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    The Laundry Bag

    Story written on May 19, 2022 by TiBette4everever.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=113153
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    “Don’t waste this time. It’s just the two of you. Talk to her…not for her…but for you. You will never be able to really move forward with whatever decision you make if you don’t allow yourself the opportunity to hear what she has to say.” “I’m so angry with her, Kit. But the more time

    “Don’t waste this time. It’s just the two of you. Talk to her…not for her…but for you. You will never be able to really move forward with whatever decision you make if you don’t allow yourself the opportunity to hear what she has to say.”

    “I’m so angry with her, Kit. But the more time we spend in the same space, I feel a little less angry. And the more I want to be with her.”

    “That’s because you’re still madly in love with her.”

    Bette rolled her eyes. She was still in love with her. But…

    “What do you want, Baby Girl?”

    “I want to not have lost our son. I want Candace to not have kissed me. I want Tina to not have left. I want my life back. Before all of this refuse.”

    “Nothing you can do about the past, Baby Girl. You did lose your son, Candace did kiss you and Tina did leave. And you know what else?

    “What?”

    “You escaped into your work. Like you always do when you don’t want to deal with your emotions. You kinda left Tina too.”

    “No! I did not leave. SHE pushed me away when I needed her the most. When we needed each other the most. And then she fucking left,” Bette asserted.

    “Okay. Okay. Okay. But now what? Now what? Look, Baby Sis. This is your decision. I will support you no matter what. But you can’t stay all bottled up. It’s not good for you. You’ve got to talk to her about my precious nephew and how you felt when she pushed you away and how you felt when she left and how you’re feeling now.”

    Bette exhaled.

    “Stop overthinking and just talk to her.”

    “Fuck. I know. Ugh.”

    “Tina called me last night.”

    Bette looked towards the apartment again.

    “She did?”

    “Yep.”

    “What did she say?”

    “That’s between me and Tina. But I told her the exact same thing I’m telling you. Y’all have got to talk. Figure out how to get out of your head, Baby Girl and talk to her.”

    Bette knew she was right. Kit had a way of pushing Bette without pushing her. She loved their sisterhood and was so grateful for the relationship they’d built. It wasn’t always easy between the two of them but Bette wouldn’t know how to do life without her big sister.

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    1. A sweet chapter. The flashback memories are delightfully stirred into this marvelous stew! And Bette’s description for Kiki of “sunshine” = Tina was from the soul sure ‘nuff!! Re-read page 13 y’all

      And page 25 is masterful.

      “They BOTH KNEW making love to each other would never be the same. They had CLIMBED INSIDE of each other and MADE LOVE with their SOULS.

      SOUL FUCKING each other from the DEEPEST parts of them”.

      Be still my racing heart!!!

      “Tina wiped Bette’s tears away. They walked to the bedroom hand in hand. And DID it ALL OVER AGAIN”.

      This memory has got to be one that will eventually help Bette to choose love over hurt toward Tina.

      • Thank you so much! I’m glad you’re enjoying the flashbacks. I think they are instrumental to the story. The flashbacks help move the story forward in a way that I’m really proud of and excited about. This was such a beautiful chapter to write. They are on the verge of something but we just don’t know what yet.

        I hope that memory helps Bette choose love over hurt. We never know what is truly going on with her. Only Tina can touch that part of her and right now, Tina isn’t allowed in. Fingers crossed.

    3. There is nothing I can add to DT’s perfect post. I love the mixture of flashback and the present. Certainly helps create a lot of hope. I’m glad Bette is allowing herself to experience all of it. I have two favorite passages. One present and one past. . Both equally beautiful:

      “Tina tastes like warm sunshine,” Bette said plainly. “When I kiss her, it’s an amalgamation of sweet rain, warm sunshine and very ripe grapefruit…all exploding together and I can feel her in every cell in my body. It’s like…it’s like…a colliding of our souls. I am happiest…no, that’s not the right word. I am my truest, most self when I’m in her aura. I get this warm sensation when I’m near her. She is my air.”

      And the other: “They both knew making love to each other would never be the same. They had climbed inside of each other and made love with their souls. Soul fucking each other from the deepest parts of them. Tina wiped Bette’s tears away. They walked to the bedroom hand in hand. And they did it all over again. This time with Bette taking the lead.”

      Beautiful. You are a talented writer and I am loving your story.

      • Thanks!! Funny you picked out those 2 scenes, they were my favorites to write. I wasn’t going to put a sexy time scene in this chapter, but after editing and re-reading, I thought it needed it. I’m so glad I added it. It’s my best work yet.

    4. A great chapter to read and i simply agree with what DumplinT said in her comment! I really hope Bette will choose love over the hurt, it will take time but there are everytime more little cracks in her wall.

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