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The Journey – FINAL CHAPTER
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Tee: “Yes.” Is all I whisper in Bette’s ear.
Bette: Tina and I sit on the jetty and eat a simple lunch of fresh bread with ham and cheese, while we have a glass of sparkling water with fresh lime in. We watch over Laurel, aware of the dangers that the water can pose. I pour us a strong coffee. “Bette, do you want me to call the airline?”
Bette: I think for a moment and then answer “Do you mind if I call?”
Tina: And I know these are things Bette needs to do. “I don’t mind at all baby.”
Bette: “I thought if we could get a flight we might go tomorrow.”
Tina: “Wow, that soon, are you sure Bette?”
Bette: I hold Tina’s gaze “Very sure Tee.”
Tina: “There’s one thing we haven’t done Bette, I think we really should”
Bette: “What’s that?”
Tina: “Talk to Laurel, reassure her that we will all be living together and she doesn’t have to worry anymore. I think it’s been super hard on her.”
Bette: I nod. “How about tonight before bed?”
Tina: “Good idea. And how about we spend the rest of the night just the two of us?”
Bette: “Let me check my schedule” I say jokingly and Tina playfully pokes me in the ribs. “I’d love too spend the night with you Tee.”
Tina: The decision made to go and so soon, meant only thing…….. packing. We spent the afternoon packing and with two small children, that is no easy task. Bette booked the tickets and got us on a flight late tomorrow afternoon, which means we will arrive in LA on Friday. We both called work, having agreed I would part time and Bette would work full time but be home by 6:30pm to eat dinner with us, even if that meant going to work early or working from home after dinner. We agreed that Bette would not work on weekends unless there were very special circumstances. We decided to give ourselves a week at home before we started work again. Bette offered no resistance to these proposals, saying she didn’t want her family to grow up her not there. I think she was secretly relieved. I call Alice and Bette called Kit who both offered to collect us from the airport. Kit was especially excited to be seeing her nieces. Before we knew it, it was dark. I feed the kids and Bette washes Jennifer and plays with Laurel while she is in the bath. I overhear Bette promise to read her 2 stories before bed. Bette has no trouble convincing Laurel to get into bed and I make my way in too.
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I’m a big fan of your writing, and have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I especially liked the struggle to reunite in the 30’s. Your style of writing makes it easy to follow who is thinking and saying what. Best of luck in your new venture and thanks for writing!
Thank you, I loved your story from beginning to endHope you have a new one one day.
it was a great journey, thank you
Thoroughly enjoyable. Good luck in your new job.
What a great story was with from the begining to the end. Sooo glad it was a happy ending
Lovely writing, great story, loved the ending. Thanks for finishing up so nicely. Good luck.
thank you, this story was wonderful, i hope you will find time to write more
Wonderful ending and lovely, love it. Thank you for sharing this story with us and hope you will have a new one soon for us, thanks! Good luck and take care, see you soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the great story. I hope you enjoy your new position and will return to fan ficion one day in the near future.
They are home at least in their hearts. When they get to the house that they call home their hearts would have already reached that state and they can build upon that foundation. I am sad that you will be taking a break but understand that life takes precedence over FF. I hope that one day you will return to FF and make my Tibette soar again.
Beautiful ending, thanks.
Great ending to a great story. Thanks.
Lovely story – wonderful ending! Good luck with your new venture.
i have been a fan of yours for a long time this story has made me realize alot about love and i wanted to thankyou so much for sharing your work with me and the rest of the world…. i hope to see some more of your writing ur very talanted…once again thankyou so much you… and good luck…
Thank you, thank you, thank you. I really enjoyed this story. Good luck with your new position. I hope you will find the time to post again, you have a gift :). Thanks.
unbeknown, thank you very much for taking the time to end this story and thank you for writing it, it was absolutely beautiful. Sometime I hope selfishly that you don’t have to work or play tenis or do anything else than to write, I’m very bad, sorry, but “the end” are two words too sad to read, and I really hope S4 will give you inspiration again (or maybe you will write a book ;-) Again, thank you for your talent and for offering it to us :-) You are the best !
Ahh that was so beautiful. I so love how you write. Best of luck in your new position I pray you will master it soon so you may find the time to come back with more of your wonderful stories. Thanks for finishing this
What a wonderful ending. I read and love the story all along. Hope we could see you coming up with a new story in no time. :D
Hey unbeknown, That was a perfect way to sign off this story. I wish you the best of luck in your new position and do hope that it affords you some time to writie. Given your talent it would be unfortunate if you could not continue to create there fabulous fan fictions. The road has been rocky for Bette and Tina however their love never doubted a reunion of bodis, minds and souls. And so it was. Awesome. Many thanks for all these trials and tribulations. Your Loyal Fan.
I love everything you write and thank you for completing the story. I trust your new position will be fulfilling and await your return.
What a great way to end the story. I have enjoyed every chapter… I hope you can find some time in the near futur to write another. Thanks a bunch.
I am a big fan of yours. This story has been is wonderful. Thank you for all the time you put into it. Hope we get a new story one day. Thank you again
UB thank you for sharing this with us and thank you for finishing it in such a wonderful way. Written beautifully as always. Congratulations on your new position! I am hopeful that you will find the inspiration and the time to share more of your talents with us in the future. In the meantime, take care and good luck!
This has been an amazing story. I feel honored to have read it. Your writing is so wonderful, I will miss this story I am so happy you gave them a happy ending. I hope you find some time to write for us in the future. I wish you well on your new position.