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The Laundry Bag
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“Love you, Kit.”
“Love you too.”
Bette looked in the direction of the apartment again and thought about what Kit said. She remembered the first time she introduced Tina to Kit.
“BABY GIRL,” Kit boomed.
Bette laughed as she hugged her sister.
“And who do we have here?” Kit asked noticing the blonde standing next to Bette…a little too closely.
“This is…Tina.” Bette beamed.
Kit looked at Bette and then at the blonde and back at Bette. Bette was still smiling. Kit noticed the odd expression on Tina’s face.
“Well, hello, Tina,” Kit crooned.
“Hi. So nice to meet you. Bette has told me so much about you,” Tina smiled.
“You look a little shocked, Tina. Everything okay?”
Bette noticed the expression on Tina’s face as her smile faded.
“It’s just…” Tina started then stopped.
“Apparently my baby sister might’ve left out a thing or two when she was telling you allll about me.”
Kit emphasized ‘allll’.
“Baby Girl, it looks like your friend has seen a ghost. Did you not tell her I was black? Or better question, did you not tell her you were black?”
“Umm…I…” Bette inhaled.
Tina turned several shades of red within seconds. Bette covered up the panic behind her eyes expertly.
“Tina, Bette and I are technically “half” sisters.”
Kit used air quotes when she said half because there was nothing half about their relationship.
“I’ll give you one guess as to which half.”
Kit chuckled trying to lighten the mood. Tina smiled. Bette was too busy racing through a gazillion scenarios in her head.
“How long have y’all been hanging out with each other, Tina?”
“Eight days,” Tina squinched her nose and smiled at Bette.
“Eight days?” Kit looked at Bette.
“You must be some kind of wonderful because my baby sister doesn’t introduce me to just anyone and especially not this soon.”
“Oh, I don’t know about that but I do think your baby sister is some kind of wonderful.”
Tina blinked at Bette. The brunette half smiled and looked at the ground. Then at her sister. Kit knew what was going on behind Bette’s eyes. Bette was freaking the fuck out.
“Does the fact that Bette is black change anything for you, Tina?”
“No. I have black friends.”
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A sweet chapter. The flashback memories are delightfully stirred into this marvelous stew! And Bette’s description for Kiki of “sunshine” = Tina was from the soul sure ‘nuff!! Re-read page 13 y’all
And page 25 is masterful.
“They BOTH KNEW making love to each other would never be the same. They had CLIMBED INSIDE of each other and MADE LOVE with their SOULS.
SOUL FUCKING each other from the DEEPEST parts of them”.
Be still my racing heart!!!
“Tina wiped Bette’s tears away. They walked to the bedroom hand in hand. And DID it ALL OVER AGAIN”.
This memory has got to be one that will eventually help Bette to choose love over hurt toward Tina.
Thank you so much! I’m glad you’re enjoying the flashbacks. I think they are instrumental to the story. The flashbacks help move the story forward in a way that I’m really proud of and excited about. This was such a beautiful chapter to write. They are on the verge of something but we just don’t know what yet.
I hope that memory helps Bette choose love over hurt. We never know what is truly going on with her. Only Tina can touch that part of her and right now, Tina isn’t allowed in. Fingers crossed.
Very busy with preparing for my vacation but hope to read it soon.
Oooh! Wishing you much fun and joy on your vacation.
There is nothing I can add to DT’s perfect post. I love the mixture of flashback and the present. Certainly helps create a lot of hope. I’m glad Bette is allowing herself to experience all of it. I have two favorite passages. One present and one past. . Both equally beautiful:
“Tina tastes like warm sunshine,” Bette said plainly. “When I kiss her, it’s an amalgamation of sweet rain, warm sunshine and very ripe grapefruit…all exploding together and I can feel her in every cell in my body. It’s like…it’s like…a colliding of our souls. I am happiest…no, that’s not the right word. I am my truest, most self when I’m in her aura. I get this warm sensation when I’m near her. She is my air.”
And the other: “They both knew making love to each other would never be the same. They had climbed inside of each other and made love with their souls. Soul fucking each other from the deepest parts of them. Tina wiped Bette’s tears away. They walked to the bedroom hand in hand. And they did it all over again. This time with Bette taking the lead.”
Beautiful. You are a talented writer and I am loving your story.
Thanks!! Funny you picked out those 2 scenes, they were my favorites to write. I wasn’t going to put a sexy time scene in this chapter, but after editing and re-reading, I thought it needed it. I’m so glad I added it. It’s my best work yet.
A great chapter to read and i simply agree with what DumplinT said in her comment! I really hope Bette will choose love over the hurt, it will take time but there are everytime more little cracks in her wall.
Thank you!!! It is going to take time. And there will be a couple of hiccups but I hope they find their way back to each other. We are in for an emotional rollercoaster