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    The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty One

    Story written on July 18, 2005 by dreiser.
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    Dana leaves for a tournament, Alice launches her new late night radio show, and they both deal with the trauma of a four day separation.

    “Dana
    Fairbanks, pro tennis star, ***** ***** woman, and tricky master of
    deception,” declared Rich, leaning back in his chair and giggling.

    “You want to go or should I?” asked Tonya sardonically.

    “I’ve had enough turns this week, so you go ahead,” said Alice humorously.

    “Stop calling her that,” Tonya growled her frightening command. 

    Rich
    blinked and turning to Alice with a guileless expression, he
    questioned, “Is it bad that I was sort of turned on by hearing her say
    that?”     

    “I’m
    just glad to know that when I say the words it doesn’t have the same
    effect,” said Alice wryly. Looking at her watch and hoping that Rich
    didn’t notice, she grinned and said, “Well, that’s all folks. For this
    week at least. The hour is now 1 a.m. and that means I’m going to get
    on a plane and meet my apparently AWOL girlfriend. Tonya, can you do me
    a favor and maybe save her lecture for tomorrow morning?”

    “We’ll see,” said Tonya, not promising anything.

    “Great,”
    said Alice, rolling her eyes and heaving a sigh as she disconnected the
    call with Tonya. “That’s it for The Chart. We’ll be back next Monday at
    Midnight, kiddies. Till then have fun and try to not get arrested.”

    “You
    looked at your watch just then! That’s another five bucks you owe me!”
    cried Rich gleefully before the station went into commercial. 

    Eighty
    five dollars wasn’t enough for fancy French cuisine but Rich did manage
    to buy his girlfriend a decent meal at a small Sushi bar for that cash.
    Where they drank saki in toast to Alice and Dana, the founders of the
    feast, to quote Bob Cratchit.     

    —

    The
    first thing that Alice saw when she exited the jetway was Dana and the
    second thing she saw was Dana’s hair flying into her face thanks to the
    speedy momentum of her hug. Laughing happily as strong arms wrapped
    around her, lifting off the ground, Alice breathed in the fresh scent
    of the athlete’s shampoo. Lost by how very good it felt to once again
    be in the arms of the person she loved more than anyone else.

    Even
    if it had only been four days since this had occurred, not four weeks,
    not fourth months, and not four years. Just four days but if you asked
    Alice it was four days too many.      

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    Comments

    1. OK, yoou made me late for work again. Somehow when you post a new chapter, I have to read it immediately. You do the happy Danish SO well. And I loved the ugliest dog in the world story.

    2. ahhh – back from the dark side – it feels so good! Love happy danish! And she does love her lots and lots!

      They were almost like a never ending wave of reassurance that never failed to splash over you when you were feeling your very lowest and helped to wake you up to the fact that people cared for you. – What a great line!

      The list of things she loved, in chronological order! so fitting.
      Dreiser – simply awesome!

    4. This was too poofy. I don’t know that is just the word that comes to mind. I should also say that poofy is extremely good. I loved how this chapter made all my Danish anxiety dissapear…. and now I have to listen to all those songs that Alice put on that cd. ;-)

    6. Ah, I love Leslie Gore. And this story is totally Danish escapism. I love the Helacious, but ah, Danish is so unrelentingly sweet and adorable.

      We’ve talked about most of this already but…

      1. How cute is Alice and her mix CD?

      2. The big bucks from public radio discussion

      3. Poop logs. Cos they are. And tootsie roll tainted fingers

      4. The Ugliest Dog in the world. I’m still so traumatised from him

      5. Rich’s strangely girly laugh and the bet. Ha! Not a huge sum of money, but definitely one that will get some decent sushi.

      And finally, your reference to the lines. Aw.

    10. It makes me really happy to see there is no Danish love lost here. I think I’ve said this before, but just you underestand Danish–the danish I think would exist if they didn’t exist on a tv show that needed to create weird ass drama in order to tell stories.
      As mch as I am enjoying your helacious story, this ode to Danish is first in y heart of hearts…

      Love to see Dana so in love–it’s really nice (I hate using the word “nice” to describe something, but it is).

      Thanks for this story-it makes what season 3 might be, a lot more bearable.

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