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The Most Distant Course
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Tina’s face shows no emotion, no confusion, no anger, no fear, like the first time when she met her. Which makes Bette worried more.
“Okay.” Is what Tina said.
Bette swallows the lump in her throat.
“I am a temporary agent at the FBI, I was a detective before I was being recruited. I didn’t want to join at first, but the commander of this mission convinced me to do it to save more life.”
“Who is the FBI commander now?” Tina asks quietly, her voice is no longer like before, the warm and tenderness turn into cold and heartless.
Bette witnesses the sudden change of mood, she doesn’t know what happens to Tina, nor does she know why Tina wanted to know about her commander.
“It’s Aaron Kornbluth, did you know him?”
Tina’s face twists a bit, her jaws clenched tightly, a sudden throb of pain appears in her head, memories are like flashing pages flipping in her mind.
“Where is your god damn father!” Punched and kicked, all on the five years old little girl.
“Aah don’t know! Please…Stop! Stop!”
“Tell me!” Slap!
Yes, she did know him. How could she possibly forget? During the past 17 years, she could still dream about the day when she became an orphan.
“No,” Tina lies. “I was just asking.”
Bette did sense there must be something wrong between her boss and Tina, but even with her smart detective instinct, she knew she won’t be able to figure it now just now, Tina is a great actress, at this time, it is impossible to find out anything from her. As if Tina said not long ago, there are lots of things she doesn’t know about her girlfriend.
It’s not the time to check the family background, Bette has to finish the current business first.
“Anyway, I agreed with him and joined the mission, I became a temporary agent, my job is to bring the organization information out of here and provide immediate messages…I reckon that you’ve already known that.”
Tina says nothing, her head down, she doesn’t look at Bette.
The brunette can’t read Tina’s mind, seeing her girlfriend remains silent, she thinks she should continue.
“I was informed that…before me, there was already an agent hiding in the Cooper Industry, code name ‘L’, full name ‘Lawliet’, he or she was also an undercover like me, my boss wouldn’t tell me who he or she really is, saying that it’s was best for both of us.”
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Thank you for the nre chapter!
I’ll comment again when read it.
Hi Angel1981:
Thanks, waiting for your comment!
CJ
Hi!
So, Carmen was L. And It was Henry who tried to set up Bette. But who gave him her number?
And i like how Bette calm down Tina in the end of the chapter)
Thank you and waiting for the next!
Hi Zhenya:
Yes, Carmen is L, and I believe that I’ve answer the question about “who set Bette up”.
As for the one who gave him the number, you will know in chapter 25.
I’m glad you like it, there is never enough Bette and Tina sex scene. ;)
Thank you for the comment!
CJ
Hi CJ,
Carmen was L?! Never expected her to be it.
A storm is certainly coming and they are after Bette. Henry and Jodi, they are scum and i do hope their plan will backfire with a loud bang!
Loved how Bette took care of Tina and showed her the love, support, trust and strenght she has in her.
Looking forward to the end of the game!
Hi Bibi28:
Yep, she was the other spy and I hope that you like this setting. I like Carmen in TLW really much (no more than Tibette of course.)
They’re going to do some very awful things, it’s going to be tough chapters later on, you will never believe what these two can do.
Thank you for your support and comment. Bibi.
CJ
Hi,
Thanks for the post.
Intrigued and looking forward to the end of the game.
SG
hi SassyGran:
Thank you for your comment.
Just giving a simple warning, there is going to be a tough fight and some tough chapter, please be kind and be patient.
CJ
Tks for the update
The story has so many intrigues, so many secrets..so many revelations..
i guess if Carmen is L, then it was one of her planned to set up Bev in order to help her gaining her place.after all, the mysterious person who sent message to Henry using the same way sending messages to Justine. The possibility, it was the same person, Carmen/L, and she could asked Shane to help her get the phone.
Why Justine felt guilty? I thought she didnt killed Carmen? She put the gun on her left side and took the gun from the right side..which mean she messed up the right side gun and let the left side gun being checked but used the other to shoot..
And dont u think that Justine and Bev spent too much time together? They are living in the criminal world where the wall was too thin and suspicions were all over the place. Hard to spend lot of time together without raising suspicions from the rest of the criminal, wasnt it? They need to be careful cos one of the leader has smell something on the air.
Cant wait for the next chapter
Anyway, good story Crystal, tks for sharing :)
Silentreader:
That’s very good guessing! But unfortunately, Shane was not the person who took the phone, and nor was Carmen gave Henry the number.
There is a reason Tina felt guilty about Carmen, I will explain in the future chapter. I thought that Tina’s trick wouldn’t be that obvious, but certainly, you guys are very good observing reader! And yes, Carmen is still alive.
As for your question about that Tibette spending too many times together…I have to apologize for that if that confused you. My native language is not English and it had to spend more than a week to type out 8000 words (I know my grammar was a mess.) I was trying very hard to tell a perfect story but there are too many things that need to be mention and there’s only limited length. Moreover, I really like Tibette get together part…so as you can see, seems like they have plenty of times together but actually, they didn’t. I hope this reason explain your quetions. :)
Thank you for your comment, and thank you for all the questions, I will keep trying for perform the story in a better way.
CJ
So, it’s no Sam but Henry tried to set up Bette.
And don’t worry we love all parts were Tibette together too.
Waiting next chapter to find up how Tibette would fight against Henry and Jodie plan!
Hi Angel1981:
Thank you for your comments,
The future chapters will be tough and not so pleasant, although I love Tibette together scene but the show must go on.
Hope you support the story till the end!
CJ
Hi CJ
Excellent chapter, now things are clear. Carmen is wallit, who of course is L and Tina made good use of her modified gun; Henry tricked Bette with the money, I wonder if Tina knows he fooled her lover taking the money of the Chinese drug gang.
The situation now is that Tina won’t count with Shane at her side, because she won’t come back; Henry is trying to expose Bette with Tina’s father and I believe that there will come not a storm but a tsunami, and Tina will need to use all her power to defend her lover.
Who took the cell phone? Well, that you will tell us soon I hope.
Tina needs to establish where the loyalties of each of the six heads lie, and also which other pawns are playing the game and whom they are working for.
Great chapter as always, I guess the next chapter will be hell, I’ll wear a shield to read the that.
Thank you so much for the amazing chapter.
P
Hi proteonomics:
Your comments are always worth waiting.
I know it’s almost in the final and it’s better not to let too many good characters interfere, Shane of course, should not be involved in such a mess. Tina gave a great help for Carmen, she will surely do the same favor for Shane.
As for the current situation…well, there will be a great mess in the next chapter, some are going to die, some are going to be blamed, and more secret about Tina’s time in the brothel will be dug out.
There’s a long way to go to get this crime world ended, I also hope I can last till then.
Thank you for your comment and support my friend.
CJ