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The Chase – chapter 17
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Back in those earlier days, her eyes were filled with love and admiration, but the last time I gazed into them they only showed hurt, despair, sadness and deception. The love was gone, or at least deeply hidden by the pain I had caused her.
I hate myself… I can’t even bare to look at my reflection in the mirror anymore. I only see a cheater… I miss her so terribly, it has been three days since I last saw her. She’s the air I breath, the reason I’m living… Without her here, I’m slowly dying. I feel empty inside… I reach for my cell phone and begin dialling her number, but I stop myself. What should I say, what could I say ? Words are just not enough, words can’t erase the past.
Why did I do it ? After we lost the baby, everything spun out of control. We weren’t talking… OK, we were, but not about the important stuff. The way we felt. How we would be there for one another. We cried only once together, when we came back from the doctor’s office. After that, we pretty much kept to ourselves… We were having problems before, but this tragedy built a wider wedge between us. That’s no excuse, I know…
Jesus, I can’t believe she’s gone… The tears begin to flow and I’m drowning. My vision is blurred, but I can still see her beautiful face very clearly. Her smile. Oh God, how I love that smile… She wasn’t smiling that night when she confronted me. I had betrayed her trust in the worst possible way. She left me that night… I deserved it…
Her. The woman I slept with. I can’t even bare to say her name. I knew she was attracted to me and I didn’t do anything to stop it. I thought I could handle it. Handle her. I played with fire and I got burned. It wasn’t love, just meaningless sex with a stranger. Because that’s what she was to me, a stranger even though I had met her a few weeks earlier.
I realise now how much I still love my baby, my soul mate, my everything. She completes me. She dazzles me. When she touches me, I melt, when she kisses me I feel weak in the knees and when she makes love to me, that’s when I feel secure and safe. And loved. I crave for her touch right now, her soft hands on my flesh, stroking, caressing, massaging…
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whoa, when, why, and how did this happen are you gonna enlighten us to these questions????? It would certainly make for more posts.
WTF! Well the character twist certinly wasn’t expected. I think I can take anything but Bette falling into Helena’s arms for comfort. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
i always wanted to know bette’s reaction if tina was the one to cheat…interesting twist, i hope they will work it out ;) time for tina to chase bette now
Did I miss something, where did that come from? Well, what OneStorm1 said, Please don’t let her go to Helena please. PPS
WOW didn’t see this coming and wow was a good twist, like it. Im with BetteAndTinaForever let see Tina go after Bette and win her back. Please post soon, thanks!
wow, was so used to all the b+t loving this took me by complete surprise. it’s good? to see i’m not the only one who wonders what it would be like if the situation had been reversed. i’ve actually been forming the story in my head, just haven’t had time to type it out. very nice, can’t wait to see how your story progresses!
Well like everyone has said what a twist and I sure did not see that coming.. But I LOVE !! great twist to a already excellent story.. please post soon
OMG… you did not just do that, did you?! WOW. talk about a plot twist. I’m going to hope that you are gentle with our T/B hearts…we love our couple together and happy! wow. pps
A new chaser chasing a new chasee. Looking forward to seeing how Tina goes about chasing Bette.
oh shit… i go away for the weekend and back to this… i’m glad there is more to read… on to the next chapter
Ouch that was painful. But it’s interesting to see Tina as the first one to cheat. I like the idea of Tina having to chase Bette this time.
Hey ML, Wowwee! What a turnaround! Awesome to think that all of the love that Bette and Tina shared; everythign that they when through to be together has just casually been thrown away by Tina. What is the mysterious woman that she lost everything for. Was it a case of the seven year itch. Something that demanded to be scratched; a moment of idiocy an lunacy or something more derisive. Now Tina seems to have realized her mistake and needs to make amends woith Bette. Problem is that Bette is in no mind to listen to her. I do hope that this pair can move forward and sort out their relationship. Please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
omfg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the twist in their story, wasn’t expecting it at all. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Wow now I didnt expect this and loved it M!!!!
Loved it!! Great twist Milady. But why do I always feel so nervous when Bette and/or Tina have a fight and then take off in their car??? Please take care of them – no accidents ok. Deal? Deal.
OMFG what a twist, i felt the emotion jumping off the page. I loved it. Now we get to see Tina chasing after Bette. Can’t wait to read that
Wasn’t expecting that. Good twist though. Let’s see if Tina can win her back. PPS!!
WOW, what a twist. I love it! Let the Chase II begin.
I knew Tina was the cheater this time. I like the new twist. I hope you explain why T betrayed Bette. whatever the reason, Bette needs to make T sweat and not give in so easy…..pps
Well Milady, you are just full of surprises. Didn’t see that evil little twist coming, but I’m anxious to follow where you’re going.
Wow, theirs a giant twist. I like looking at this from a different view. Hopefully Tina will have better luck at getting Bette back than actually happened.