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Surrender Everything – Chapter 2
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“Bette, I live here alone. Occasionally, I talk to a stranger when he or she needs help. How can I ever slip this? It’s not as if I am going to tell everyone in a city because I rarely come there and when I do, I don’t talk about someone’s dreams.”
Bette sighed. She felt a strange feeling of trust with a woman. “I don’t want to get married to a man. I…” She had never voiced this thought. “I want to be with a woman.”
Tina smiled. “You are gay?”
Bette blushed. “I guess so.”
“It’s nothing to be ashamed of.” Tina said.
That was the first time in 18 years that Bette heard someone say that. It felt like a few pounds of the weight that was lying on her shoulders, was taken away. “What did you say?” She asked.
“It’s nothing to be ashamed of, Bette. I mean, here, you have to keep your mouth shut about that but I personally think, that there is nothing wrong with loving someone of the same gender. To me, it’s natural. It happens, big deal. I don’t understand what all the fuzz is about.” Tina said. Bette looked at Tina and chuckled.
“You are really something else.” Bette said.
Bette grinned and then asked another question. “How does your perfect life look like?” Tina asked.
Bette smiled. “My perfect life? In my perfect life, I would have a beautiful wife that I could care for but that would also care for me. I would have four kids, two boys and two girls. One more child is also nice but not less than 4. I would have a house that was just big enough for our family and we would have a dog. I don’t like cats that much. I would work at an Art Gallery and my wife would also have a job that she loves… Sad that it will never happen.”
“Why do you think it can’t? Who is the cause of that?” Tina asked her.
“That’s easy. The Emperor. I don’t know one person that likes that man. I even think his wife hates him.” Bette told the blonde-haired woman where she seemed to be talking to so easily.
“If no one likes him, then why isn’t there resistance?” Tina asked.
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Go Tina Go u r the best, yes please save Bette! I think I already hooked to ur story, so please keep it coming it is wonderful ;D
It’s like a race against time! Go Tina go!!!
I’m really liking this tale
hey soon enough .. haha great chapter Bette wants the same perfect life that I want well except for the work in a galery… ((and Bette would be hers.)) I loved that part.PPS
Hey BetteAddict you are doing a great job with this story. Stick to your vision and don’t get bogged down by the numbers and ratings if they happen to be low. They don’t really mean much in regard to how good a story is because they are so subjective. I hate to see stories either go by the wayside because the author is discouraged or else they go the NC 17 route and use gratuitous sex as a filler just for popularity without having any substance or adding to the plot line. You’ve got a great premise for this story, you are imaginative, and the way you are setting it up is intriguing and leaves the reader wanting for more. I’m not usually into sci-fi but I really want to see how this turns out. Thank you for offering something different. PPS
This is so good and love it. Hope Tina will save Bette and take her away before she get married. Please post more, thanks!
Sad..oh how i wished that this is just a dream for Bette..It’s tough to lived in Earth…yeah, hear ya..If Tina would take Bette away this soon..then no more story to tell?. (O O)
Wonderful update. I do hope that Tina can save bette. thank you for this story.
Go Tina,fight for your woman.Thank you for the update.PPS