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The Most Distance Course
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The little creature looked dumbly at him, like everything going on was a dream, a bad nightmare she had ever have.
“Nice to meet you,” He said gently. “My name is James, what is yours?”
Little girl sniffed, the agent smiled warmly to her.
“Can you tell me your name?”
“That fucking bastard has escaped!”
Before the little girl could say anything, an angry agent walked into the house, he walked straight to the little girl, grabbed her collar and effortlessly leaned up.
“Where the fuck is your father going?”
“God, Kornbluth! Put her down!” The first agent yelled at the angry agent, he could see the girl’s face was turning blue. “Put her down! She cannot breathe!”
Kornbluth pulled the petite body out from the closet and hardly tossed her on the ground, fresh blood immediately flew down the girl’s head, he pulled the pistol out of his gun bag and pointed at her.
“You better answer the fucking question.”
James quickly blocked the little girl with his body, Kornbluth’s gun was now pointing at James’ head.
“Jesus, can’t you see she’s injured? Why are you being such an asshole? She is the most important witness, we have to interrogate her, not hurt her!”
“Her bastard parents killed six people and they killed several our teammate, this is how they deserve to be treated like! They deserve to be punished! And now you’re protecting her? The daughter of the criminal? If it were not for that uniform you are wearing I swear will shoot you before I kill her!”
“She just lost her mother today, she has been tolerated enough.”
“This bastard’s father just escaped, she might be happy about it.”
“Stop calling her bastard.” James angrily said. “This girl has a name.”
“What? Do you have to ask her again even if you already knew her name? Her name is Randy Dean, you dumbass! As long as her last name is Dean, she’s also a criminal!”
“It’s not like that, she’s just a child, even if her parents were both evil criminal, she had nothing to do with it!”
“Really? Nothing to do with it? How did you pass your test? James? You really trust this creature was innocent?”
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Hi! Thanks for the new chapter!
I definitly not expect it – five years gone. But maybe this time Bette can make things right, good thing she still remember Tina. But where is Tina and what she doing for five years (i thinks with her previous story she can be criminal with Coopers now, didn’t she?)
And did Bette get rid from Adele in her life?
Waiting for the next updates to get some answers!
Hi CJ,
It was very hard to read what happened to Tina, when she was so young. Which ashole beats a innocent child like that.
And that same asshole now needs Bette, when she will discover what he did to Tina i hope she will make sure he will pay for this crime and the others crimes he did.
So Bette did go for the job Tina told her she would be good in. I wonder if the dream will play out with Bette as the lawofficer and Tina as the “Bad Guy”.
Would love to read about what happened the last five years till now.
Thank you for the update!!!
Hi CJ:
Excellent chapter, I can understand the sad memories Bette has, and the good she is at her job; I hate that damn and jackass man of Aaron, he es as criminal as the ones he fights, and I like that Bette knows how to face him.
As what happened in the former chapter affected Bette, I think it also may affect Tina, who knows how she changed after she felt betrayed by the persons she trusted and the girl she loved.
Anyway, looking forward to finding how Tina changed until this point and how both girls, now women, will find their way to each other, (if they will).
Thanks for the nice update
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Forgot to add – it’s not 5 years Tina fault, that FBI agents was so incompetent and gave opurtunity to main suspect kill six of them and escape. And Aaron – i really don’t understand how can he keeped his job, because it’s obviously was failure operation and he was lead agent, it was his resposible.
But hey, maybe in future Tina can punch and kicked him so badly, like he beated her in past. I would like to see it.
I like your story, thank you!
Yeah, let Tina kick Aaron ass! And not forget about Adele either!
And maybe Tina can meet James again.
Hey Crystal.
I just created this account here so that i can send u a comment.
I really really love this story and i do hope that you will finish this story till the end.
And btw, i have a feeling that Justine Cooper IS Tina (Laurel’s character from Angel LOL)
please don’t be too slow in filling us in on the missing five years. thank you