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    The Most Distance Course

     

    Chapter 14 King of Club

     

    Bette sits in the corner of the private jet, burying herself in numbers and works, trying to ignore the fact that she’s surrounded by a bunch of criminals.

    Including Bette, there are seven people going on this business. Just like she thought, the entire flight is peace and quiet, no one makes an extra sound, no one chat with each other, only the captain’s announcing coming out from the plane, and of course, the captain is one of the members in Cooper Industry.

     

     

    One day ago.

    “I’m heading to Hong Kong tomorrow,” Bette whispered to the small device. “Meeting Mr. Wang, the receptionist of the “Triad”, one of the biggest faction in Hong Kong, Cooper Industry’s the soon-to-become biggest buyer in Southeast Asia.”

    *I thought it will take you more time to start the outdoor business,* Aaron said in a sarcastic tone, he lay back to his seat. *But well done, Porter.*

    “The plane will leave tomorrow around four o’clock, they will give us each a mobile phone, only Justine Cooper and the person in charge have our phone number, the head of the drug is Tom Mater.”

    Bette repeated what Shane told her, she silently hoped that the brunette didn’t lie to her.

    *I reckon that L left you the same model phone, right?*

    “Yes.” Bette said, clearly this “L” is not only smart but also really thoughtful.

    *Great, use the phone we are using now and send us the location as soon as you get there, we will wait until they trade their goods and arrest them.*

    “Isn’t it too fast? This is my first mission, I don’t want to be suspicious by others on my first business deal.”

    *We don’t have time, Porter, when they make a deal it will mean that tons of cocaine are sent to the East, If Chinese government find out, we will have to be responsible for this. Moreover, we haven’t even had any clue how they pass the customs with those amounts of drugs.*

    “Shouldn’t we wait? I thought this is the first time the Cooper industry carry cocaine to China, they would not bring that much of quantity if they haven’t found any buyers yet. If we act rashly and alert the enemy, they will know that we’re already watching them.”

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    Comments

    1. Ok, so what can i say

      First – i don’t like Sam – seems in the future will be problem with her.
      Second – Tina too deep in the criminal world. Maybe she’s not killing people, selling druds and etc by own hands, but she taking orders to do that. And for me it’s even worse.
      Third – i don’t like that Bette helps to sell even more drugs sealing deal with chinese.

      I love Tibette but if in the end Bette will have to choose – be with Tina and become criminal like her or on law side – i would like that she chose law.

      Waiting for the next!

      • Hi Zhenya:

        Thanks for the comment.
        As you can see, this is a part of the plan, I’ve implanted lots of clues in it, which will tell you what is going to happen next. And of course, I will explain what Tina is plotting, maybe three or two weeks later.
        Personally, I believe Bette didn’t want to be a criminal also, but sometimes, being in that kind of situation, committing a crime is the only way to survive.
        Love your loyalty for Tibette, don’t worry, the truth will reveal very soon.

    2. Hi!

      I have not good feeling about Tina’s plan because she practicaly sent Bette in the trap. What if Bette can’t reach agreement with chinese boss? Tina can’t be sure she can. Than basically they all would killed by chinese.

      Thank you for the update and i hope you feeling well!

      • Hi Angel1981:

        Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in the business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big group like Triad.

        Thanks for your comment and hope you like it.

      • Hi Angel1981:

        Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in te business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big gang like Triad.

        Thanks for the comment and hope you like the story.

      • Hi Angel1981:

        Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in the business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big gangster like Triad.

        Thanks for the comment and hope you like the story.

      • Hi Zhenya:

        Thanks for the comment.
        As you can see, this is a part of the plan, I’ve implanted lots of clues in it, which will tell you what is going to happen next. And of course, I will explain what Tina is plotting, maybe three or two weeks later.
        Personally, I believe Bette didn’t want to be a criminal also, but sometimes, being in that kind of situation, committing a crime is the only way to survive.
        Love your loyalty for Tibette, don’t worry, the truth will reveal very soon.

    3. Hi Angel1981:

      Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in the business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big group like Triad.
      Thanks for your comments and hope you like it.

    4. Hi Angel1981:

      Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in the business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big gangster like Triad.

      Thanks for the comment and hope you like the story.

    5. Hi Angel1981 :

      Apparently, Wang had made an agreement with Tina before all of it, the letter, what Tina was reading was the letter written by Wang, it’s there deal. They knew about the plan to replace the drug lord and ferret out the undercover. If Bette didn’t show up, Shane will do the work, that’s why Shane asked Bette about how her work progress. Basically, Chinese gangsters won’t kill people in the business deal easily unless they offend them badly, especially the big gangster like Triad.

      Thanks for the comment and hope you like the story.

