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The Most Distance Course
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Tina lowers her head, blushing for Bette’s words, but unable to hide the sadness, Bette panics instantly. Did she just call me T? Tina says to herself.
“Shit, did I say something wrong?” Bette explains. “I’m sorry if I did…”
“No, no, it’s not like that,” Tina quickly replies. “I’m just a little overwhelmed…no one ever said this to me before, and no one ever called me in a nickname.”
Bette looks distracted.
“Do you mind? Calling you T?”
Tina bits her lower lip. “No, I don’t mind, I like it.” A Lot.
“Okay, T.” Bette grins happily, like a child found the new toy.
“Hey, T?”
“Yeah?”
“About calling you beautiful, you’re kidding right?”
“Nope, not at all.” Tina sighs. “You are the first.”
“Apparently, those people must be blind.” Bette shrugs. “You are truly beautiful, both appearance and heart.”
Tina smiles to her, slowly touch Bette’s arm, the brunette gulps again.
“Thank you, for saying this to me.”
Gladly, Tina quickly throws her bad emotions away, she excitedly told the story of the most painting, although Bette is so desperate to know what the secret the blondes’ holds but seeing how happy Tina is when she talks about the works, she decides not to ruin this moment.
That night was the best night ever to Tina, she told Bette about her art and ideas, the story behind her works, but skillfully avoid her own background. It’s been a long time since she talked so much, Bette is the most miraculous things that ever happened in her life, Tina never feels so happy before.
Midnight.
She is so beautiful. Tina thinks, quietly leans at the door, watching Bette Porter sleeping peacefully on her bed.
She felt thirsty during the night and got up from the coach to get some water. Walking through her room, she couldn’t resist taking a glimpse at the sleeping beauty in her bed.
Tina feels so lucky, meeting this beautiful brunette, showing her paintings, cooking her dinner… She feels like she’s coming home, a girl like her can really have a future, settle down, having a child, waiting for her wife to come back to their family. Family, the small but extravagant dream to her.
She doesn’t want to move again, as long as she can be with Bette, seeing her face, hearing her voice every day, she can tolerate any kind of bully just for Bette.
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Thanks for posting.
Having seen Laurel’s Blood Ocean in real size I find it difficult relating it to it’s fictional place in your story but that does not detract from my liking of this story and your portrayal of Tina. Laurel is, however, very different from the part of Tina that she played in the L word and perhaps future references to Tina’s Art should have different Titles to the real ones. Just a thought and not a criticism.
Enjoying this Story and look forward to your next posts.
SG
Oh CJ, what a incredible chapter!!!
The song you used, wow!!!
I didn’t see Laurel’s painting in real life and it is a beautiful one, the meaning behind it is powefull.
I agree with SG that for the futere you can better name the paintings different, but i love that you wanted to refer to such a great woman as Laurel.
Thank you for the update!
Hi, thanks for the great chapter!
Ok, i like their ride to Tina’s home, their talks (but maybe Bette need to do more groveling:)). And Tina – why you sleep on the coach? Maybe on the bed with Bette will be more comfort?:)
And another:
1) Did Tina draw Bette and this pictures in folder, which Tina refuse to show Bette?
2) Most important – i think the real Bette personality we’ll see in the future, in school. Or she have a chanse to became good person? Did she’ll acting like earliear and do nothing about Adele and Kelly abusing Tina. Or she’ll finds guts to rebelling against them and protect Tina?
Waiting for the next!
I don’t understand what problem with my previous comment and why it went to trash.
P.S. Not problem – i already restored it
“Hi, thanks for the great chapter!
Ok, i like their ride to Tina’s home, their talks (but maybe Bette need to do more groveling:)). And Tina – why you sleep on the coach? Maybe on the bed with Bette will be more comfort?:)
And another:
1) Did Tina draw Bette and this pictures in folder, which Tina refuse to show Bette?
2) Most important – i think the real Bette personality we’ll see in the future, in school. Or she have a chanse to became good person? Did she’ll acting like earliear and do nothing about Adele and Kelly abusing Tina. Or she’ll finds guts to rebelling against them and protect Tina?
Waiting for the next!”
Hi CJ:
Great story, I like how both girls share their ‘secrets’ and how good Bette fits in Tina’s world; I hope she will be strong enough to keep her real personality when they return to class.
I feel pity for Tina’s aunt, who has cancer and I’m concern that Adele and Kelly, knowing she has a job as a cleaning worker at Kelly’s residence, they will hurt her.
I agree in many points with SG and Bibi, in each story we have here in LesFan, we have many different Tinas and Bettes, and all of them, different from the show TLW, and that is wonderful; for me, it’s like multidimensional versions of what they represent for many of us, excellent
Thank so much for this update, waiting eagerly for the next one.
P
Love how smooth you bring your story..
Feel sorry for Tina for all her miss fortune in life…my heart ache for her sadness..
Wondering how you will finally connect Bette n Tina as couple with the strong bullier against them..
Waiting forward for the next chapter.. :)