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The Journey 40
We pack up the car, that is throw everything in the boot and start to make our way home. Bette: “Tee, you OK?” Tina: “I’m OK, I just feel a little unwell.” Bette: And I am not entirely convinced but then Tina puts the window down for some fresh air. Bette: “Not anything you ate?” I enquire. Tina: “I feel nauseas but not like it’s from food. *****, Bette, pull over.” Bette: I pull over and before the car has come to a complete stop Tina has her seatbelt off and is out of the car throwing up. Bette: “Jesus, Tee are you OK?” I fumble around for some water so Tina can rinse her mouth out. I help her up and back into the car. She is sitting in passenger’s seat with the door open and her legs facing me as I kneel down in front of her. I brush her hair out of her face. “Anything I can do?” Tina: “Bette, please, just take me home. I need a shower and to sleep in our bed.” Bette: I look at Tina and she looks off colour. I lift her legs in as she slowly pulls her seat belt across. As it reaches where I am I pull it and click it in. We reach home and Tina looks better. I take a sleeping Bette: “Do you want me to run you a bubble bath?” Tina: “Babe, if it is OK with you I might just have a quick shower and get into bed.”
Bette: “I’ll get some towels.” Tina showered and made her way to the bedroom. I pull the blinds down and kneel beside her, holding her hand.
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(57 votes, average: 3.93 out of 5)
i’ve not commented before, just wanna let ya know that i love your story=)..great update as always!
great as usual, love it. please post soon
Loved it. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
An afternoon alone eh? looking forward to seeing how you – & they fill it! :-)
youre unstoppable today..lol..and im more than happy with that..lol..i hope Tina make her mind and trust Bette cuz Bette knows for who she belongs..ok can i wait for more today?..lol.thanks :o)
Ghee, you’ve been busy. I just caught up on the last couple of chapters. I like that they are communicating and processing. Even though its been a bit bumpy they seem to be heading in the right direction. At least I hope so. Oh, this is one of my favorite stories so thanks for posting a bunch of chapters recently.
Still loving this story.Communication is key.
Kit is great – there is no bullshit with her…only raw honesty. I’m really looking forward to the next post WINK WINK :o))
Is Tina sick or pregnant? I’m a bit worried…
just read the 3 last chapters, I’d like to send you un bouquet de roses, just to thank you for the beautiful story you give us.Thank you Unbeknown ;-)
so they’re alone uh? *wink wink* Hehe, great as always, I love how Kit can chew bet a new one and Bette is taking it like a woman instead of going balistic…please post soon :o)
Yeah Bette amke love to me..LOL NC17, NC17!!!!!! Nice and slow and passionate and then nice and ruff!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!! POST SOON!!!!
very nice, finally a healthy relationship. Great post ! Thank you !!!
Another great chapter, look forward to the afternoon loving
wonderful, gotta love kit, kick their butts sistah…bring the making love part soon
I like the current direction of the story. Nice installment, but why does Kit sound like an olde nanny/maid from the 50’s/60’s movies? Just wondering, maybe it’s just me.
grt update
Great update. B & T need to continue to talk. Kit was right in what she told Bette. Bette needs to make Tina and Laurel her first priority and be consistent. She needs to earn back the trust and in time forgiveness will follow. Please continue.
Unbeknown…Your writing is spectacular…”off the chain”.Keep those posts comin’.
Great .so glad thatLaura said Bettes name. Tina grin and told Bette that she didn’t talk yet/ Love kids. Tina knew that sometime in the future that Bette would come back and she wanted the baby to know Bette. Love this story thanks
really fine chapter – lovely stuff with Bette and Laurel – thank you for having Bette stand up for herself and for having them start to talk to one another – they can heal the doubts but it ain’t easy.
I also have never commented, I’m more of a silent reader..but I wanted to say thank you for your beautiful story…it is great how you have communicated all the emotions through this process. Please keep writing, esp. loved the line about forgiveness being something that is given, it can’t be demanded…very powerful…Thanks again!
Good chapter. Glad they talk a little and hope they will talk more and work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
fantastic :D gotta love it when Kit gives them the kick up tha ass they need.. :D
I love this story- it just seems so real. I’m addicted so keep it coming please!!