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The L Wing chapter 199
“It shouldn’t be though – I feel crap because it’s about me and how tense I am when it should be about you and Ella “
“You are allowed – you have been amazing for the last nine months. Don’t think for a minute that I do not know this or appreciate how special you have been. You have been a wonderful wife and best friend to me Bette “
I look at her – she looks so serene – her long blonde hair is tied back and even without make up she looks terrific.
“Thank you “
“I’ve put you through hell at times and even though you have shouted back at me a few times for the most part you have just taken it. You have been supportive and so kind “
Unexpectedly she bursts into tears – I pull her as close as possible and hug her
“You have just been the best “she says between sobs
Her reaction takes me by surprise – I know that her hormones are all over the place but for the past tense few days she has been calm and patient and I have been hard work. I stroke her back and she slowly stops crying. I hold her for another few minutes after the tears finally stop – she eases away and looks at me
“You should have the best of everything Bette because you are an amazing wife “
“I have the best – you “
She shakes her head “You don’t know how romantic you are or how tuned in you are to my feelings. There have been so many times when I have felt so bad and you have shown up with flowers or some gift or you have touched me in a non sexual way – just to massage my neck or my calves – you are something else “
“I’ve always wanted what I have with you – a connection “
She rubs her brow “I am tired “
“Why don’t we go and lie down? “
“Bette – why don’t you go and do a few hours work?”
“Why?”
“Because as Pam says it could be another week before our bambino makes an appearance – we are going stir crazy. You go and make sure Shane is okay and see how the place is holding up. “
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Please write the next chapter as soon as possible, you naughty drama queen you!! LMAO
Firstly Ally congrats on the nomination justly deserved !!!! Nice chapter as per usual, I do have to agree with everyone here who have commented so far, please no drama ;-) lets just have a nice uncomplicated birth and a happy Bette and Tina, maybe after the birth an during the next 200 chapters you will be writing you can throw in a drama or two. please post real soon
lets see which hat ms. ally is wearing for the birth of the baby. thanks.
Congratulations yet again, Ally. I was going to suggest that if they had a spicy curry for dinner, the most appropriate film would be Blazing Saddles, but I guess that’s off now. And I’m so pleased to hear there’s a good form of diarrhea. After a nice infusion of caffeine I’m sure Bette will be all relaxed for the delivery. Any reference to Warner Bros. cartoons is welcome, and in that spirit, I say let’s go on with the show.
I knew chapter 200 would bring us to Tina having the Ella. Please do not keep us waiting to long. Great Chapter Thanks Ally
Wonderful as always! congrats on the nominations, you deserve them. I was just strolling down memory lane today with someof your earlier chapters. these two have been through alot.
Poor Lucy I know she just wanted to run when she saw Bette at the door. Now don’t take a page out of IC’s book with Ella’s birth. There is plenty of time left in Bette’s term for them to go through it but the birth of thier child is not one of them be gentle.
thats great…love that Tina didn’t tell bette right away…
Congrats on the nominations, Ally!! Now, I’m on my way to boil some water until the next chapter! LOL…isn’t what they always say in the movies?? Hurry up with the next chapter, girl!!!
Completely awesome chapter – your characters are so real- your dialogue so wonderful – congrats! You are the queen of fanfiction!
Fantastic, can’t wait for the 200th chapter. And Ally, how’s another 200 or more? hehe
Congrats Ally. This is great and please no drama for the baby. Please post more, thanks!
oooh exciting! Cant wait for the baby! Congrats on the nominations and your 200th post Ally!
Tks for bringing out the magic trick under ur sleeve! (The Afgan Peace Talk Summit)You outdid the best magician, worldwide! Oh, and may I add: in such a clever and subtle way! Way to go, Ally! Now, we’re going to celebrate your 200 Chapter and welcome Ella, as all of us, the eager aunts -your fans- cheer up for her arrival! Tks again, mate!
Oh I can’t wait for the baby to come! It’s been a long road, written beautifully, and I just can’t wait. Congrats on the nominations Mate, you deserve every one of ’em! *HUGS*
DRAMA ? you are clearly mixing me up with the Allyemmerson who has been nominated as Drama Queen – thats my evil twin. and well done Kendra — that was October 2005 and the first story i wrote for the site – i LOVE Ella Fitzgerald – her voice is just perfect !!
See maybe Tina just need Bette to get out of her hair for awhile so she could relax. Now time for baby Ella to come into the world, and no drama Ally.
And of course, NO drama with the baby, right?
Please post as soon as possible! I soooo want to hear about Ella’s birth. You know I was wondering when you first dropped the name in wich story, Tina came home and found Bette in a very sexyoutifit with Ella Fitzerald playing in the backround. I found the answer this morning. Its was your story, Homecoming realisations, so I take it that maybe you’ve got a thing with one of jazz’s greatest voice?
catching up…