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The End
“Put down … the knife,” Bette growled, not even glancing back over to her wife. All of her attention was on Sophia, and stopping any other possible threats. She was angry and strong and passionate about Tina’s safety. “Put. Down. The fucking. Knife.”
Immediately, Sophia held the knife to her own throat, and when she saw Bette look over to her wife instead of showing concern, her lips trembled. Her eyes watered although she could hold in her tears, and her nose was filled with a prickling sensation that she had kept down for years. She was hurting so terribly, and yet she was so certain she’d been cured, but Bette didn’t care about her at all.
When Bette noticed a flinch of weakness, she snatched the knife from the girl’s hand and leapt onto the bed to untie her wife. It all happened so quickly that Sophia’s emotional reaction didn’t allow her to catch the transfer before it was over.
Bette had freed Tina, and it was as if everything had changed. Sophia felt as if the universe were trying to tell her that Bette and that stranger were meant to be together instead of Bette and her. The voices that often kept themselves quiet in the back of her mind began mumbling to her with a sort of static volume that drove her to the brink of insanity. Just watching Bette and Tina embrace one another in the single blink of an eye was enough to set her off again.
Screaming frantically, Sophia leapt onto Tina, hitting and pushing.
“You … crazy bitch …” Tina screamed back, both of them falling to the floor as Bette tried pulling them apart. At first, Tina thought it was all some stunt to get Bette’s attention all over again, but when she saw that fire in the girl’s eyes, she realized just how real it was for Sophia. They would each fight to the death for Bette – one her wife, and one her stalker.
Never having wound back to punch a person in her life, Tina was frightened, but at the same time determined. Sophia had slapped and scratched her more times than she cared to count, and as Tina gained some leverage leaning over the young woman, her arm came back, and then hit into the floor. Sophia had been too fast, and Tina was inexperienced. She groaned and re-established her position before winding her hand back again while Sophia pushed at her throat, and in one single movement, Tina finally hit her.
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Holy fuck, that crazy bitch, how the fuck did she know they are going. Lol, someone need to watch her and lock her in forever lol. Thanks for the story and hope to see you soon
Lol no lock and key…tina should have just put her out of her misery cuz the only good crazy bitch is a dead crazy bitch lord what a rollercoaster.
A very suspenseful story that kept us on the edge of our seats! Great story to welcome in the new site. I am a huge fan and have read everything you have written. I hope we will have a new story from you very soon. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and unique perspectives with your loyal readers.!
Wow GR, you certainly have proven that you can do almost every genre of writing there is out there. I can totally see this as a movie honestly. It’s that good!
I’m not normally one for thrillers and such but you drew me in right from the beginning and I just couldn’t leave, even when it started to get scary!
Thanks so much for this brilliant piece of work, I love how you delved into the mind of Sophia as well as the reactions and feelings of Bette and Tina!
Wow. This ending really surprised me!
You’re great twist at the end.
I thought that the end will be happy. the stalker now changed?
so you can continue what I’m waiting :-)
Oh GR even at the end of the story there is still suspense going! What a thrill end!
Surprising end,amazing.Thank you and please continue writing.
Spooky, thanks enjoyed it
when I see the end of this story, I nearly shout out “WHAT” in the middle of the night……….
You are good at writing a suspense story just like any other genre you already wrote!!!
hope can see ur stories soon, and thank u!!
great story
great story. I love most of your stories.
That was certainly a creepy ending. Thanks!
Haha! okay, that was fun. I could almost hear the screechy violin music from Psycho right at the end. Thanks for the ride, sorry it’s over. Guess I’ll get back in line and reread the whole thing in one sitting. I know you are expanding your styles and genres, but a really juicy and dark kink, heavy on the discipline, would really, really make my day, month, year…so, pretty please!?
Thanks for that delicious spooky story. An amazing twist in the end. I was not expecting that! Can we see a sequel with Schizo Sophia back to torment Tina and Bette?
What a crazy ending to a great story! Creeptastic! Can’t wait to read your next story and I’m with BenMac on her request.w
WHAT, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Great ending! Thanks for sharing…I am also with BenMac on her request :)
OMG that’s one crazy bitch..
She is so creepy!
LOVED EACH CHAPTER.
MY CONGRATULATIONS GRINDRIGHT.
What a twist at the end. Wasn’t expecting that. What an awesome story. Love the twists and the suspense. Can’t wait for more stories.
OMG!! *****!!!
What a story!!
Thanks GR! I don’t really like the end :-/ but this another great story from you! Thanks again for sharing! :-)
I’ve just read the stories you wrote that were still new to me and reread the others. And I just want to say that I love them all! An incredible array of genres, styles and plots. Thank you for your amazing contribution to this site!
This was so good.. And I loved how you ended it.. The ultimate cliffhanger… I would love to see what could or would happen next