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Sweet Surrender 2/2
“Yeah?” Alice said trying to not look that interested but failed miserably.
“We need to talk about….” Dana was about to say something when she saw Shane at the door. She frowned as she didn’t want an audience to their once in a lifetime conversation. She needed to get rid of Yoda at once. But how? Think Dana think. Ok there’s only one way, she thought.
“Dane what do we need to talk about?” Alice started to get impatient, oblivious to Shane’s present.
“Argh I don’t think I want to talk to you anymore.” Dana said with a slightly higher tone. It’s ok to raise your voice Dana you know you can explain later, she muttered under her breath trying to convince herself.
Alice’s eyes were beaming with anger. What the hell? She thought.
“Fine! By the way I don’t want to talk to you too!” Alice answered.
With that both stood up from their seats. Shane who had just arrived was surprised with the abrupt gestures. Alice went to her first.
“Hi Shane I need to go to the office now. See you.” Before Shane could answer Alice was at the door already. Then Dana walked up to her.
“Hey Shane as much as I like to be here with you I need to go and train. Bye.” Shane mouth opened agape as Dana again made it to the door in record time.
What the fuck just happened? Shane said to basically no one.
Alice’s apartment
Hell, it’s already eleven but there’s still no call from Dana, Alice checked her cell phone for the hundredth time wondering whether it was still functioning.
She didn’t want to talk to Dana but she thought that the tennis player owe her an apology for being rude this morning not that she care but she just want to listen what she had to explain.
On the other hand Dana was pacing in front of Alice’s building. How? How? How? She fidgeted her hands as she recalled her conversation with Dan Foxworthy this afternoon.
Flashback
“Dana why do you still have doubts on Alice’s feeling?” Dan wrinkled his face. He had been telling her again and again that Alice felt the same way but the tennis player just wouldn’t listen.
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(36 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
that was great I loved every bit of it thanks but please post a new story soon
Great story uhhuh. Glad they came to their senses and admitted their feelings. Loved the ending also.
Excellent ending, uhhuh!! So Danish with the avoiding each other and miscommunication. Love Dana going after Alice and taking the initiative – and she used a little trickery, too. Also love Aggressive!Dana and her bringing flowers for Alice. The gals in WeHo are certainly keeping Dan Foxworthy in business – the ending was too funny. Thanks so much for the great story!!
hahaha this is so funny! loved it! thanks
so funny! I love it. Thank you!
hahahahhaha .. it’s soooooo funny. I love all of your danish stories, uhhuh. They’re so cute and funny together. Thank you for excellent job.