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    The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty One

    Story written on July 18, 2005 by dreiser.
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    Dana leaves for a tournament, Alice launches her new late night radio show, and they both deal with the trauma of a four day separation.

    “I
    missed you,” Dana said in a hushed confession, holding Alice tightly
    and lowering her carefully to the ground. There was no space between
    their bodies and she aimed to keep it that way for a good while. “I’m
    so glad you’re here.”

    “Me
    too,” Alice murmured, sighing happily. She pulled back and rested their
    foreheads together to look at Dana with smiling eyes. A mischievous
    grin quirked on her lips and she drawled, “You are in so much trouble
    with Tonya for sneaking out.”

    “I
    know,” said Dana sheepishly, ducking her eyes. After a moment, she
    peered shyly up at the blonde and said quietly, “I wanted to pick you
    up though. I wanted to see you.”

    Smiling
    softly, Alice kissed Dana lightly and moved to whisper in her ear,
    “I’ll take care of Tonya, okay? You just concentrate on playing the
    best tennis you can.” Her hands caressed the small of Dana’s back in a
    circular rub. “You’re doing great, baby.”

    “Yeah,”
    said Dana, a grin working across her features. Her blue eyes twinkling
    when she looked at Alice with an utterly satisfied expression on her
    features. “I really am, aren’t I?”      

    “You
    really are,” agreed Alice, nodding her head and returning the grin
    before nuzzling Dana’s nose with her own. “I couldn’t believe your last
    match. That serve you did…”

    “Reverse slice,” said Dana proudly. “I’ve been working with Mike on it for a few months now and I’ve finally got it down.”

    “I
    have no idea what that means but it was impressive,” Alice laughed,
    kissing Dana again. Moving backwards, she held the tennis player’s hand
    and looked around the airport. “How do we get out of this crazy place?”

    Strong
    arms wrapped around Alice’s waist and Dana rested her face next to the
    blonde’s. Her breath warm on pale skin as she murmured teasingly,
    “Someone’s in a hurry.”

    “You
    don’t want me to be?” asked Alice, arching an eyebrow as she looked at
    the athlete while instinctively pressing into the warmth of Dana’s
    embrace. A glint appeared in her brown gaze and Alice said in off hand
    tones, “I guess someone isn’t in the mood to have some hot but sort of
    icky because we’re not sure if the sheets are actually clean hotel *****.”     

    “Gross,
    Al,” said Dana, scrunching up her nose and bumping the writer gently
    forward with her hips. “And I’ll have you know my mother brought sheets
    from home for me. She’s got the same paranoia about them that
    apparently you have.” 

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    Comments

    1. OK, yoou made me late for work again. Somehow when you post a new chapter, I have to read it immediately. You do the happy Danish SO well. And I loved the ugliest dog in the world story.

    2. ahhh – back from the dark side – it feels so good! Love happy danish! And she does love her lots and lots!

      They were almost like a never ending wave of reassurance that never failed to splash over you when you were feeling your very lowest and helped to wake you up to the fact that people cared for you. – What a great line!

      The list of things she loved, in chronological order! so fitting.
      Dreiser – simply awesome!

    4. This was too poofy. I don’t know that is just the word that comes to mind. I should also say that poofy is extremely good. I loved how this chapter made all my Danish anxiety dissapear…. and now I have to listen to all those songs that Alice put on that cd. ;-)

    6. Ah, I love Leslie Gore. And this story is totally Danish escapism. I love the Helacious, but ah, Danish is so unrelentingly sweet and adorable.

      We’ve talked about most of this already but…

      1. How cute is Alice and her mix CD?

      2. The big bucks from public radio discussion

      3. Poop logs. Cos they are. And tootsie roll tainted fingers

      4. The Ugliest Dog in the world. I’m still so traumatised from him

      5. Rich’s strangely girly laugh and the bet. Ha! Not a huge sum of money, but definitely one that will get some decent sushi.

      And finally, your reference to the lines. Aw.

    10. It makes me really happy to see there is no Danish love lost here. I think I’ve said this before, but just you underestand Danish–the danish I think would exist if they didn’t exist on a tv show that needed to create weird ass drama in order to tell stories.
      As mch as I am enjoying your helacious story, this ode to Danish is first in y heart of hearts…

      Love to see Dana so in love–it’s really nice (I hate using the word “nice” to describe something, but it is).

      Thanks for this story-it makes what season 3 might be, a lot more bearable.

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