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Surrender Everything – Chapter 2
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“People are scared and the forming of groups that are not guided by the government is taboo. Also, there isn’t time to form one. The men are working to feed their family and the women are too busy with cleaning and caring for the kids that they don’t have time. When they are finally free from work and kids, they are too old or just want to enjoy the peace and quiet they finally have.” Bette explained.
“Oh…” Tina reacted; still, she was sure she would find some brave souls. It couldn’t be that everybody was scared, right?
“Tina, what are your dreams?” Bette asked.
Tina smiled. “I also want to find me a nice girl.”
Bette grinned. “Really?”
“Yeah, I want about the same thing as you.”
“You are the first gay woman I’ve ever met.” Bette told her.
“No, I’m not. You’ve probably met dozens of gay people but no one can come out here, right?” Tina questioned.
Bette nodded. “Yeah, I would spend the rest of my life in jail even though I’ve never slept with a girl. Just saying you are gay can make you go to prison. You?”
“I don’t really know what the rules are.” Tina laughed and Bette chuckled.
“Well, have you slept with someone of the same sex more than once?”
Tina smiled. “Oh yeah.” She sounded proud.
Bette laughed. “Well, then they would kill you.”
Tina raised her eyebrows. “You say that everyone hates the Emperor but there have to be people that like him. Otherwise you can’t control your people, right?”
“Well, there are some, I think the 2 or 3 hundred people that are in the top class love him. They are treated like gods. I would love him too if he would give me everything I want.”
Tina shook her head. “In what category are you?”
“Well, because I’m a woman, my status depends on the man that is closest to me. In this case, that’s my Dad. I’m in category 3. He served the military, is straight and acts as if he is religious. We are with the normal people; most people are in our category. I know that if I marry one of the guys my Dad picked, I will go to category 4. All the guys will be blonde, religious, straight and have served the military. The only thing I will never be able to accomplish is being white.”
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Go Tina Go u r the best, yes please save Bette! I think I already hooked to ur story, so please keep it coming it is wonderful ;D
It’s like a race against time! Go Tina go!!!
I’m really liking this tale
hey soon enough .. haha great chapter Bette wants the same perfect life that I want well except for the work in a galery… ((and Bette would be hers.)) I loved that part.PPS
Hey BetteAddict you are doing a great job with this story. Stick to your vision and don’t get bogged down by the numbers and ratings if they happen to be low. They don’t really mean much in regard to how good a story is because they are so subjective. I hate to see stories either go by the wayside because the author is discouraged or else they go the NC 17 route and use gratuitous sex as a filler just for popularity without having any substance or adding to the plot line. You’ve got a great premise for this story, you are imaginative, and the way you are setting it up is intriguing and leaves the reader wanting for more. I’m not usually into sci-fi but I really want to see how this turns out. Thank you for offering something different. PPS
This is so good and love it. Hope Tina will save Bette and take her away before she get married. Please post more, thanks!
Sad..oh how i wished that this is just a dream for Bette..It’s tough to lived in Earth…yeah, hear ya..If Tina would take Bette away this soon..then no more story to tell?. (O O)
Wonderful update. I do hope that Tina can save bette. thank you for this story.
Go Tina,fight for your woman.Thank you for the update.PPS