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The Chase – chapter 17
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In her office, Bette stood up and paced back and forth, trying to control her anger and pain all at the same time. Suddenly, she grabbed her purse and her car keys and decided to get the hell out of here. She needed to go for a drive…
«James ? JAMES? Where the fuck are you?», Bette yelled, looking around.
The door opened and James walked right in. «Where the fuck where you ? The phone have been ringing off the hook…», she lied. «Do you think I pay you to go outside for a walk ?», she added.
«Sorry, I was just throwing the flowers away like you asked me to…», he explained.
«I’m leaving and I don’t know when I’ll be back», she announced.
«But you have an appointment with Mr Crane in an hour!», James reminded her. Bette sighed angrily and looked at him. «Just tell him that a plane crashed into my car or that I fell off the Golden Bridge, I don’t fucking care… Am I being clear, James?», she asked in an icy tone.
James knew better than to argue with her. «I understand…», he said.
«Good…», she turned around and headed for the door. «Bette?», James said.
She froze with her hand on the handle. «Yeah?»
«I’m really sorry…», he just told her.
Bette closed her eyes, fighting back the tears. «Thanks…», she said as she left. She walked to her car and opened the door. Once inside, she began crying. The tears were coming down her cheeks and she didn’t know how to stop them. She hurt everywhere, in her body, in her heart, in her soul… She cried for a few minutes and then she started the car. She put it in reverse and hit the gas. Suddenly, she heard a light boom…
«What the fuck», she thought as she looked in her rear view mirror. She noticed a red car behind hers… She opened the door and stepped out, ready to give some serious shit to the person who was at the wrong place at the wrong time. Her heart sank when she recognized Tina’s car…
«What the fuck are you doing here?», she asked as Tina got out. She was mad as hell at Tina, but she felt herself burning with desire at the mere sight of her. And that made her even madder…
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whoa, when, why, and how did this happen are you gonna enlighten us to these questions????? It would certainly make for more posts.
WTF! Well the character twist certinly wasn’t expected. I think I can take anything but Bette falling into Helena’s arms for comfort. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
i always wanted to know bette’s reaction if tina was the one to cheat…interesting twist, i hope they will work it out ;) time for tina to chase bette now
Did I miss something, where did that come from? Well, what OneStorm1 said, Please don’t let her go to Helena please. PPS
WOW didn’t see this coming and wow was a good twist, like it. Im with BetteAndTinaForever let see Tina go after Bette and win her back. Please post soon, thanks!
wow, was so used to all the b+t loving this took me by complete surprise. it’s good? to see i’m not the only one who wonders what it would be like if the situation had been reversed. i’ve actually been forming the story in my head, just haven’t had time to type it out. very nice, can’t wait to see how your story progresses!
Well like everyone has said what a twist and I sure did not see that coming.. But I LOVE !! great twist to a already excellent story.. please post soon
OMG… you did not just do that, did you?! WOW. talk about a plot twist. I’m going to hope that you are gentle with our T/B hearts…we love our couple together and happy! wow. pps
A new chaser chasing a new chasee. Looking forward to seeing how Tina goes about chasing Bette.
oh shit… i go away for the weekend and back to this… i’m glad there is more to read… on to the next chapter
Ouch that was painful. But it’s interesting to see Tina as the first one to cheat. I like the idea of Tina having to chase Bette this time.
Hey ML, Wowwee! What a turnaround! Awesome to think that all of the love that Bette and Tina shared; everythign that they when through to be together has just casually been thrown away by Tina. What is the mysterious woman that she lost everything for. Was it a case of the seven year itch. Something that demanded to be scratched; a moment of idiocy an lunacy or something more derisive. Now Tina seems to have realized her mistake and needs to make amends woith Bette. Problem is that Bette is in no mind to listen to her. I do hope that this pair can move forward and sort out their relationship. Please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
omfg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the twist in their story, wasn’t expecting it at all. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Wow now I didnt expect this and loved it M!!!!
Loved it!! Great twist Milady. But why do I always feel so nervous when Bette and/or Tina have a fight and then take off in their car??? Please take care of them – no accidents ok. Deal? Deal.
OMFG what a twist, i felt the emotion jumping off the page. I loved it. Now we get to see Tina chasing after Bette. Can’t wait to read that
Wasn’t expecting that. Good twist though. Let’s see if Tina can win her back. PPS!!
WOW, what a twist. I love it! Let the Chase II begin.
I knew Tina was the cheater this time. I like the new twist. I hope you explain why T betrayed Bette. whatever the reason, Bette needs to make T sweat and not give in so easy…..pps
Well Milady, you are just full of surprises. Didn’t see that evil little twist coming, but I’m anxious to follow where you’re going.
Wow, theirs a giant twist. I like looking at this from a different view. Hopefully Tina will have better luck at getting Bette back than actually happened.