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The line begins to blur PT 5
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“So your telling me if I betray my whole crew. I get Carmen. And you get my skills. And that’s it?
“Well yes and no. You get Carmen when I don’t need her, after all appearances must be kept. And I get your services. I don’t mind sharing isn’t that what family is all about. Now for beating my Johnny, I fixed up your bike nice and proper. Run along I am sure you and Marky here have a lot to talk about. You can take Carmen if you want.”
I get and my bike and sit there for a second. I feel her weight on the back of me smell her familiar scent… “You see the two of you are so hot together. Baby you be nice to Shane.”
“I want my gun back.”
"Of course." He says. He goes in comes out with our heat minus the bullets. He laughed and said I won’t need them.
Mark pulls out first but I don’t follow him.
I turn and head in the opposite direction.
We are riding for an hour before I pull up to the familiar beach house. I needed to be somewhere no one really knew about. I make the impossible call first.
“Look I am in trouble just let me stay here for a couple of days. Please Danes for us…..” I have to think she will help….. The line is quiet and she reluctantly agrees.
I pull into the garage, the guard opens the front door hands me the extra set of keys then he leaves. If we need anything he says we should ring him. ….what ever the fuck that means. Fucking rich people.
Carmen…. Mom …..Mark. Add them up and all you have are lies. I go for Dana’s liquor cabinet. More Patron. I drink it right out of its fancy shaped bottle. Carmen just stares with those dark eyes of hers. I don’t know where to start with her. She comes over to my side of the room; she takes the bottle from my hands. She takes my hand in hers. She kisses me.
You see this is the problem. She never plays fair.
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That was fuckin’ fantastic . . . shit I don’t know what Shane’s gonna’ do . . . I mean if she tells any of her crew about what that bastard Havoc wants to do . . . Carmen will die, then her, and then Mark . . . BUT if she goes and becomes part of Havoc’s crew . . . she gets Carmen and she gets to be number . . . 3? I guess . . . anyways that’s pretty much all she gets . . . I wonder if Curt has any idea of what’s goin on, I mean, after all . . . his own son is trying to sell him out . . . Anyways, POST SOON! I WANT MORE A.S.A.P. . . . WHICH MEANS NOW!!!! I CAN’T WAIT ANYMORE!!!! LMFAO!!!! LYLAS;-p
a) love the frequent updatesc) love this story in its entiretyd) great father fucking job!!
That was a great chap. Can’t believe Mark is a damn traitor.Shane & Carmen need to come up w/ a plan so they can get out of this mess. Lovin this story. Plz post soon.
I really like the alternate universe you set up here. Great feel, your writing really has a frantic sort of pace that works well for this story.
I don’t really know why but I’m totally fascinated with this story, it’s kind of weird I have to say, but it’s really really captivating :D Please keep posting!
WOoOOoOoOh loved the fact that you threw in some Peaches lyrics :D
Too good. I like it more and more. I am addict. I want more..
I love this story, another great chapter. Keep up the good work (please)! lol