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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter One

    Story written on November 1, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    It all felt like a lifetime ago now.

    “Are you OK?” asked the bartender, a gentleness in her voice.

    “I think I might be a little drunk.” confessed the blonde.

    “Maybe just a little.”

    The cold night are came as a surprise to both of them. The blonde gave a tiny shiver as they waited to a cab to pull up, she remembered how this wasn’t an LA night. She was much further north now. She felt an arm around her waist, pulling her closer to the woman that was going to accompany her on this night, and into the morning. When did she get this desperate? They hadn’t even kissed, barely even talked and yet she was still going to feel something, anything with this woman.

    As they stepped into the cab the warm air of the heater provided another contrast. She looked out of the corner of her eye, trying to study the woman that she was going to have sex with. It was so basic. It was just sex, a reason to feel alive again. If she kept telling herself this then maybe it would be true. When was the last time she had felt that way? Maybe when she was still married, maybe even before that, maybe never. No, that couldn’t be true, she vaguely remembered a time when she felt more alive that anyone ever had. The first adrenaline shot of love, the promise of making it last forever. That’s when she had last felt like living.

    “You’re very quiet.” said the bartender softly.

    “I have a lot to think about.”

    “Maybe you need to give your brain a break.”

    “That’s the plan.”

    “Is that all I am to you?”

    “Do you want to be something more? If you do it’s probably better that this doesn’t go any further.”

    “No. I can live with where I am right now.”

    “Can you?” asked the blonde, amazed.

    “Yes, why can’t you?”

    “No.”

    There was no more conversation after that, just a short ride to the blonde’s apartment. The blonde paid the cab driver, it was the least that she could do. They both turned and walked up the steps to the front door. The blonde suddenly felt that same arm that had steadied her pull her back.

    “Before we go in, tell me something.”

    “What?” asked the blonde, impatient to get inside.

    “Your name.”

    “Tina.” she said, opening the door, pulling her companion into the hallway.

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    4. Wow, Tina was pretty dispicable and she seems to have come to a full realization of that. It seems a case of reaping what we sow. We all fuck up, we all at some time or other behave less than admirably. But Tina, seems to have gotten stuck in berating herself as she had gotten stuck in punishing Bette. Unless this is a stage she must go through before she can work on correcting her faults, this is not the path to enlightenment.

    5. Slurp! You’ve got me – I’ve swallowed the hook, line and sinker with this first chapter of yours…your writing is so smooth…excellently written and very dramatic. You can reach out and touch the angst in Tina. She is lost in a very dark world right now. The bartender is a very brave soul indeed! Maybe the bartender can shed some light into Tina’s darkness. More please!

    6. Yay another Fic CG. You always make me happy and your fics are the best. My girl Tina in this state is painful to read,but life is full of loss and tragedy, and her state of mind is not healthy. It saddens me,but I hope she works hards to get her life together. My guess is that her virtual divorce is Tibette, and the real one is with henry. Well i love the start. So u MUST Continue my lady.

    7. what a fabulous start…i guessed it was tina…is bette the bartebder? or bette is the ex-lover? so many questions, can’t wait to read more to get answers

    9. Seems like Tina has fallen on some hard times. I can guess that the one true love of her life was/is Bette. Is there any chance of Bette riding in on her white horse to help rebuild Tina into the loving woman she once was?

    10. Hi citygirl, you have my full attention!!!! these are the words that made it for me “Two divorces, one virtual, one real. The virtual one hurt more than the real one.” I have so many questions i guess i will have to wait and read like everybody else, i look forward to the next 100 chapters!!!!

    11. Wow…so many questions…where’s Angelica? Where’s Bette? Where’s the girls? Wiil Tina come back from this? How did it get this bad? Where do babies come from? Why is the sky blue? lol…okay I got carried away…but you know you have alot of questions to answer…so keep posting.

    12. I agree this is a very WOW beginning – and full of questions about what brought Tina to this point? and who is our mysterious bartender going to be? This is great and I’m waiting for more just like all the other fans.

    17. You are a sneak, having yet another story up your sleeve! I popped on at work and saw your name, couldn’t wait until I got home to read! Great start, and very interested to see where it goes, I had the feeling from the beginning it would be Tina, and how right you are – A fevered and fast fall – very much looking forward to the who, how, why, what’s of the story!

    23. I haven’t read anything with such sexual tension, yet drenched in sadness since “A Night in the D” by luvrgirl. This is the kind of story I’ve been waiting to read for quite some time. I tried putting anyone in the characters’ shoes but I kept seeing and hearing Tina and Bette. Then I thought maybe Helena or even Shane could be the bartender. I’m definitely waiting for the next chapter!

    25. Wow, you def have my attention, and I will go with your comments about it “will be better”…pls cause this seems and feels very painful at the moment…tks for this new journey…tibette forever…

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