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The line begins to blur PT 5
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“I can’t tell you now………………………………….. You want to get your bike back and hear what Havoc’s got to say. They sent Dad word that we could go to Mear’s house the bike was there.. ………….I’ll drive”
I didn’t like the feel of this shit at all. Now I had Mark to lie to me just like everyone else.
We drive in silence to Elliot Mears’s place.
The music is pumping. The ground is pulsing with energy. We pull up and see all the Outsiders parked on the lawn. This is how gladiators must have felt in the old days of Rome I think to myself. They pat us down as we walk in. They take our weapons with the promise of safe return. I scan the room quickly checking for her but she is not around. Elliot must have finally choose a side cause none of my crew was anywhere in sight. So much for chilling here. I check for Elliot but he’s nowhere to be seen.
A sexy and I mean sexy brunette offers us beers. I except but I don’t drink. Mark goes to take a swig and I nod at him like don’t.
The ugly one is sad in the corner. He sees me and his whole demeanor changes. He makes like he’s gonna come over but then Havoc appears with Carmen on his left side. She doesn’t look at me………. Fine.
“How’s my girl? You look very sexy tonight.” Havoc says.
“Can I have my bike back? I ask.
“Ah straight to business. I like that. It’s out back. Carmen be a dear and bring Shane the keys.” He says, and she does not move
The stereo asks “Are the mother fuckers ready for the father fuckers?”
Mark looks like a blank piece of paper. He is definitely working both sides but why?
“Shane did you like my real gift?” He meant Carmen.
“Not really. I don’t fuck people I can’t trust.”
“You know it’s funny she said the same thing. Weird. Well I am sorry maybe next time I’ll join the two of you in your dislike for each other………………….. She was gone for a while.”
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That was fuckin’ fantastic . . . shit I don’t know what Shane’s gonna’ do . . . I mean if she tells any of her crew about what that bastard Havoc wants to do . . . Carmen will die, then her, and then Mark . . . BUT if she goes and becomes part of Havoc’s crew . . . she gets Carmen and she gets to be number . . . 3? I guess . . . anyways that’s pretty much all she gets . . . I wonder if Curt has any idea of what’s goin on, I mean, after all . . . his own son is trying to sell him out . . . Anyways, POST SOON! I WANT MORE A.S.A.P. . . . WHICH MEANS NOW!!!! I CAN’T WAIT ANYMORE!!!! LMFAO!!!! LYLAS;-p
a) love the frequent updatesc) love this story in its entiretyd) great father fucking job!!
That was a great chap. Can’t believe Mark is a damn traitor.Shane & Carmen need to come up w/ a plan so they can get out of this mess. Lovin this story. Plz post soon.
I really like the alternate universe you set up here. Great feel, your writing really has a frantic sort of pace that works well for this story.
I don’t really know why but I’m totally fascinated with this story, it’s kind of weird I have to say, but it’s really really captivating :D Please keep posting!
WOoOOoOoOh loved the fact that you threw in some Peaches lyrics :D
Too good. I like it more and more. I am addict. I want more..
I love this story, another great chapter. Keep up the good work (please)! lol