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The Journey 40
Tina: “I’m sorry babe.”
Bette: Shhh, for what?”
Tina: “Ruining our night away. Throwing up on the side of the road is hardly romantic.”
Bette: I smile at Tina. “Not ruined Tee. Get some rest.” I kiss her on the head, pull up the sheet, leave the bucket and the water by the side of the bed in case and close the door on the way out.
I call Kit and she promises to swing by to get the latest update. Kit hugs me on greeting.
Kit: “So baby sis, how was the night away?”
Bette: “Kit” I frown. “It wasn’t like that.”
Kit: “How much you wanna bet you tiny black ***** it wasn’t?”
Bette: “OK, OK it was a little like that but” and Kit cuts me off.
Kit: “Finally, you two ladies are getting it on. Thank god.”
Bette: “Shhh, Tina is sleeping, she isn’t well. And it is not like you think Kit. Come on, I’ll make us a coffee and we can go out by the pool and talk.” I lead Kit and her coffee out.
Kit: “What’s up with Tina?”
Bette: “I think she ate something, that’s all, she’s resting, she’ll be fine. I’ll check on her in a bit.”
Kit: “What do you need to talk to me about?” Bette hates ‘talking’ so when she needs to it is never good.
Bette: “Lots of things Kit. I need to you to be honest with me OK, don’t try and protect me.”
Kit: “Alright.”
Bette: “When we were at Greg’s last night, we uh.”
Kit: “Had *****?”
Bette: I nod “Yes. But Kit, she was soforward. I know things are different but.”
Kit: “Bette, honey” and I put my hand on Bette’s knee “A lot has happened, you ladies have both changed and grown. You are going to have to accept those changes.”
Bette: “Kit, there was some, I don’t know how to explain it, there was some pay back, I didn’t feel like we were alone. Was she happy with
Kit: “Bette, honey, are you out of your ***** mind?” I say as only an older sister can. “Is she with
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i’ve not commented before, just wanna let ya know that i love your story=)..great update as always!
great as usual, love it. please post soon
Loved it. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
An afternoon alone eh? looking forward to seeing how you – & they fill it! :-)
youre unstoppable today..lol..and im more than happy with that..lol..i hope Tina make her mind and trust Bette cuz Bette knows for who she belongs..ok can i wait for more today?..lol.thanks :o)
Ghee, you’ve been busy. I just caught up on the last couple of chapters. I like that they are communicating and processing. Even though its been a bit bumpy they seem to be heading in the right direction. At least I hope so. Oh, this is one of my favorite stories so thanks for posting a bunch of chapters recently.
Still loving this story.Communication is key.
Kit is great – there is no bullshit with her…only raw honesty. I’m really looking forward to the next post WINK WINK :o))
Is Tina sick or pregnant? I’m a bit worried…
just read the 3 last chapters, I’d like to send you un bouquet de roses, just to thank you for the beautiful story you give us.Thank you Unbeknown ;-)
so they’re alone uh? *wink wink* Hehe, great as always, I love how Kit can chew bet a new one and Bette is taking it like a woman instead of going balistic…please post soon :o)
Yeah Bette amke love to me..LOL NC17, NC17!!!!!! Nice and slow and passionate and then nice and ruff!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!! POST SOON!!!!
very nice, finally a healthy relationship. Great post ! Thank you !!!
Another great chapter, look forward to the afternoon loving
wonderful, gotta love kit, kick their butts sistah…bring the making love part soon
I like the current direction of the story. Nice installment, but why does Kit sound like an olde nanny/maid from the 50’s/60’s movies? Just wondering, maybe it’s just me.
grt update
Great update. B & T need to continue to talk. Kit was right in what she told Bette. Bette needs to make Tina and Laurel her first priority and be consistent. She needs to earn back the trust and in time forgiveness will follow. Please continue.
Unbeknown…Your writing is spectacular…”off the chain”.Keep those posts comin’.
Great .so glad thatLaura said Bettes name. Tina grin and told Bette that she didn’t talk yet/ Love kids. Tina knew that sometime in the future that Bette would come back and she wanted the baby to know Bette. Love this story thanks
really fine chapter – lovely stuff with Bette and Laurel – thank you for having Bette stand up for herself and for having them start to talk to one another – they can heal the doubts but it ain’t easy.
I also have never commented, I’m more of a silent reader..but I wanted to say thank you for your beautiful story…it is great how you have communicated all the emotions through this process. Please keep writing, esp. loved the line about forgiveness being something that is given, it can’t be demanded…very powerful…Thanks again!
Good chapter. Glad they talk a little and hope they will talk more and work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
fantastic :D gotta love it when Kit gives them the kick up tha ass they need.. :D
I love this story- it just seems so real. I’m addicted so keep it coming please!!