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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Five

    Story written on November 8, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    The sights of LA rushing past her.

    “Bette, I can’t imagine anything that I would want more that to make it with you.” said Tina, tears of joy forming in her eyes.

    Tina remembered kissing Bette that night for hours. The sexual tension building between them with every passing of a tongue over the other, with every touch of bare skin, with every passing minute. Tina had made Bette spend the night in her bed. Bette fought against it, saying that she would never be able to keep her hands off Tina if they slept in the same bed, but somehow they had both managed it, and now here they were, standing by Bette’s front door, with no intentions of keeping their hands off each other, all night.

    Bette turned to unlock the door but instead of doing so she turned around and looked at Tina. She didn’t say anything but leaned in and kissed Tina, a soft warm kiss that conveyed the love that Bette had began to feel build within her for Tina. When Tina started to kiss her back Bette pulled away. If they starting kissing here then they were going to give the neighbours a show that they wouldn’t forget in a long time. Bette turned back towards the door but was distracted again by a gentle hand reaching around from behind her, the hand ran up her stomach towards her breast. Once her breast was captured within Tina’s hand she couldn’t control the gasp that came from her mouth. Now if she could only get the door open.

    Eventually, and Bette didn’t know how, they found themselves in her living room. Tina moved closer and Bette took her in her arms. She could feel Tina shaking slightly, and holding onto her slightly harder than normal. The stirring of passion that they both felt on the doorstep being replaced with the knowledge of the implications of what they were about to do. Bette held Tina, whispering words that she would hope keep her fears at bay. For Bette there was nothing to be scared of, she had never been so sure of anything in her life. For her there was only one step to take after this and that was to tell Tina that she was in love with her, and maybe Bette would tell her that tonight.

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    2. What I wouldn’t give to see this on the screen. Excellent chapter, a nice respite from the heartbreaking but equally great previous ones. Thank you for posting.

    3. Wow, this story is a roller coaster and this is the slow build up the steep hill. And I know that very soon you are going to plung us down the steep slope into hell, pure and simple. But for now thankyou this was a nice delay. Having a hint of what is yet to come is made easier by these precious pages of love and surrender….interdispersed with the harsh reality of where you started this story makes this a lot easier to read. Oh, and thankyou!!

    4. OMG, I don’t know if I’m going to be able to handle, Tina making love to Bette the first time. I’m still trying to catch my breath. DAmn one of these days I’ll learn after the first few lines not to read these at work.

    5. Ditto what honda90 said. The allure of that once beautiful moment in time to trap us in a false sense of contentment..but oh so wonderfully done. Thanks!

    8. You really are building this up, I’m getting nervous of what you have in store for us, will our bums be sore when you pull the rug from under us. I really like this story. Thank you.

    9. Ahh, happier times. I run out of nice things to say, so I’ll go with a tried-and-trusted comment, and please believe that I’m saying it with proper sincerity. “Nicely done, post soon please.” Really, please do. Cheers!

    11. You write so beautiful citygirl. This story is tragically beautiful. It touches my heart. Love this anvil that Tina says: “Sometimes I think I’m too happy, that I’m going to pay for it somewhere down the line.” Your very clever!! Thanks for posting!

    12. Is my first comment on this beautiful story the NC-17 chapter? I feel so naughty. I’m almost dreading what’s next for Tina, but what the hell. Great story, great chapter, and please post soon.

    13. Who needs experience when love and lust are in place? I seem to recall a corny old song about “doin’ what comes naturally”. Not that Tina’s a hayseed or anything. You go, girl.

    20. Your stories always break my heart but I just can’t not read them. They are absolutely amazing! Maybe you will give us an ending where our girls are together. ; )

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