch sometimes!!!!!!!!!!!
god this is good..reading on
Good chapter!