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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter One

    Story written on November 1, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    It all felt like a lifetime ago now.

    “Do you need to? All you need to know is that in thirty minute we’re going to be in a cab going…somewhere. Where is the only decision that you have to make.”

    “If only life were that simple.”

    “Well tonight, it is that simple.”

    How much courage would she need? There was plenty where that last drink had come from. There was plenty still resting in that glass. Her thoughts moved to the idea of another woman’s hands on her body. How long had it been? A long time since a man, even longer since a woman and that woman wasn’t even her lover. They must have been lovers but there was only one woman who she regarded as the one that truly loved her. Was she ready? Was it the drink talking? Then she remembered that recently it was always the drink that was talking. She was never without it.

    Her eyes followed the bartenders movements behind the bar. It would probably be a good idea to find out her name before this went any further. Maybe that should remain part of the mystery, part of the adventure. She knew that she would never fall in love again so what was the point of finding out a name if she was never going to use it after tonight, or maybe tomorrow morning. She watched as the bartender say something to someone. She guessed it was the person who was going to finish off her shift for her. The woman laughed, ruefully, at herself. Someone was making their excuses so that she could take them home for a night of…she wasn’t quite sure but she knew that she was going to be revealing herself to a stranger. Maybe that was better, that way there was no judgement involved. Just two women making the best of it.

    “Shall we go?”

    “Where to?”

    “Haven’t you decided yet? Yours or mine, you make the decision.”

    “OK, mine. I think it’s better if we go to mine.” said the blonde, still not sure about what she was doing.

    The blonde stumbled slightly as she got up off of her bar stool. She felt a steadying hand on her arm. The shock of having someone to hold her up, no matter how momentarily, coursed through her. The images of her lover, holding her hand, pushing her onwards and upwards, raced through her mind. How she missed that, the idea of having someone there to hold her.

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    4. Wow, Tina was pretty dispicable and she seems to have come to a full realization of that. It seems a case of reaping what we sow. We all fuck up, we all at some time or other behave less than admirably. But Tina, seems to have gotten stuck in berating herself as she had gotten stuck in punishing Bette. Unless this is a stage she must go through before she can work on correcting her faults, this is not the path to enlightenment.

    5. Slurp! You’ve got me – I’ve swallowed the hook, line and sinker with this first chapter of yours…your writing is so smooth…excellently written and very dramatic. You can reach out and touch the angst in Tina. She is lost in a very dark world right now. The bartender is a very brave soul indeed! Maybe the bartender can shed some light into Tina’s darkness. More please!

    6. Yay another Fic CG. You always make me happy and your fics are the best. My girl Tina in this state is painful to read,but life is full of loss and tragedy, and her state of mind is not healthy. It saddens me,but I hope she works hards to get her life together. My guess is that her virtual divorce is Tibette, and the real one is with henry. Well i love the start. So u MUST Continue my lady.

    7. what a fabulous start…i guessed it was tina…is bette the bartebder? or bette is the ex-lover? so many questions, can’t wait to read more to get answers

    9. Seems like Tina has fallen on some hard times. I can guess that the one true love of her life was/is Bette. Is there any chance of Bette riding in on her white horse to help rebuild Tina into the loving woman she once was?

    10. Hi citygirl, you have my full attention!!!! these are the words that made it for me “Two divorces, one virtual, one real. The virtual one hurt more than the real one.” I have so many questions i guess i will have to wait and read like everybody else, i look forward to the next 100 chapters!!!!

    11. Wow…so many questions…where’s Angelica? Where’s Bette? Where’s the girls? Wiil Tina come back from this? How did it get this bad? Where do babies come from? Why is the sky blue? lol…okay I got carried away…but you know you have alot of questions to answer…so keep posting.

    12. I agree this is a very WOW beginning – and full of questions about what brought Tina to this point? and who is our mysterious bartender going to be? This is great and I’m waiting for more just like all the other fans.

    17. You are a sneak, having yet another story up your sleeve! I popped on at work and saw your name, couldn’t wait until I got home to read! Great start, and very interested to see where it goes, I had the feeling from the beginning it would be Tina, and how right you are – A fevered and fast fall – very much looking forward to the who, how, why, what’s of the story!

    23. I haven’t read anything with such sexual tension, yet drenched in sadness since “A Night in the D” by luvrgirl. This is the kind of story I’ve been waiting to read for quite some time. I tried putting anyone in the characters’ shoes but I kept seeing and hearing Tina and Bette. Then I thought maybe Helena or even Shane could be the bartender. I’m definitely waiting for the next chapter!

    25. Wow, you def have my attention, and I will go with your comments about it “will be better”…pls cause this seems and feels very painful at the moment…tks for this new journey…tibette forever…

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