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Sun Salutations: Chapter 5
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Helena deliberately strolled into their presence and boldly stood in front of them. “Hello Tina.” she sang in a caring tone not meaning it. She hadn’t forgotten how to perfectly mask her feelings when necessary and at this time, that was a good thing.Â
“Hi Helena.” Tina happily chirped flashing a satisfied smile.
Bette lit another cigarette and gulped the last corner of her drink, oblivious to the the thick tension between her roommate and her neighbor.  Tina was determined to wait this little situation out. “Don’t ***** with me Helena. You might as well take your snooty ***** back into the kitchen like a good little Brit” she thought. Tina confidently turned her body around so that her back was now toward Bette. She caught Helena’s eye and slowly laid back on the lounge chair against Bette’s full chest. She proceeded to cross her extended legs and placed her hands together with fingers laced on her flat stomach. Tina smiled slightly as she decidedly shimmied against the curves of Bette’s yielding body to get more comfortable.
“*****” Bette said under her breath and then coughed.Â
Tina wickedly looked up at Helena. “Why don’t you sit down and join us Helena?”
 Bette felt trapped. She knew Helena was getting upset but wasn’t quite sure why. Well, she had an idea but had no idea where the attitude was coming from. She wanted to get another drink but liked the warm feeling of Tina’s body against hers.  “What the ***** is going on?” Bette thought to herself. She could see the fire starting to burn behind Helena’s eyes as she observed her roommate’s attractive almond eyes transform into evil little narrow slits.Â
Tina was enjoying watching Helena’s facial expressions change as her angry feelings dictated the metamorphosis broadly displayed across her face. “I told you not to ***** with me Helena didn’t I?” she wickedly thought. Tina felt her lips turn upward in search of the devilish grin she wore so well.    Â
Staring at Tina with no emotion, Helena replied “Unfortunately, I’m unable to join you lucky girls.   I’ve got to get packed for a business trip to San Francisco tomorrow so I’ll have to pass. But I will take a rain check if you don’t mind…”
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I’ve read all 5 chapters of this story today. I’ll have to say, I’m eagerly waiting to see what happens next. And although, Helena is rather NICE in your story…reading her name still makes me kinda ill. LOL. I hope Tina settles down a bit and that bet starts taking care of herself…..but, we all know what love can do…and it’s in the air for these two….Great writing, keep ’em coming!
Woo Hooo!! This is one great chapter! I love the way Tina is the “playa” in this one, so aggressive! Damn, that is sexy! And, I love it that she and Helena can go toe-to-toe! That’s right, Tina! Don’t back down. Give Helena a run for her money, Babe! And, Bette, “Get Ur Freak On”, my innocent li’l lady. I love the role reversal here. Great storyline, simply marvelous! Please, keep the chapters coming!
this is gettin better every chapter i read!!
just remember green, im your first, ;). im really grooving to this story. love tina being the shiznit. see i knew hellno couldnt keep up being nice. oh that green (heehee) eyed monster in hellnos eye. hopefully youll get another one in today. loving this. thanks.
Ok, I just read all the chapters. I’m not critic but I can tell you what I like.
1. I like that though the rolls seems to have been traded somewhat between Tina and Bette (when it comes to the sexual agressor) they still have the same character traits…control freak, being left (bette) warm, giving, gardener (tina).
2. I like the pace of the story as well.
3. Liking this Helena even though I’m still wary…she may become a little psychotic with her Bette obsession
4.I’m liking how Tina has to work to get Bette…it’s always the other way around.
There’s more but I’m at work so you know the drill.
Hey that was so great please continue I Love it it’s interesting I can’t wait the next chapter Please post soon.
YAY I logged on and i had 2 more hcapters to read, and dont apologise for not giving me time to comment cuz then i get to write a longer comment. i love this story, its weird to see bette and helena so nice to each other (most of the time) and i liked how u switched B&T’s roles. post soon!!
Dayum – I love fiery women! Good writes keep it up. Can’t wait for the next post.
I just took in all 5 chapters. I absolutely love the role reversal; Tina as the aggressive playa has me here in stitches.
Somehow my mind cant process Helena as a sweet, caring, nuturing friend….I’m sure the shoe will drop where she’s concerned. Eventually she will have to share with Bette what she is feeling…..hmmm, Tina pursuing Bette, Helena wanting Bette…do we have some DRAMA on the horizon?
Please post again soon
I am lovin this story. I am a HUGE B&T fan…..but I find myself wanting bette and Helena together in your story. (Hangs head in shame)!LOL
I just read all the chapters and I must say that I like your story very much. I do hope that Tina will not break Bette’s heart. Is there a reason Tina doesn’t do relationship’s?
hey greentea! just wanted to say that iam enjoying this story..the title caught my eye, ‘sun salutations’ or ‘sooryanamaskar’ (do u know what iam talking about?). u into yoga? thanks for the story!
Wow that was a great fight, I love your twist having Tina and Helena fighting over Bette. And from such different vantage points. Your writing is very fun to read. Thanks for each post and the time you take ( steal from your day) to do this.
Oooh. I love it. I think I’d rather see Helena/Bette though. huge fan of that ‘ship, though it’s much too rare, hehe. Helacious though, rocks!
the green eyed monster can be a bitch sometimes!!!!!!!!!!!
god this is good..reading on
Good chapter!