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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Five

    Story written on November 8, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    The sights of LA rushing past her.

    Once free from her jeans Bette knelt on the floor, between Tina’s legs. She took one of Tina’s nipples within her mouth smoothing her tongue across the pebbled landscape and then taking the nipple between her teeth, biting down gently, getting the groan of desire that she wanted from Tina. Again Bette used her tactic of distraction, toying with both of Tina’s breast with her mouth while undoing Tina’s jeans, helping her lift her hips off the bed so that they could be completely removed. Bette took a deep breath in, she could smell Tina’s arousal, the scent permeating each one of her senses in turn. The sight of Tina just in a tiny black thong was almost to much for her mind to comprehend.

    “Lay down for me baby.” said Bette, so softly that Tina could hardly hear her.

    “I just want to look at you for a moment.” replied Tina, still trying to take in what was happening.

    “Are you OK?” said Bette, a slight trace of panic in her voice.

    “I just need my mind to catch up with my body.”

    “I need my mind to catch up with my heart.” confessed Bette, in a rare moment of vulnerability.

    “Kiss me Bette.”

    So that’s what Bette did. For a while that’s all they did. Hands roamed over new territory that begged to be explored but their main focus was on the kiss that sealed the burgeoning love that was between them. When Bette couldn’t stand any more she pulled away from Tina allowing her to back up onto the bed. Bette followed her, placing her body directly onto Tina, covering her, her hand reaching down to play with the scrap of material that was preventing Bette from getting everything that she wanted.

    “Do it Bette.” said Tina, directly into Bette’s ear.

    “Do what?” asked Bette, feigning ignorance.

    “Touch me.”

    Bette didn’t need to be told twice, she reached her hands underneath the thong and brought it down Tina’s legs, not daring to look at what she was revealing in case she lost total control. She could hear Tina sigh and she could feel Tina replying with actions of her own, taking Bette’s own thong within her grasp and pulling it away from her body, down her legs to be tossed to one side of the bed. Bette couldn’t believe that she was now naked with Tina in her bed. Tina couldn’t believe that she was naked with another woman, let alone one as beautiful as Bette.

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    2. What I wouldn’t give to see this on the screen. Excellent chapter, a nice respite from the heartbreaking but equally great previous ones. Thank you for posting.

    3. Wow, this story is a roller coaster and this is the slow build up the steep hill. And I know that very soon you are going to plung us down the steep slope into hell, pure and simple. But for now thankyou this was a nice delay. Having a hint of what is yet to come is made easier by these precious pages of love and surrender….interdispersed with the harsh reality of where you started this story makes this a lot easier to read. Oh, and thankyou!!

    4. OMG, I don’t know if I’m going to be able to handle, Tina making love to Bette the first time. I’m still trying to catch my breath. DAmn one of these days I’ll learn after the first few lines not to read these at work.

    5. Ditto what honda90 said. The allure of that once beautiful moment in time to trap us in a false sense of contentment..but oh so wonderfully done. Thanks!

    8. You really are building this up, I’m getting nervous of what you have in store for us, will our bums be sore when you pull the rug from under us. I really like this story. Thank you.

    9. Ahh, happier times. I run out of nice things to say, so I’ll go with a tried-and-trusted comment, and please believe that I’m saying it with proper sincerity. “Nicely done, post soon please.” Really, please do. Cheers!

    11. You write so beautiful citygirl. This story is tragically beautiful. It touches my heart. Love this anvil that Tina says: “Sometimes I think I’m too happy, that I’m going to pay for it somewhere down the line.” Your very clever!! Thanks for posting!

    12. Is my first comment on this beautiful story the NC-17 chapter? I feel so naughty. I’m almost dreading what’s next for Tina, but what the hell. Great story, great chapter, and please post soon.

    13. Who needs experience when love and lust are in place? I seem to recall a corny old song about “doin’ what comes naturally”. Not that Tina’s a hayseed or anything. You go, girl.

    20. Your stories always break my heart but I just can’t not read them. They are absolutely amazing! Maybe you will give us an ending where our girls are together. ; )

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