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The Journey – FINAL CHAPTER
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Tina: I feel Bette relax and give in to me holding her. “Watcha thinking about out here all on your own?” I ask playfully but already knowing the answer.
Bette: “Lots of things, how lucky we are”
Tina: “We are lucky, we have each other and the kids”
Bette: I bend my head forward and then look up and out over the sea and I can never get past how that water looks as still as glass “and a beautiful home” I say quietly.
Tina: I suspected Bette had been out here thinking about going home. As much as I love it here, it’s Bette’s passion and I have been ready to go for awhile, that is emotionally ready but I am happy to give Bette all the time she needs. Let’s get it right second time around and if that means a few extra weeks, so be it. I say nothing but snuggle in tighter and gently move Bette’s hair to give her a small kiss on the neck and I know she is smiling, even though I cannot see it.
Bette: “Tee, do you want to go home?”
Tina: Just seconds before Bette asked the question I had go of her to reach in and grab us something to eat. I am not surprised that she asked me but I am mindful of my answer. I don’t want her to feel pressured, or her to feel I don’t want to go home or even that I am avoiding answering her. “What about you Bette, what do you want?” It’s the best I can do.
Bette: “I love it here.”
Tina: Bette can’t see but I raise my eyebrows, no kidding, I think to myself. I wait to see if Bette says more.
Bette: “Tee?”
Tina: “I’m listening” I say gently.
Bette: “I think am ready to go home but I don’t want to go before you are ready.”
Tina: That’s my Bette, clueless, in a nice way. “You think you are ready? What do you feel?”
Bette: “That we should go home Tee, and start our life again with our friends and family.”
Tina: Sometimes Bette’s responses truly surprise me. “Are you worried about going back to the house?”
Bette: “Only the work it will need when we get home.” I joke, knowing we have left it unattended for sometime. “What about you Tee, are you ready to go home?”
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I’m a big fan of your writing, and have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I especially liked the struggle to reunite in the 30’s. Your style of writing makes it easy to follow who is thinking and saying what. Best of luck in your new venture and thanks for writing!
Thank you, I loved your story from beginning to endHope you have a new one one day.
it was a great journey, thank you
Thoroughly enjoyable. Good luck in your new job.
What a great story was with from the begining to the end. Sooo glad it was a happy ending
Lovely writing, great story, loved the ending. Thanks for finishing up so nicely. Good luck.
thank you, this story was wonderful, i hope you will find time to write more
Wonderful ending and lovely, love it. Thank you for sharing this story with us and hope you will have a new one soon for us, thanks! Good luck and take care, see you soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the great story. I hope you enjoy your new position and will return to fan ficion one day in the near future.
They are home at least in their hearts. When they get to the house that they call home their hearts would have already reached that state and they can build upon that foundation. I am sad that you will be taking a break but understand that life takes precedence over FF. I hope that one day you will return to FF and make my Tibette soar again.
Beautiful ending, thanks.
Great ending to a great story. Thanks.
Lovely story – wonderful ending! Good luck with your new venture.
i have been a fan of yours for a long time this story has made me realize alot about love and i wanted to thankyou so much for sharing your work with me and the rest of the world…. i hope to see some more of your writing ur very talanted…once again thankyou so much you… and good luck…
Thank you, thank you, thank you. I really enjoyed this story. Good luck with your new position. I hope you will find the time to post again, you have a gift :). Thanks.
unbeknown, thank you very much for taking the time to end this story and thank you for writing it, it was absolutely beautiful. Sometime I hope selfishly that you don’t have to work or play tenis or do anything else than to write, I’m very bad, sorry, but “the end” are two words too sad to read, and I really hope S4 will give you inspiration again (or maybe you will write a book ;-) Again, thank you for your talent and for offering it to us :-) You are the best !
Ahh that was so beautiful. I so love how you write. Best of luck in your new position I pray you will master it soon so you may find the time to come back with more of your wonderful stories. Thanks for finishing this
What a wonderful ending. I read and love the story all along. Hope we could see you coming up with a new story in no time. :D
Hey unbeknown, That was a perfect way to sign off this story. I wish you the best of luck in your new position and do hope that it affords you some time to writie. Given your talent it would be unfortunate if you could not continue to create there fabulous fan fictions. The road has been rocky for Bette and Tina however their love never doubted a reunion of bodis, minds and souls. And so it was. Awesome. Many thanks for all these trials and tribulations. Your Loyal Fan.
I love everything you write and thank you for completing the story. I trust your new position will be fulfilling and await your return.
What a great way to end the story. I have enjoyed every chapter… I hope you can find some time in the near futur to write another. Thanks a bunch.
I am a big fan of yours. This story has been is wonderful. Thank you for all the time you put into it. Hope we get a new story one day. Thank you again
UB thank you for sharing this with us and thank you for finishing it in such a wonderful way. Written beautifully as always. Congratulations on your new position! I am hopeful that you will find the inspiration and the time to share more of your talents with us in the future. In the meantime, take care and good luck!
This has been an amazing story. I feel honored to have read it. Your writing is so wonderful, I will miss this story I am so happy you gave them a happy ending. I hope you find some time to write for us in the future. I wish you well on your new position.