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The Most Distance Course

“I was stupid, thinking too much, I misunderstood your word.”
“What word?”
“Friend, we were just friend during those time.”
“But we were, I thought you were okay with it.”
“Yes, I were, but…maybe deep down, I just want a bit more than our friendship.”
“I don’t get it, I thought friendship was all you want from me.”
“Who said that?”
Tina rolls her eyes. “Bette, please don’t make me remind you that during high school, you are the most popular girl in Wallace High, it’s impossible for you to fall for me.”
“Says who?” Bette folds her arm in her chest.
“Says the smartest girl that once conquered the entire school?”
“That’s the most ridiculous thing I’ve ever heard.” Bette shakes her head. “Tina, I like you, really, for the entire time, after you brought me to your house, after you showed me your works, I was truly, deeply having a feeling for you.”
“Then why…? What were you thinking…when you pulled out my painting and gave it to Adele? Why did you do that?”
Bette opens her mouth, but speechless.
Wow…never have expected it will be so soon…
“I was lost,” Bette hangs her head down. “I don’t know what I was thinking by the moment, Adele’s thread kept floating in my brain, eating away my intellect. I couldn’t think straight, maybe because of the guilt I felt for the girl who killed herself, and maybe…I thought Adele wouldn’t do anything horrible just mocking your works, she used that girl to hold against me, she died because of me, and I knew I would never ever forget myself that I caused a human life’s just for a stupid reason.”
Tina’s heart softens when she sees Bette’s body gesture, which is true remorse.
“Are you still feeling guilty about it?”
“Yeah,” Bette nods. “Every single day…which was terrible, I can’t sleep, I can’t rest, I need to keep myself busy just to make sure those bad memories won’t come into mine mind, I tried so many times just to do something right, but it’s not helping…”
“You kept dreaming about her.”
“Yeah…After that horrible day, I tried to find you, to say how sorry I was, it was not until Alice told me what Adele had done to you then made me realized how selfish I was, how terrible I was as a human. When I couldn’t find you, not only the girl’s face kept appearing in my dream, but—”
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Hi CJ,
That was such a beautiful chapter!!
They connected, heart, body and soul. And now my wish for them is to make the dream of Tina come true.
Let them live their life, happy, full of love and with their future children, but i don’t think that will happen soon.
I needed this chapter full of love and connecting between our girls!!!
Thank you so much for the update!!!!
HI Bibi28:
I love the interaction between Bette and Tina, I spent double times to finish it just to make it better. There were so many good bed scene in other writer’s story, I was so afraid I would ruin it.
Yes, this chapter they finally clarify their feelings and came clean to each other, a good relationship always contains a good conversation, I like when they both able to listen and understand the others feeling.
I will try to write more these kind of chapter but the story must go on, and I’m so sorry for letting you guys waited for so long, don’t worry the loving Tibette will continue for a while.
Thanks for your reply, Bibi, again, I’m so glad you like this story and have you as a reader, hope to see you next week!
CJ
I am so glad that you write this incredible story CJ!!!
I have to work next weekend, but i will try to read the next chapter asap!!!!
Hi! Thanks for the great chapter!
Finally! And great job to put kiss from s5 in your story, and picture too!
Waiting find more about what police found.
Hi Zhenya:
Thanks for your comment!
Yeah, I love that scene in season 5 and was the only one I yelled “Yes!” so loud that my mom asked if there’s something happened.
What do you think the police found? Welcome to give a guest?
CJ
Hm, i think it’s or prostitutes who worked on organization or illegal emigrants who wanted to land in US
Hi CJ:
Wonderful chapter. As you said before, there is a turning point between this chapter and the former one.
It’s not a coincidence that it comes along with the change in Bette’s strength and maturity, and with Tina’s softness when learning that Bette was at her side in her room while she was recovering.
I’m not very sure what Carmen meant when she talked to Bette, about Tina and told her “Don’t trust Justine…She’s more…crafty and elusive, than you thought”; is it because Tina has involved Bette as one of the criminal heads in this organization? Is Tina trying to have more heads in the command to give the big blow? Certainly, Carmen knows something it’s being cooked in the criminal organization, but where are her loyalties?
I like Tina’s dreams, whatever they could be possible or not, and I like that they talked and came clear about high school, about Bette’s remorse for the suicidal girl.
This loving break in the story was very needed, and now we’ll see what it’ll come.
The women bodies that were found buried and that will involve Cooper’s organization, are they related to human trafficking? This is a topic that I’m researching too.
Great story CJ, I’ll be waiting for the next weekend for more.
P
Hi proteonomics:
Just like you said, Tina didn’t know whether Bette had feelings to her or not, and Bette, I also think that she really want to change who she was, she did what she can do and stayed beside Tina. During Tina’s recovery, what she needed most was not any strong medicine, Bette’s accompany was what she needed the most.
Just like I said in chapter 15, Tina is not the only candidate to inherit the company, the six heads also have the chance to become the boss, Carmen was a brilliant woman who could survive in the organization for so long, she must figure out something and want Bette to be careful, as one of the heads, Bette is on the same bridge with her. It’s not weird if Carmen guard against Tina.
Among all the story, I think Bette’s biggest progress was to confirm what she had done, admit mistakes is the most difficult things after making something wrong.
Sadly to say, no, it has nothing to do with the human traffic, but certainly has something to do with one of the six heads, I will slowly reveal it in the next two weeks.
Thank you so much, proteonomics, your comment is always what I’ve been waiting for, make my story better every time. I’m also very looking forward to your next chapter! Again, Thanks for your comment!
CJ
It’s a lovely chapter,it broke my heart learning how hard life for Tina after she left the school, wish everything didnt have to turn that way, but happy that she finally could have her Bette back in her life and love her back as she love her in return. Wondering why Tina’s body was fragile, why she is sick? What kind of illness does she has that might cost her her life?
Anyway..well done CJ..tks for sharing your work :)
Hi Silentreader:
So good to see you!
Yes, Tina has been through a long hard life in these five years, Bette also didn’t live an easy life, I know the story has gone for a while, but there is still a long way to go for Tina and Bette’s settle life.
Tina’s health is the saddest thing I’ve written, it’s in the next chapter, I really hope things didn’t need to go that way, but it’s the reason why Tina has to stay in the organization.
Thanks for the waiting and the comment! Hope to see you next week.
CJ
Thank you for this great Chapter which was just what was needed.
I am still concerned about so many things in the story and look forward for the rest of the story to unfold and, I hope, put my concerns to rest! I can but hope I am in your talented hands.
Please post soon.
SG
Hi SassyGran:
I’m sorry for letting you wait for so long, it’s a lovely chapter but tough to write,
I will try my very best to give them both a good ending, but the rainbow after the rainstorm is always the most beautiful, there still are lots of quests they need to face.
Be patient and wait for the smart Tina to start her plan! Thanks for your comment and hope to see you next week!
CJ
I hope those bodies belonged to Adele and Kelly, :P
Great story Crystal. Cant wait for next week.
Hi AReader:
Great guess! But no, it will be too easy for those two. No worries, they will be in the future chapter.
Thanks for the comment!
CJ