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The Most Distance Course
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“But I need to tell Sabastian the truth, I was the one who came back first, if…”
“The only things you can do now is praying, you cannot do anything, do you understand? If you go reveal yourself you will be killed and Tina will same being punished, is that what you want? Huh?”
“I…”
“Use your brain, Bette Porter, it is clear now someone here trying to kill you, you have to be alert, right now nowhere is safe unless you stay with us, do you hear me?”
“What about Tina?”
“Honestly, I don’t know.” Shane shakes her head. “This thing seldom happened before, glad that the boss said he won’t kill her this time, but still not something good.”
“What, so he can just kill the person who didn’t follow his order?”
“Why are you so surprised?”
“It’s inhuman and unethical.”
“How funny, a used to be bully teaching me about ethical…”
“Shane, please…” Sam says in a helpless tone.
“What? Am I’m not correct? She did treat you like an ass”
Bette frowns while Sam sighs. Treat her like an ass? She just met Sam, what is Shane talking about?
“You don’t remember, do you?” Shane says ironically.
“Shane, can we please just focus on Tina?”
Right, Tina, not Justine, everyone called Tina in her new name, why the hell does Sam know Tina’s old name? She might be close to Tina by being her servant, but how come Shane says she treated her badly?
“Just…tell her, Sam, or I will do it myself.”
Sam rolls her eyes, but Bette can see that her mind is shaken by Shane’s word.
“Tell me what?” Bette shakes her head.
“My fall name is Sam Makavejev, I was in the same class with you in Wallace High five years ago, you did treat me like an ass during those days.”
Now she finally memories everything, Sam, the coffee girl, who need to sit in the back of the classroom because Adele stole her sit away.
“Fuck…” Bette whispers, now she believes it’s karma. “This is fucking crazy, are we having a classmate reunite or something?”
“If it really is, you will have to kill me to invite you here.” Sam makes a light joke, trying to ease the tension between them.
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Author Notes:
Hey guy, I believe some of you might find that this chapter is also hard to read, but some part of this chapter was base on the true story. One of my friends used to be in the underworld and he has witnessed the horrible scene. After listening to his story I really want to write it down and let the others know about it.
As you can see in the teaser, this is the last chapter that carried the drama between Bette and Tina so far, which I believe it was the best timing to tell what happened to Tina years ago. I will fix it after today and yes I already finished the next chapter. So don’t worry, be patient and wait for them to get together. Chapter 16, revealing the missing 5 years.
I don’t mean to be nasty but you really must check your grammar and spelling because it is detracting from what is a good story! Please have some proof your writing.
Yes hard to read!
Hate cliffhangers :-(
Await you posting next Chapter, soon please.
SG
Hi SassyGran:
I am trying to, but I want to make it better, so it will still take a small while.
Thanks for your comment!
CJ
Hi! Thanks for the chapter!
So, who is the person trying to set up Bette? Can it be Sam because of jealousy? Because i really tired of her.
Waiting for the next!
Hi Zhenya:
I know, Sam is not my favorite character either, but don’t you think it’s good to know there’s another person love Tina then Bette? Sam did help Tina a lot.
Thanks for your comment!
CJ
Maybe Sam helped, but i doubt that she’ll be ok whan she find out about feelings between B&T
Wow, that was a horrible scene, so cool blooded ????.
I wonder who set up the trap for Bette, must be Jodi or maybe L?
Despite the horror, i had to laugh a little bit about Bette’s words of there was a reunion when Sam told her who she was.
That Cooper bastard, to hurt his daughter like that, he is a evil, bloody bastard, what ever he did to Tina i hope she will survive.
About the reasers, please update soon, can’t hardly wait!!!
Hi Bibi28:
Indeed! But truly, the boss in the underground can do anything he wants to his people, even his children.
My friend told me that even if his boss’s son did something wrong, he would still punish him just like others. To them, rules mean everything and they need to follow everything he said.
This setup person will be very hard to be found, but who knows? Maybe Tina will figure it out.
