Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG. Age verification is required to proceed.
The Journey 40
Bette: I hear
Kit: “Uh huh” is my only response knowing Bette is taking a ***** of a chance. No way known Bette will wait for long for that ring to be back on her finger. I offer to take
Kit leaves with
Bette: “Sorry, I didn’t mean to wake you.”
Tina: “It’s OK, I feel better, just tired.” And I pull Bette’s arm around me.
We wake about
Kit: “Hey Tina.”
Tina: “Kit.” As we hug.
Kit: “Pull up chair. You feeling better?”
Tina: “I feel fine, I don’t know what it was but I’m OK now.”
Kit: “That’s good.” And I pat her knee “The rest of it?”
Tina: “Some good, some not so good.”
Kit: I chewed Bette’s ***** but I know she loves Tina. “Can I stick my nose in?”
Tina: “Do I have a choice?” I say playfully.
Kit: “Nahh, not really. Listen kiddo, Bette did a stupid thing, she made a huge mistake and she knows it. But Tina, honey, that is all it was, she never loved that woman. The only woman she ever loved is you. Now you love her but you got to decide whether you can forgive her and trust her, cause neither of you can go forward, you know what I am saying. I kicked her tiny black ***** when I found out what she did but she is still my little sister. I love both of you but if you can’t get where you need to, let her go, don’t ***** her around, you be dealing with me if that happens.”
Tina: “Kit, come on, I wouldn’t do that, you know that, right?” and I look as concerned as I feel.
Kit: “I know that honey, but sooner or later you’ve got to decide so you can both get on with your lives, together or not. Now why don’t you leave Laurel here with me and go on home to your wife and talk some more.”
Tina: “We’ve talked a lot Kit.”
Kit: “Well not enough. And if you don’t want to be talkin’ find somethin’ else to do, now go on, go on.”
I arrive home and Bette is lying on the bed with just her pajama bottoms on, hands behind her head.
Bette: “Where’s Laurel?”
Tina: I join her on the bed. “You know what Aunty’s are like.”
Bette: “I see, we have to kidnap our kid back.” And I turn on my side to face Tina with my hand under my head. “Are you feeling better, really?”
Tina: “Really, I feel fine.” And I brush Bette’s hair out of her face. “Bette?”
Bette: I have closed my eyes, just enjoying Tina’s touch. “Hmm Tee” I say with out opening them.
Tina: “That was so cute with Laurel today.”
Bette: “Tee, how does she know me so well?”
Tina: “I used to bring her here, to our home, and tell her stories about us, in easier times, we’d walk around the backyard, we’d sit in the lounge and look at photos.”
Bette: Instinctively I kiss Tina “Oh my God, thank you, Tee. You have no idea what it means to me.”
Tina: I move slightly further down the bed and kiss Bette. “I think I am getting an idea, you make a great mom Bette.” And I tickle her teasing power woman who is all soft inside when it comes to Laurel. “You big softie.”
Bette: “Me, look who’s talking !” I accuse mockingly.
Tina: “Bette?”
Tina: “We are home alone.”
Bette: “Hmmm, so we are..”
Tina: “Bette, make love to me.”
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



(57 votes, average: 3.93 out of 5)
i’ve not commented before, just wanna let ya know that i love your story=)..great update as always!
great as usual, love it. please post soon
Loved it. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
An afternoon alone eh? looking forward to seeing how you – & they fill it! :-)
youre unstoppable today..lol..and im more than happy with that..lol..i hope Tina make her mind and trust Bette cuz Bette knows for who she belongs..ok can i wait for more today?..lol.thanks :o)
Ghee, you’ve been busy. I just caught up on the last couple of chapters. I like that they are communicating and processing. Even though its been a bit bumpy they seem to be heading in the right direction. At least I hope so. Oh, this is one of my favorite stories so thanks for posting a bunch of chapters recently.
Still loving this story.Communication is key.
Kit is great – there is no bullshit with her…only raw honesty. I’m really looking forward to the next post WINK WINK :o))
Is Tina sick or pregnant? I’m a bit worried…
just read the 3 last chapters, I’d like to send you un bouquet de roses, just to thank you for the beautiful story you give us.Thank you Unbeknown ;-)
so they’re alone uh? *wink wink* Hehe, great as always, I love how Kit can chew bet a new one and Bette is taking it like a woman instead of going balistic…please post soon :o)
Yeah Bette amke love to me..LOL NC17, NC17!!!!!! Nice and slow and passionate and then nice and ruff!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!! POST SOON!!!!
very nice, finally a healthy relationship. Great post ! Thank you !!!
Another great chapter, look forward to the afternoon loving
wonderful, gotta love kit, kick their butts sistah…bring the making love part soon
I like the current direction of the story. Nice installment, but why does Kit sound like an olde nanny/maid from the 50’s/60’s movies? Just wondering, maybe it’s just me.
grt update
Great update. B & T need to continue to talk. Kit was right in what she told Bette. Bette needs to make Tina and Laurel her first priority and be consistent. She needs to earn back the trust and in time forgiveness will follow. Please continue.
Unbeknown…Your writing is spectacular…”off the chain”.Keep those posts comin’.
Great .so glad thatLaura said Bettes name. Tina grin and told Bette that she didn’t talk yet/ Love kids. Tina knew that sometime in the future that Bette would come back and she wanted the baby to know Bette. Love this story thanks
really fine chapter – lovely stuff with Bette and Laurel – thank you for having Bette stand up for herself and for having them start to talk to one another – they can heal the doubts but it ain’t easy.
I also have never commented, I’m more of a silent reader..but I wanted to say thank you for your beautiful story…it is great how you have communicated all the emotions through this process. Please keep writing, esp. loved the line about forgiveness being something that is given, it can’t be demanded…very powerful…Thanks again!
Good chapter. Glad they talk a little and hope they will talk more and work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
fantastic :D gotta love it when Kit gives them the kick up tha ass they need.. :D
I love this story- it just seems so real. I’m addicted so keep it coming please!!