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Sun Salutations: Chapter 5
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Helena scurried back to the house. She went to her room and slammed the door. “***** you Tina Kennard!” she yelled to no one.
Bette got up and fixed another drink. When she returned, Tina asked her to sit down in front of her this time. Bette hesitantly sat down on the lounge chair and lay back against the infamous sun goddess. She exhaled deeply.
“That was an excellent breath you took Bette.”
“Yeah? Believe me, it wasn’t on purpose”.
Tina laughed. “Are you comfortable?”
“Very. This feels good.” Bette said quietly.
“Yes, it does.”
“Huh?”
“You said this feels good” and I agreed. Tina laughed.
“Oh, wow. I didn’t know I actually said that. Bette admitted. I thought it but I didn’t mean to say it. ”
“Why don’t you want me to know that you feel good?” Tina asked solemnly.
“Honestly?”
“Please.”
“I think I’m afraid to admit it to myself.”
Tina looked seriously at Bette. “I want to know when you feel good Bette. Or, what I can do to make you feel good. Please know this.” She said honestly.
Bette ignored Tina’s comments and spoke. “I’ve been trying to figure out why I keep thinking about you Tina. I haven’t been able to shake it and it’s somewhat unsettling.”
Tina smiled. “Unsettling because you don’t want to think about me?”Â
Bette laughed. “I don’t know what I want. I only know what I don’t want.”
“And what is it that you don’t want Bette?”
“I don’t want to freak out every time someone says goodbye to me. I have a terrible fear that they won’t return. I don’t want to ever hurt again as I did when my marriage ended.”
Tina held Bette tightly around the waist and slowly planted a tender, heartfelt kiss on her neck. Please tell me if this is too ‘unsettling’ Bette.
“Oh, so you’re Miss Jokie Joke huh? No, it’s not unsettling at all. It feels good Tina.”
“That’s exactly what I wanted to hear” Tina smiled.
They spent the rest of the night sharing the lounge chair and their histories. Tina positioned behind Bette. Stories of their childhood, growing up,  and Bette’s former life were easily shared under the cloudy sky, as they occasionally dozed off. In an effort to make up for lost time, they woke up with new conversation, new feelings and new memories in the making.
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I’ve read all 5 chapters of this story today. I’ll have to say, I’m eagerly waiting to see what happens next. And although, Helena is rather NICE in your story…reading her name still makes me kinda ill. LOL. I hope Tina settles down a bit and that bet starts taking care of herself…..but, we all know what love can do…and it’s in the air for these two….Great writing, keep ’em coming!
Woo Hooo!! This is one great chapter! I love the way Tina is the “playa” in this one, so aggressive! Damn, that is sexy! And, I love it that she and Helena can go toe-to-toe! That’s right, Tina! Don’t back down. Give Helena a run for her money, Babe! And, Bette, “Get Ur Freak On”, my innocent li’l lady. I love the role reversal here. Great storyline, simply marvelous! Please, keep the chapters coming!
this is gettin better every chapter i read!!
just remember green, im your first, ;). im really grooving to this story. love tina being the shiznit. see i knew hellno couldnt keep up being nice. oh that green (heehee) eyed monster in hellnos eye. hopefully youll get another one in today. loving this. thanks.
Ok, I just read all the chapters. I’m not critic but I can tell you what I like.
1. I like that though the rolls seems to have been traded somewhat between Tina and Bette (when it comes to the sexual agressor) they still have the same character traits…control freak, being left (bette) warm, giving, gardener (tina).
2. I like the pace of the story as well.
3. Liking this Helena even though I’m still wary…she may become a little psychotic with her Bette obsession
4.I’m liking how Tina has to work to get Bette…it’s always the other way around.
There’s more but I’m at work so you know the drill.
Hey that was so great please continue I Love it it’s interesting I can’t wait the next chapter Please post soon.
YAY I logged on and i had 2 more hcapters to read, and dont apologise for not giving me time to comment cuz then i get to write a longer comment. i love this story, its weird to see bette and helena so nice to each other (most of the time) and i liked how u switched B&T’s roles. post soon!!
Dayum – I love fiery women! Good writes keep it up. Can’t wait for the next post.
I just took in all 5 chapters. I absolutely love the role reversal; Tina as the aggressive playa has me here in stitches.
Somehow my mind cant process Helena as a sweet, caring, nuturing friend….I’m sure the shoe will drop where she’s concerned. Eventually she will have to share with Bette what she is feeling…..hmmm, Tina pursuing Bette, Helena wanting Bette…do we have some DRAMA on the horizon?
Please post again soon
I am lovin this story. I am a HUGE B&T fan…..but I find myself wanting bette and Helena together in your story. (Hangs head in shame)!LOL
I just read all the chapters and I must say that I like your story very much. I do hope that Tina will not break Bette’s heart. Is there a reason Tina doesn’t do relationship’s?
hey greentea! just wanted to say that iam enjoying this story..the title caught my eye, ‘sun salutations’ or ‘sooryanamaskar’ (do u know what iam talking about?). u into yoga? thanks for the story!
Wow that was a great fight, I love your twist having Tina and Helena fighting over Bette. And from such different vantage points. Your writing is very fun to read. Thanks for each post and the time you take ( steal from your day) to do this.
Oooh. I love it. I think I’d rather see Helena/Bette though. huge fan of that ‘ship, though it’s much too rare, hehe. Helacious though, rocks!
the green eyed monster can be a bitch sometimes!!!!!!!!!!!
god this is good..reading on
Good chapter!