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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Five

    Story written on November 8, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    The sights of LA rushing past her.

    Tina held the straps in her hands, bringing them down Bette’s arms. Then the moment that she never thought would happen. Bette’s breasts fell lose while Tina cast the bra on the floor. She ran her hands back up Bette’s stomach, slowing down as she got closer and closer to her target. When she reached the underside of Bette’s breast she took a sharp intake of breath, the tenderness of the skin being nothing like she had ever touched before. Tina watched as Bette’s nipples grew in size, getting harder as her fingers got nearer. Tina wanted to take her time, to study Bette’s reaction as she touched her, but it was too good. Tina reached out her thumb and ran it across the tip of Bette’s nipple. She looked up sharply as she heard the sigh of pleasure that came from Bette.

    “So you like that?”

    “Yeah.” said Bette, almost shyly, knowing that this was going to be the first of many things that she was going to give away tonight.

    “I never imagine that it would be this…” started Tina, the words catching in her throat.

    “It never would be what?”

    “I never imagined that you would be this beautiful.”

    “Thank you.” smiled Bette.

    “Don’t thank me yet.” smirked Tina, gaining in confidence.

    Bette response to this was to turn Tina around so that the back of her legs were against the bed. She began to kiss Tina again, thinking that she would never be able to get enough. Her hands snaking around Tina’s back to level the playing field. Tina was way too caught up in the kiss to realise that she was being undressed further until she felt Bette’s bare breasts against her own. At that point Tina thought that she had died and gone to heaven. Then she felt Bette push forward, ever so slightly, and she found herself sat on the bed, at eye level with the button of Bette’s jeans. Tina felt Bette lift her head so that they could continue the kiss that they had been sharing, deeper and deeper she felt herself falling. Her hands on Bette’s waist but moving forward so that she could pop open the button of Bette’s jeans, and then she lowered the zipper, reaching inside so that she could feel the sharp angle of Bette’s hipbone. As she pushed further in Bette’s jeans started to fall, easing off her hips as Tina extricated her mouth from Bette’s so that she could start to kiss her stomach and then further down as she tugged on Bette’s jeans so that they fell to the floor.

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    2. What I wouldn’t give to see this on the screen. Excellent chapter, a nice respite from the heartbreaking but equally great previous ones. Thank you for posting.

    3. Wow, this story is a roller coaster and this is the slow build up the steep hill. And I know that very soon you are going to plung us down the steep slope into hell, pure and simple. But for now thankyou this was a nice delay. Having a hint of what is yet to come is made easier by these precious pages of love and surrender….interdispersed with the harsh reality of where you started this story makes this a lot easier to read. Oh, and thankyou!!

    4. OMG, I don’t know if I’m going to be able to handle, Tina making love to Bette the first time. I’m still trying to catch my breath. DAmn one of these days I’ll learn after the first few lines not to read these at work.

    5. Ditto what honda90 said. The allure of that once beautiful moment in time to trap us in a false sense of contentment..but oh so wonderfully done. Thanks!

    8. You really are building this up, I’m getting nervous of what you have in store for us, will our bums be sore when you pull the rug from under us. I really like this story. Thank you.

    9. Ahh, happier times. I run out of nice things to say, so I’ll go with a tried-and-trusted comment, and please believe that I’m saying it with proper sincerity. “Nicely done, post soon please.” Really, please do. Cheers!

    11. You write so beautiful citygirl. This story is tragically beautiful. It touches my heart. Love this anvil that Tina says: “Sometimes I think I’m too happy, that I’m going to pay for it somewhere down the line.” Your very clever!! Thanks for posting!

    12. Is my first comment on this beautiful story the NC-17 chapter? I feel so naughty. I’m almost dreading what’s next for Tina, but what the hell. Great story, great chapter, and please post soon.

    13. Who needs experience when love and lust are in place? I seem to recall a corny old song about “doin’ what comes naturally”. Not that Tina’s a hayseed or anything. You go, girl.

    20. Your stories always break my heart but I just can’t not read them. They are absolutely amazing! Maybe you will give us an ending where our girls are together. ; )

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