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The Most Distance Course
Chapter 6 Secret Confession
They drive in a comfortable silence, radio between them is broadcasting a beautiful song, “Perfect” by the famous British singer Ed Sheeran.
I found a love for me
Darling just dive right in
And follow my lead
Well I found a girl beautiful and sweet
I never knew you were the someone waiting for me
Bette can’t help steals a glare at Tina, who is now driving attentively. The blonde uses one hand to control the steering wheel, the other leans on the open window, her head lazily rests on her fist. The wind blows through, makes her golden hair blowback, with the sunset, she looks like a goddess.
Bette nervously sneaks at her, Tina finds that someone is staring, doesn’t say anything but turns her head. Their eyes meet, a strange but comfortable feeling runs through both of their body, two teenagers blush at the same time. Tina gives Bette a warm, genuine smile, then put her attention back to the road. Bette’s heart skips a beat just looking at the beautiful face.
Cause we were just kids when we fell in love
Not knowing what it was
I will not give you up this time
But darling, just kiss me slow, your heart is all I own
And in your eyes you’re holding mine
Bette has had enough.
“Why?” She asks.
“Sorry?” Tina replies a smile.
“Why are you being so nice to me?”
“I don’t get it, should I be bad to you?”
“After what we did…the awful things I said, no one will ever willing to talk to me, no need to mention stopping by and offering her a help when their car broke down! And…and…and it is even more impossible to welcome her a place to stay. But you, you did nothing but being so nice, you must be out of your mind!”
Baby, I’m dancing in the dark with you between my arms
Barefoot on the grass, listening to our favorite song
When you said you looked a mess, I whispered underneath my breath
But you heard it, darling, you look perfect tonight
Tina chuckles for Bette’s frustration, Bette frowns for the laugh.
“Yeah, maybe I am.” Tina says, almost like a whisper, her grin becomes even bigger.
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SassyGran says
Thanks for posting.
Having seen Laurel’s Blood Ocean in real size I find it difficult relating it to it’s fictional place in your story but that does not detract from my liking of this story and your portrayal of Tina. Laurel is, however, very different from the part of Tina that she played in the L word and perhaps future references to Tina’s Art should have different Titles to the real ones. Just a thought and not a criticism.
Enjoying this Story and look forward to your next posts.
SG
Bibi28 says
Oh CJ, what a incredible chapter!!!
The song you used, wow!!!
I didn’t see Laurel’s painting in real life and it is a beautiful one, the meaning behind it is powefull.
I agree with SG that for the futere you can better name the paintings different, but i love that you wanted to refer to such a great woman as Laurel.
Thank you for the update!
Zhenya says
Hi, thanks for the great chapter!
Ok, i like their ride to Tina’s home, their talks (but maybe Bette need to do more groveling:)). And Tina – why you sleep on the coach? Maybe on the bed with Bette will be more comfort?:)
And another:
1) Did Tina draw Bette and this pictures in folder, which Tina refuse to show Bette?
2) Most important – i think the real Bette personality we’ll see in the future, in school. Or she have a chanse to became good person? Did she’ll acting like earliear and do nothing about Adele and Kelly abusing Tina. Or she’ll finds guts to rebelling against them and protect Tina?
Waiting for the next!
Zhenya says
I don’t understand what problem with my previous comment and why it went to trash.
P.S. Not problem – i already restored it
“Hi, thanks for the great chapter!
Ok, i like their ride to Tina’s home, their talks (but maybe Bette need to do more groveling:)). And Tina – why you sleep on the coach? Maybe on the bed with Bette will be more comfort?:)
And another:
1) Did Tina draw Bette and this pictures in folder, which Tina refuse to show Bette?
2) Most important – i think the real Bette personality we’ll see in the future, in school. Or she have a chanse to became good person? Did she’ll acting like earliear and do nothing about Adele and Kelly abusing Tina. Or she’ll finds guts to rebelling against them and protect Tina?
Waiting for the next!”
proteonomics says
Hi CJ:
Great story, I like how both girls share their ‘secrets’ and how good Bette fits in Tina’s world; I hope she will be strong enough to keep her real personality when they return to class.
I feel pity for Tina’s aunt, who has cancer and I’m concern that Adele and Kelly, knowing she has a job as a cleaning worker at Kelly’s residence, they will hurt her.
I agree in many points with SG and Bibi, in each story we have here in LesFan, we have many different Tinas and Bettes, and all of them, different from the show TLW, and that is wonderful; for me, it’s like multidimensional versions of what they represent for many of us, excellent
Thank so much for this update, waiting eagerly for the next one.
P
Silentreader says
Love how smooth you bring your story..
Feel sorry for Tina for all her miss fortune in life…my heart ache for her sadness..
Wondering how you will finally connect Bette n Tina as couple with the strong bullier against them..
Waiting forward for the next chapter.. :)