    6. Hi CJ:

      Okay, let me see if I am understanding what it is in this thriller chapter :

      Tina or JC knows already that Bette is police working with the FBI.

      Sam and Shane are in Tina’s side and Sam partially knows Tina’s plans.

      ‘L’ has been captured (or is allied) of Tina, because Sam mentioned, ‘thanks to L giving us the chance to find out who these people are and the true identity of Bette Porter’; does that means that the others traveling with Bette and Shane are also related to the FBI?

      Apparently, this was Tina’s plot to rid of Tom, right?

      I’m not sure, but being as smart as she is I doubt Tina is telling every point of her plan to Sam.

      Fantastic; waiting for the next one.

      Thanks.

      P

      • Hi proteonomics:
        L has not been caught, he is a two-sided character in the organization. He is an undercover but also providing Tina the information from the cops. Those people who went to the business trip were not the FBIs’ but they did have the record working with the police.
        Yes, Tina’s plan to kill Tom, in my word, is murder a person with a borrowed knife.
        Sam is an interesting person in this story, I will mention it in the other chapter.

    7. Hi Zhenya:

      Thanks for the comment.
      As you can see, this is a part of the plan, I’ve implanted lots of clues in it, which will tell you what is going to happen next. And of course, I will explain what Tina is plotting, maybe three or two weeks later.
      Personally, I believe Bette didn’t want to be a criminal also, but sometimes, being in that kind of situation, committing a crime is the only way to survive.
      Love your loyalty for Tibette, don’t worry, the truth will reveal very soon.

    8. Hi proteonomics:
      L has not been caught, he is a two-sided character in the organization. He is an undercover but also providing Tina the information from the cops. Those people who went to the business trip were not the FBIs’ but they did have the record working with the police.
      Yes, Tina’s plan to kill Tom, in my word, is murder a person with a borrowed knife.
      Sam is an interesting person in this story, I will mention it in the other chapter.

    9. Hi CJ,

      Very interesting chapter!

      You already answered some questions the others brought up, so i am gonna wait for the next chapter.

      I really love this story!!!

      I hope you feel better soon!

    10. Great story and thanks for writing. Hope you are better. I hope I don’thave to wait until my next birthday before Tina and Bette make their relationship less formal and no business!

    11. could be way wrong, but I think Justine(Tina) is in the biz to bring down her murderous, whimp of a dad! We were 1st introduced to Tina as a petrified 5yr old who watched her Mother blown to smitherines by a ruthless FBI agent and the stew kicked out of her by the same. That same asshole cursed her and said she was “just like father”, remember that? Anyway, Gangster dad ran to save his own ass. We later see Tina as a tender-hearted teenager who did her best to protect the Aunt who took her in. She went out of herway to mind her own business and just get thru high school. After the humiliation and betrayal of trust by Bette and her hateful, phony friends, Tina was once again thrust into a kill or die world. I totally understand the unemotional, cold heart that Tina now has. Still think she is working with the mystery man L. Hmmm remember the kind-hearted FBI agent that tried to protect little Tina? Finally, when Bette found “herself” only moments from CERTAIN execution by gangster Wang, she used all the knowledge&skills she had to talk her way out!!!! She had NOT set out to replace drug lord Tom Maynard but essentially that’s what happened!!! Hmmmmm Tina teaching her a lesson???? Or cleverly drawing her into the inner circle so perhaps she can reveal more??? Wonder if Bette will learn that she doesn’t and isn’t suppose to have all the answers

      • Hi DumplinT:

        Wow! Thanks for summing that up! I was so grateful you read my story well!
        As for your comment, I have to say, this is not the original crime story just like you said, everything happened was part of the plan, I won’t tell too much to ruin the surprise later on. But indeed, Bette truly found herself in this business, but no, Tina didn’t teach her a lesson, but she did let Bette take the place for some reason.
        I hope you like this story, and thanks again for your comment. Hope to see you next week, your comment really does help and give me the courage to keep writing.

    12. Well this story really keeps the Writer on her toes!
      In no way can it be termed ‘light reading’!
      I almost love the Comments as much as the posts!
      My love of Tibette makes me anxious at times but I will keep the faith. I cannot believe that Tina is as bad as she seems and await the reveal of her true identity. I also wait for Bette to get stronger.
      Anyway this is not my Story it’s your’s and I love reading it. I await, with bated breath, the next post.
      Sorry you’ve been ill and trust you are recovered.
      Please post soon.
      SG

      • Hi SassyGran:

        I am sorry to let you feel this way, it not my intention to make the reader have those feelings.
        I love Tibette very much, and please have faith that everything will be in the right way, Tina has to do this thing for the proper reason, I will explain it.
        As for the hard to read story, I believe all sufferings have their reward, and something can go on while developing their love.
        Thanks for the comment and hope to see you next week!

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