I sure will update as soon as possible, just need to make it better.
Thanks for your comment, hope you like the new chapter!
CJ
Hi CJ:
Excellent chapter. Poor Tina, I think now every reader will understand why she could forgive Bette after what happened in high school, she has ‘thick skin’, as we said in my hometown’. Tina was always treated very badly either by her criminal father and by the authorities, as the FBI Aaron.
Remembering when Tina asked Bette, five years ago, if she would chase her if Tina were a criminal, and Bette was perplexed with the question; then when it was Tina who suggested her to become a detective; now I think it’s clear to me that was what Tina really wanted since she was a teen.
Hi CJ:
Tina knew that her future was already ‘written in stone’, she knew that her father will come back for her, to make her part of her criminal empire, she knew she was bound to his criminal activity; she couldn’t escape, because her father will catch her anyway; she didn’t have the help outside the criminal world, because the ‘so-called good people’ hate her because of her father and her personal weirdness, only Bette was her hope, and deep down inside she wanted Bette to be the one to capture her, to stop all the crime, the pain, the cruelty of the criminal world in her life; to be her redeemer, her defender from the hands of her father and his organization; even when she couldn’t admit it. But, things turned a little different, with the participation of Adele 5 years ago, and Tina had to be strong and survive in her father’s world, making a plan to flee from it with the help of her friends Shane and Sam, and suddenly, her old and vivid flame, Bette Porter, came to her life again.
Hi CJ
I know Tina has been punished badly by her criminal father, but she will resist, and it’s time for Bette to ‘mature’, to be wiser; they have to find who is threatening Tina’s or Bette’s lives in the organization, who took the 50 k, and they have to speed up on their plan to flee away and come clean (so hard this part, but it may be possible in this story).
My guess is, that Jody is behind of the lost money, she is not alone, but she is mad given that her source of drugs that was Tom, is gone, and because she hates Tina and probably wants to be the favorite of Sebastian Cooper and of course, perhaps she wants Bette too.
Sorry, I’ve unleashed my imagination; but this was a pretty great chapter. Thanks again, waiting for the next one.
P
totally with ya when is Bette gonna wise up and toughen up.
Looks like Tina survives her punishment, but I figure she’ll need plastic surgery. Devil-dad will make sure everyone else can “see” the consequences of disobedience. Now she’ll have a scars on the outside to match those on the inside??? Uugh!!!!!
Wondering who set Bette up with the mysterious ph call when Shane&Bette were riding in the vehi on way back to the compound???? Went back to chapter 14 and found on pg 3 that Sam gave Bette the phone that had only 2 numbers.
whoever called knew that Bette wouldn’t know the Boss’ voice. I think that person also knew that Bette woudn’t follow Tina’s explicit warnings & instructions. Ol bette could be counted on to do her own thing.
She was there what a day or 2 before she wandered out into the garden and got jumped by Jodi (who she couldn’t even fend off)? I think Shane had to rescue her.
On pg 14 of same chptr when Tom,Shane, & Bette were talking w druglord Wang,Shane noticed that B was fooling with a device (believe this was a ph from her Informant contact named “L”)in her pocket. Shane gave B a glaring stare to cut it out.
Wonder if the ph signal actually went to the “good” guys???
Shane & Sam are the two closest ti Tina & they have been thru the fire with her. They are the ones who can’t be thrilled that clueless Bette showed up!!
gosh i hope im wrong, but do the words of psychopath-dad on pg 14 of this chpter reveal that he’s been “touching” his daughter inappropriately??? Justine balled up her fists so tightly that her nails drew blood.
I strongly believe I know who L is but I won’t reveal it cuz if your story leads to L’s identity I don’t want to spoil the story for you. I too believe that Sam set up Bette with the boss thinking Bette would be killed. However that didn’t work and Tina paid the price. I also liked when Bette tells an injured Tina that she loves her. Can’t wait for next chapter.
I don’t mean to be nasty but you really must check your grammar and spelling because it is detracting from what is a good story! Please have some proof your writing.