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    That Early Mourning

    Story written on May 9, 2005 by JuHa72.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53776
    Author Notes:

    Bette ends up on Tina’s porch after Melvin dies.

    Bette: Tina, is this okay? If it is not okay, just let me know.

    Tina: This is more than okay. I am sorry I woke you up. Your daughter decided she wanted to play some soccer against my body and I needed to get into a more comfortable position. Go back to sleep, its okay.

    Bette: She was kicking? Is she still kicking?

    Tina: Yeah, she is still kicking! You want to feel?

    Bette: I would love to.

    Tina: Here, give me your hand.

    Tina gently grabs Bettes hand and positions it on her bare belly. Bette moves in closer to spoon with Tina.

    Tina: Lets see, shes right . . . right . . . right here! Can you feel that?

    Bette: Oh, my God. Thats her? Thats our daughter. She is so amazing.

    Tina and Bette quietly laid still as they savored this special moment with their little girl. For the first time in months, both Bette and Tina felt completely safe in each others arms. Both of them thought to themselves, this just feels so right.

    Bette: (While lovingly caressing Tinas belly) T, thank you.

    Tina: Sure, babe . . . you can feel our baby anytime.

    Bette: No, T. Thank you for being here for me. I know I dont deserve this. I dont deserve your kindness and concern. I know I fucked up and I hurt you so deeply. I dont deserve to . . .

    Tina: Shhhh . . . baby, we are family and I am just glad that we are at a place where I can be here for you. (Tina grabs Bettes hand from her belly and brings it to her mouth where she tenderly kisses Bettes hand and fingers).

    Tina: We are going to get through this together . . . okay? You and me, okay?

    Bette: T, thank you.

    Tina: Bette, I just want you to know how sorry I am.

    Bette: I know. I am sorry too. I just wished I would have had more time with him. There are so many things I wished I could have said or done with him before he died. But, as much as I miss him (Bette starts to choke up again) . . . I am happy that he isnt stuck here dying in agony. He is finally at peace.

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    4. Wow, great job. Interesting writing. It would be nice if B & T ever get some tyme to have deep heartfelt conversations about their feelings for each other and the breakup — before and after.

    9. WELL DONE!! Geez, first time writer?! You’re like a pro arready=) Totally loved it! Such a heartfelt story…Please update soon please!

    13. This was excellent. I am straving for more romantic, loving and intimate storylines. I have grown tried of stories that offer no romance and only crude meaningless sex. I hope you continue with this, I enjoyed it tremendously. Thank you.

    14. Sniff Sniff I’m crying I can feel my hearths it’s like to Explode Whoa!Whoa! this is really Beautiful Story Thank you Juha Please Post soon.

    23. well now if this isn’t the most beautiful and loving thing I read…gosh you wrote them so well in this and omg it was so adorable and loving…tibette together again what more could you ask for

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