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The Journey 40
Bette: “That Tina loved her, that
Kit: “Well you got that last part right. The rest you got wrong. Tina never loved her
Bette: “I can’t give her and
Kit: “Maybe, you ever thought Tina doesn’t want what
Bette: “Sort of.”
Kit: “You know little sis they only lasted a month after you left.”
Bette: “Tina told me that.”
Kit: “Bette honey, I am your older sister, older each day but not yet senile and you still cannot bullshit to me. What is really the matter? I do not believe for one minute you are concerned about
Bette: I sigh. “I don’t think Tina can forgive me Kit, for what happened with Candace. She doesn’t trust me. And I have no idea what to do about it.”
Kit: “Go and get me some more coffee” and my baby sister who so obviously loves Tina with her every fibre of her being can be such a dumb *****, ivy league educated or not. She gets the coffee and returns, sitting next to me.
Kit: “She doesn’t trust you Bette, first you gotta get your head around that. Harsh but true, you had an affair and you’ve been away for eighteen months and now you back for two months. What reason she got to trust you?”
Bette: “Easy Kit. That’s just it, I’ve been away so long.”
Kit: “Haul up Bette.” I say seriously. “Honey, being away for a long period don’t help nothin’ at least not for her. She couldn’t talk to you, be pissed at you, ***** she didn’t even know where to find you. Being away might have allowed you to sort your ***** out but she was here, waiting, wondering, not knowing what to do.”
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(57 votes, average: 3.93 out of 5)
i’ve not commented before, just wanna let ya know that i love your story=)..great update as always!
great as usual, love it. please post soon
Loved it. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
An afternoon alone eh? looking forward to seeing how you – & they fill it! :-)
youre unstoppable today..lol..and im more than happy with that..lol..i hope Tina make her mind and trust Bette cuz Bette knows for who she belongs..ok can i wait for more today?..lol.thanks :o)
Ghee, you’ve been busy. I just caught up on the last couple of chapters. I like that they are communicating and processing. Even though its been a bit bumpy they seem to be heading in the right direction. At least I hope so. Oh, this is one of my favorite stories so thanks for posting a bunch of chapters recently.
Still loving this story.Communication is key.
Kit is great – there is no bullshit with her…only raw honesty. I’m really looking forward to the next post WINK WINK :o))
Is Tina sick or pregnant? I’m a bit worried…
just read the 3 last chapters, I’d like to send you un bouquet de roses, just to thank you for the beautiful story you give us.Thank you Unbeknown ;-)
so they’re alone uh? *wink wink* Hehe, great as always, I love how Kit can chew bet a new one and Bette is taking it like a woman instead of going balistic…please post soon :o)
Yeah Bette amke love to me..LOL NC17, NC17!!!!!! Nice and slow and passionate and then nice and ruff!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!! POST SOON!!!!
very nice, finally a healthy relationship. Great post ! Thank you !!!
Another great chapter, look forward to the afternoon loving
wonderful, gotta love kit, kick their butts sistah…bring the making love part soon
I like the current direction of the story. Nice installment, but why does Kit sound like an olde nanny/maid from the 50’s/60’s movies? Just wondering, maybe it’s just me.
grt update
Great update. B & T need to continue to talk. Kit was right in what she told Bette. Bette needs to make Tina and Laurel her first priority and be consistent. She needs to earn back the trust and in time forgiveness will follow. Please continue.
Unbeknown…Your writing is spectacular…”off the chain”.Keep those posts comin’.
Great .so glad thatLaura said Bettes name. Tina grin and told Bette that she didn’t talk yet/ Love kids. Tina knew that sometime in the future that Bette would come back and she wanted the baby to know Bette. Love this story thanks
really fine chapter – lovely stuff with Bette and Laurel – thank you for having Bette stand up for herself and for having them start to talk to one another – they can heal the doubts but it ain’t easy.
I also have never commented, I’m more of a silent reader..but I wanted to say thank you for your beautiful story…it is great how you have communicated all the emotions through this process. Please keep writing, esp. loved the line about forgiveness being something that is given, it can’t be demanded…very powerful…Thanks again!
Good chapter. Glad they talk a little and hope they will talk more and work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
fantastic :D gotta love it when Kit gives them the kick up tha ass they need.. :D
I love this story- it just seems so real. I’m addicted so keep it coming please!!