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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Five

    Story written on November 8, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    The sights of LA rushing past her.

    The rest of the journey passed in relative silence. Tina knew that Bette kept looking at her out of the corner of her eye but for some reason she couldn’t quite meet her eye. The anticipation of what was about to happen was almost too much for Tina. She imagined what it would be like, to run her hand down Bette’s skin, to feel her heartbeat with nothing separating them. A tiny shiver went down her spine at the idea of seeing Bette naked for the first time.

    When they pulled up outside Bette’s house Bette sprinted around to Tina’s side of the car so that she could open the door for her. The smile on Bette’s face was irrepressible. They were finally going to get what they both wanted. As Bette took her hand to lead her up towards the front door Tina thought about the previous few months that had led to this moment. Her split with Eric had been painful, and made even worse when he had found out that Tina was leaving him for Bette. As much as Tina regretted hurting him she knew that she wouldn’t be happy unless she was with Bette, she would always be thinking about the chance that she had to make something of her life with Bette.

    The first few dates had been tentative. Bette seemed almost as nervous as she was. To begin with they kept the conversation to easy topics, their jobs, their friends, what they liked to do in their free time, then one night Bette changed all of that. They were standing in Tina’s kitchen preparing to go out for dinner. Bette had looked at her and said that she didn’t really feel like going out and would it be OK if they stayed in. Tina, of course, agreed, wanting to do anything that made Bette happy.

    “I think that I should tell you something.” started Bette, hesitantly.

    “You know that I am now already thinking the worst.” replied Tina, trying to lighten the suddenly oppressive atmosphere.

    “No, it’s nothing like that. The complete opposite really.”

    “OK, don’t keep me in suspense.”

    “Well, I’ve really loved the past few weeks. Spending time with you, it’s given me something else to think about instead of the gallery. I’ve never really had that before. It’s always been work that’s been at the top of my agenda and now….this is kind of embarrassing but, you’re the first thing that I think of when I wake up in the morning and the last thing that I think of at night. So, I guess, what I’m trying to say is that, I really want to try and make this work, if you’ll have me.”

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    2. What I wouldn’t give to see this on the screen. Excellent chapter, a nice respite from the heartbreaking but equally great previous ones. Thank you for posting.

    3. Wow, this story is a roller coaster and this is the slow build up the steep hill. And I know that very soon you are going to plung us down the steep slope into hell, pure and simple. But for now thankyou this was a nice delay. Having a hint of what is yet to come is made easier by these precious pages of love and surrender….interdispersed with the harsh reality of where you started this story makes this a lot easier to read. Oh, and thankyou!!

    4. OMG, I don’t know if I’m going to be able to handle, Tina making love to Bette the first time. I’m still trying to catch my breath. DAmn one of these days I’ll learn after the first few lines not to read these at work.

    5. Ditto what honda90 said. The allure of that once beautiful moment in time to trap us in a false sense of contentment..but oh so wonderfully done. Thanks!

    8. You really are building this up, I’m getting nervous of what you have in store for us, will our bums be sore when you pull the rug from under us. I really like this story. Thank you.

    9. Ahh, happier times. I run out of nice things to say, so I’ll go with a tried-and-trusted comment, and please believe that I’m saying it with proper sincerity. “Nicely done, post soon please.” Really, please do. Cheers!

    11. You write so beautiful citygirl. This story is tragically beautiful. It touches my heart. Love this anvil that Tina says: “Sometimes I think I’m too happy, that I’m going to pay for it somewhere down the line.” Your very clever!! Thanks for posting!

    12. Is my first comment on this beautiful story the NC-17 chapter? I feel so naughty. I’m almost dreading what’s next for Tina, but what the hell. Great story, great chapter, and please post soon.

    13. Who needs experience when love and lust are in place? I seem to recall a corny old song about “doin’ what comes naturally”. Not that Tina’s a hayseed or anything. You go, girl.

    20. Your stories always break my heart but I just can’t not read them. They are absolutely amazing! Maybe you will give us an ending where our girls are together. ; )

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