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The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Five
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In the back of Tina’s mind there was a voice that told her that she couldn’t wait any longer. She took Bette’s hand within her own and brought it down to the juncture where leg meets hip. She hoped that Bette would take a hint so that she didn’t have to explain what it was that she wanted, and all that she wanted was Bette inside of her. Fortunately Bette only had one thing in her mind. She moved her hand to run across the coarse hairs at Tina’s centre, moving down and then pressing her middle finger down into Tina’s moist folds. All the breath was pushed from her body as she felt Bette so close to her clit.
Bette looked up and saw that Tina’s eyes were closed tight. She was just waiting for Bette to please her, and Bette knew that she was ready. Bette focused the attentions of her mouth onto Tina’s breasts while her fingers sank deeper, then she was inside of Tina. The moan of appreciation that came from Tina gave Bette all the encouragement that she needed to carry on. Bette entered her with two fingers, beginning a rhythm that Tina began to match with her hips, the grunts that were emanating from Tina telling Bette that she was doing the right thing. Bette could feel Tina’s nails digging into her back as Tina tried to bring them closer together. The pain being completely overwhelmed by the utter pleasure of being entwined with Tina.
As Bette felt Tina’s thighs begin to shake she moved her thumb up to Tina’s clit, moving fast, trying to bring a powerful orgasm on to Tina. One that she would remember for the rest of her life. Then it began to happen, Tina’s breath became more and more shallow as she tried to get air into her depleted lungs. Then she seemed to stop breathing all together as Bette felt Tina’s whole body begin to shake. Bette stroked Tina’s clit more furiously to prolong her orgasm for as long as possible. Soon Tina’s whole body was completely spent of energy as Bette collapse on top of her, both of them gasping for breath.
Tina held onto Bette, gaining comfort from the weight of her body. She felt enclosed by Bette, completely safe from harm as she recovered from the most powerful orgasm that she could ever remember having. Tina felt overwhelmed with love for the woman that was holding her, so she made a decision that tonight she should be completely honest and tell Bette her true feelings. Tina held Bette close and rolled them over so that she was now lying on top of Bette.
“Nice move.” laughed Bette.
“I think that I need to tell you something.” said Tina, quietly.
“What?” asked Bette, wondering if she had hurt Tina in anyway.
“Don’t worry so much. I just thought that I should tell you that…”
“What baby, you can tell me anything. You know that, right?”
“I’m falling in love with you.” said Tina, burying her head into Bette’s shoulder.
“I love you too.” whispered Bette, in reply.
“You do?” asked Tina, looking up at Bette.
“Yeah, pretty much since that first night at the gallery.”
“You don’t seem the sort to believe in love at first sight.”
“I wasn’t, but you changed all of that.”
“Would you like me to show you how much I love you?” asked Tina, her voice regaining the edge of lust that made Bette love her even more.
“You have no idea.”
Tina leant down and plunged her tongue into Bette’s mouth, her hands returning to Bette’s breasts, kneading the flesh, making Bette ready for the first time that Tina would be inside of another woman.
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alrighty then, Trying to catch my breath here citygirl, Love your writing
What I wouldn’t give to see this on the screen. Excellent chapter, a nice respite from the heartbreaking but equally great previous ones. Thank you for posting.
Wow, this story is a roller coaster and this is the slow build up the steep hill. And I know that very soon you are going to plung us down the steep slope into hell, pure and simple. But for now thankyou this was a nice delay. Having a hint of what is yet to come is made easier by these precious pages of love and surrender….interdispersed with the harsh reality of where you started this story makes this a lot easier to read. Oh, and thankyou!!
OMG, I don’t know if I’m going to be able to handle, Tina making love to Bette the first time. I’m still trying to catch my breath. DAmn one of these days I’ll learn after the first few lines not to read these at work.
Ditto what honda90 said. The allure of that once beautiful moment in time to trap us in a false sense of contentment..but oh so wonderfully done. Thanks!
Wow, great chapter mate! Enjoy your weekend!!
I’m ignoring the harsh truth that I know is coming, for now, and concentrating on just how incredibly amazing this was…
You really are building this up, I’m getting nervous of what you have in store for us, will our bums be sore when you pull the rug from under us. I really like this story. Thank you.
Ahh, happier times. I run out of nice things to say, so I’ll go with a tried-and-trusted comment, and please believe that I’m saying it with proper sincerity. “Nicely done, post soon please.” Really, please do. Cheers!
I can’t keep reading these stories at work…ya’ll are killing me…amazing City….amazing!
You write so beautiful citygirl. This story is tragically beautiful. It touches my heart. Love this anvil that Tina says: “Sometimes I think I’m too happy, that I’m going to pay for it somewhere down the line.” Your very clever!! Thanks for posting!
Is my first comment on this beautiful story the NC-17 chapter? I feel so naughty. I’m almost dreading what’s next for Tina, but what the hell. Great story, great chapter, and please post soon.
Who needs experience when love and lust are in place? I seem to recall a corny old song about “doin’ what comes naturally”. Not that Tina’s a hayseed or anything. You go, girl.
finding the woman of your dreams. did that this year. how cool is that. thanks
So nice to return from a vacation have your writing to read extending the joy just a little bit longer. : )
I wish that your story would remain this content and happy. You always end up breaking my heart and leaving our girls without the other.
awesome- love your story.
great job with this story, and a great chapter, but i think it just got a lot hotter in here!!!
Awesome!!
Your stories always break my heart but I just can’t not read them. They are absolutely amazing! Maybe you will give us an ending where our girls are together. ; )
Damn that was hot and awesome love it. Please post soon please, thanks!