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The Most Distance Course
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She shares my dreams, I hope that someday I’ll share her home
I found a love, to carry more than just my secrets
To carry love, to carry children of our own
“What did you mean you saw it through my eyes? What exactly did you see?”
Bette eagerly to know the answer, does Tina always talk like that? Extravagant and baseless, like look for the right way in the fog, she can only understand a very small part of the meaning in her words.
“You really do have lots of questions, don’t you?”
“Yeah, sure you will blame me about that.” Bette says, she folds her arms in front of her chest and pouts.
“I’m not blaming you, I’m just curious…and stop doing that annoying Porter pout!”
Bette smirks. “Why? Is it’s bothering you?”
Tina gives her a dern look but says nothing. Because it’s damn cute, which make me want to kiss you so much. She says to herself.
“So…?”
“So what?”
“Why are you curious? And what did you see in my eyes?”
“Two questions now, huh?”
“Yep, that’s for laughing at my Porter pout.” Bette says with her head held high, proud. Now, who’s the winner, Kennard?
Tina chuckles at Bette’s childishness, she shakes her head. You do wanna play this game huh? Porter?
Bette snorts conceitedly. Show me what you get, country girl.
“I’m curious about the one and only Sherlock Porter in Wallace High can’t even figure out a country girl herself, looks like she’s not as smart as I imagined.”
Tina raises the corner of her mouth, seeing Bette heard the name “Sherlock Girl”, her face quickly crushes down, now it’s Tina’s turn making a proud face. Not so fast, Princess, you’re sitting in the car with a straight A girl.
“I told you that name was hundred percent untrustworthy and absurd.”
“Really? I thought normally you only answer questions not asking, or you wouldn’t be called as ‘The brain of The Golden Circle’. Am I right? Porter?”
‘The brain of The Golden Circle’, another shitty name Bette doesn’t like.
“Yes.” Bette says with gritted teeth.
Tina nods her head with improvement. “Finally, one answer, that’s a good start.”
“Tina?” Bette gives up.
“Yes?”
“Just…answer my question…” Bette says weakly, this is the first time she got whacked, Tine surely has wiped the floor with her.
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Thanks for posting.
Having seen Laurel’s Blood Ocean in real size I find it difficult relating it to it’s fictional place in your story but that does not detract from my liking of this story and your portrayal of Tina. Laurel is, however, very different from the part of Tina that she played in the L word and perhaps future references to Tina’s Art should have different Titles to the real ones. Just a thought and not a criticism.
Enjoying this Story and look forward to your next posts.
SG
Oh CJ, what a incredible chapter!!!
The song you used, wow!!!
I didn’t see Laurel’s painting in real life and it is a beautiful one, the meaning behind it is powefull.
I agree with SG that for the futere you can better name the paintings different, but i love that you wanted to refer to such a great woman as Laurel.
Thank you for the update!
Hi, thanks for the great chapter!
Ok, i like their ride to Tina’s home, their talks (but maybe Bette need to do more groveling:)). And Tina – why you sleep on the coach? Maybe on the bed with Bette will be more comfort?:)
And another:
1) Did Tina draw Bette and this pictures in folder, which Tina refuse to show Bette?
2) Most important – i think the real Bette personality we’ll see in the future, in school. Or she have a chanse to became good person? Did she’ll acting like earliear and do nothing about Adele and Kelly abusing Tina. Or she’ll finds guts to rebelling against them and protect Tina?
Waiting for the next!
I don’t understand what problem with my previous comment and why it went to trash.
P.S. Not problem – i already restored it
“Hi, thanks for the great chapter!
Ok, i like their ride to Tina’s home, their talks (but maybe Bette need to do more groveling:)). And Tina – why you sleep on the coach? Maybe on the bed with Bette will be more comfort?:)
And another:
1) Did Tina draw Bette and this pictures in folder, which Tina refuse to show Bette?
2) Most important – i think the real Bette personality we’ll see in the future, in school. Or she have a chanse to became good person? Did she’ll acting like earliear and do nothing about Adele and Kelly abusing Tina. Or she’ll finds guts to rebelling against them and protect Tina?
Waiting for the next!”
Hi CJ:
Great story, I like how both girls share their ‘secrets’ and how good Bette fits in Tina’s world; I hope she will be strong enough to keep her real personality when they return to class.
I feel pity for Tina’s aunt, who has cancer and I’m concern that Adele and Kelly, knowing she has a job as a cleaning worker at Kelly’s residence, they will hurt her.
I agree in many points with SG and Bibi, in each story we have here in LesFan, we have many different Tinas and Bettes, and all of them, different from the show TLW, and that is wonderful; for me, it’s like multidimensional versions of what they represent for many of us, excellent
Thank so much for this update, waiting eagerly for the next one.
P
Love how smooth you bring your story..
Feel sorry for Tina for all her miss fortune in life…my heart ache for her sadness..
Wondering how you will finally connect Bette n Tina as couple with the strong bullier against them..
Waiting forward for the next chapter.. :)