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the long and winding road chp 8
“721 days in a long time Tina “
“It is and it felt like a life sentence – please give me some hope Bette “
Tina knew that this is almost the point of no return. Would Bette see how much she longed for her — did Bette have the same desire for her ? She knew Bette was looking carefully at her – weighing up what ? Whether they could overcome the obstacles of their past ? Whether Bette wanted Tina to be part of her son’s life.
“Its getting late Tina and I’m really tired “
“I’m sorry Bette – you’re right – its late and its been one hell of a day “
Bette gestured for the waiter and paid for the meal – waving away Tina’s protest.
Tina was aching for Bette – just any physical contact would do – even holding hands. Bette struggled to get up – Tina hesitated but reached out and helped her up.
They left the dining room holding hands – Tina knew that they looked a stunning couple – they always had. Tina gave a confident smile to a woman who had been checking her out all night – -the look said — I’m taken.
Tina wanted the two minute walk to the evaluator to take two hours. Just feeling so close to Bette was wonderful – she felt alive and content at the same time.
But as they reached the lift the door sprang open – Tina felt crushed.
“I will see you tomorrow “
“Not so fast “
Bette stepped into the lift and grabbing Tina’s hand pulled her in with her. Tina almost stumbled but was caught neatly by Bette.
“You are not going anywhere tonight – except to heaven “
Bette said wrapping her arms around Tina.
“Babe – are you sure ? “
“I think that 721 days has been long enough to dream about holding you again – I have missed you so much “
“Bette – you know I have missed you “
Bette pressed the button for the 5th floor and just held Tina for the short journey. She opened her eyes when the life pinged open. They stepped out together and still holding hands they walked to Bette’s room.
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(50 votes, average: 4.60 out of 5)
This a digustingly romantic story and I am thoroughly enjoying this! Upward and onward to the NC-17!!!!!
omg… bette in boxers… i just wet myself… fuck this is so good… bring on the love making… nice and slow.., now i remember when i was pregnant.. i didn’t want anything slow… or easy… so baby bring it on… we are all waiting…
I adore this story!!!! Such a good reconnection and yes thoroughly romantic! Post more soon!! ;)
that was wonderful. i love how they are reconnecting. already this relationship feels stronger. Ally, come back to the dark side…forget the diet!! of course I’m saying that as I eat my afternoon salad… if only it had chocolate sprinkles on it! lol
Great chapter…..so Henrys history…bring it on..
Ally, it’s really nice to see them for a change with no hesitations and no doubts. Full speed ahead.
Looking forward to more reconnection… : )
just one word: beautifull!!!!!!!!
god ally i cant get this picture of bette in boxers yum!this is sooooooo good.please post soon,
good lord you’re good. thank you, thank you, thank you.
good lord you’re good. thank you, thank you, thank you.
That was beautiful, romantic, amazing
ally this story has been comin really well and the love makin is to die for betty in boxers omfg ..i agree with yall tht ths a fuckin hot sight ….
Hell boxer shorts. love to sleep in them. Easyier to get off. Bring on the hot sex. Both of them needs this reconnection. Tina will be in London when the baby is born. Thanks
wow that was great! amazing writting :) Post soon!.
Awesome, and your bringing it along at just the right pace. Though it is driving us crazy. Bette, boxer shorts, pregnant, OMG. Come on don’t know how long we can wait for the next update. Love your stories.
there is only so much teasing i can take!!
WOW!!!! that was very romantic and loving. Thank you Please post more soon
Oh God, now after reading this awesome chapter, I, like Bette and Tina, also don’t want to sleep… So goddamn emotional and I’m loving it!
Amazing as always – I applaud you!
Wonderful Ally. So tender.
Wonderful! More please, pretty :)
Oh wow! Your stories warm my heart, set my mind racing and do very interesting things to other bits of me! Always a pleasure. Thanks.
*sob* this is so good.
i have to stop eating my dinner because i loved this chapter so much i almost choked on my food…i love B&T together and i hope you’ll keep thrm that way
Great story as usual.
ally, ever the romantic and your fans love it! More pls!
This is so good! Bring on the lovemaking!!!
Damn, Bette can make anything look sexy. You used one my favorite words, lascivious. In my early 20’s some co-workers and I were to learn a new word, spell it and define it. I never did remember how to spell it but to this day I love saying it. I am so glad that they are reconnecting. Life is to short and too lonely to not take advantage of spending that special time with the one that you love.
I am jonesing on here. Where is that next chapter? Thanks!
Henry, who? Seriously how could any man think they could compete with Bette Porter? I know LH made pregnancy look beautiful and sexy. I’m sure JB could’ve done the same.
I see it now, Tina on her way to London; even if it means she has to hang onto the right wing of the airplane to get there. Ok, Ally; time for you to make these 2 kittens purr.
I love this story and you bring our girls together so well…please don’t leave us hanging too long.
I promised you a comment when I got home tonight, so here goes. This is the most romantic chapter you have ever written so far. My heart just melted at that last paragraph babe, when Tina was telling Bette about repaying the love and tenderness Bette showed her the first time they made love. Ally, you are an amazing writer and a wonderful friend. Thank you!
Aww… this is so sweet… fantastic fuel for a hopeless romantic!
Absolutly amazing! i enjoyed so much this chapter and their reconection. Don’t let me waiting so much please!
Simply beautiful. Thanks!
This is getting good and awesome!
Oh my Ally, you did it again, leaving me all hot and bothered, and my wife isn’t even at home. Taking matters in own hand I suppose….
Oh this chapter was really beautiful and very romantic, I loved. Please post more soon. You´re a great writer Ally, congrats! ;)
I love this romance. Slow, sweet, soft… I do find it a tad strange that it’s all happening so quickly and easily; I guess it’s the mild cynical side of me where I think that anything to do with love is hard. Well that’s been my life experience…but in the end I guess I must still say that i’ve been fortunate enough to have loved…if not loved in return.
Just an awsome chapter. I love that both B&T are opening up and truefully talking to one an other. They REALLY deserve this time together and this reconnection on both the physically, emotional and mental levels. Don’t hold back now, bring it on :o)
Oh wow what a wonderful romantic story. Just what I needed after a gawdawful morning. *happy sigh* .
Exquisite! Thanks ally.
Great chapter. I had to laugh when Tina was kissing Bette and thought it was better – no stubble. I have to agree.
Oh, you are SO good at leaving us wanting more!
Ally, you must be a romantic at heart, why? because you can see it in your writing. Thank you and i await your next chapter.