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The Most Distant Course
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Bette lowers her head, she doesn’t know what to say or what to think.
Before she joined the police force, she’s been looking forward to being an upright police officer, fighting against the criminals, saving lives, helping those who need a helping hand…However, entered this organization made her realize there were no definite right or wrong, the world was not built by the perfect white and black, instead, there are gray zones in every place. If an honest man can commit crimes, who said that criminal can’t do something good?
Bette couldn’t blame L for giving secret information because what he’s doing was helping Tina…However, what he did was a hundred percent treason.
“I don’t know…T, I don’t know…” Bette hides her head in her hands.
Tina softly caressing Bette’s hair.
“Look at the grass in the drawing, tell me what you see.”
Henry lights up the cigar.
“I got a letter from an anonymous, saying he could help me get what I want, all I need to do was follow the instruction on the letter, then the position of the new drug lord will be my son’s.”
“Seems like you are not the only person who want Bev Priston to die…”
Henry puffs out the smoke, waiting for Jodi to come out from her own world.
“What do you plan to do?” Jodi says coldly.
“Bev Priston would be a dead body if Justine Cooper didn’t make it on time. Furthermore, I took those five hundred thousand dollars which she supposed to bring back. How was it possible Justine Cooper had that amount of money out of thin air?”
“She must have some saving or something to let her get that money in such a short time.” Jodi says.
“Exactly,” Henry claps his hands. “As long as I found how and where Justine Cooper’s money came from, I can use it against them. After that, Justine Cooper and Bev Priston will lose the boss’s trust, probably their lives too…until then, the throne of the Cooper company will be ours.”
Jodi nods, she agrees with Henry.
Even she is only half-hearted willing to do this thing, deep down he knew if she did nothing, she’ll have to await her doom. Four heads have been taken down, it will be stupid enough to think it’s just pure coincidence. Sooner or later, they would be the eliminate target. With that, it would be better to strike first to gain the initiative.
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Thank you for the nre chapter!
I’ll comment again when read it.
Hi Angel1981:
Thanks, waiting for your comment!
CJ
Hi!
So, Carmen was L. And It was Henry who tried to set up Bette. But who gave him her number?
And i like how Bette calm down Tina in the end of the chapter)
Thank you and waiting for the next!
Hi Zhenya:
Yes, Carmen is L, and I believe that I’ve answer the question about “who set Bette up”.
As for the one who gave him the number, you will know in chapter 25.
I’m glad you like it, there is never enough Bette and Tina sex scene. ;)
Thank you for the comment!
CJ
Hi CJ,
Carmen was L?! Never expected her to be it.
A storm is certainly coming and they are after Bette. Henry and Jodi, they are scum and i do hope their plan will backfire with a loud bang!
Loved how Bette took care of Tina and showed her the love, support, trust and strenght she has in her.
Looking forward to the end of the game!
Hi Bibi28:
Yep, she was the other spy and I hope that you like this setting. I like Carmen in TLW really much (no more than Tibette of course.)
They’re going to do some very awful things, it’s going to be tough chapters later on, you will never believe what these two can do.
Thank you for your support and comment. Bibi.
CJ
Hi,
Thanks for the post.
Intrigued and looking forward to the end of the game.
SG
hi SassyGran:
Thank you for your comment.
Just giving a simple warning, there is going to be a tough fight and some tough chapter, please be kind and be patient.
CJ
Tks for the update
The story has so many intrigues, so many secrets..so many revelations..
i guess if Carmen is L, then it was one of her planned to set up Bev in order to help her gaining her place.after all, the mysterious person who sent message to Henry using the same way sending messages to Justine. The possibility, it was the same person, Carmen/L, and she could asked Shane to help her get the phone.
Why Justine felt guilty? I thought she didnt killed Carmen? She put the gun on her left side and took the gun from the right side..which mean she messed up the right side gun and let the left side gun being checked but used the other to shoot..
And dont u think that Justine and Bev spent too much time together? They are living in the criminal world where the wall was too thin and suspicions were all over the place. Hard to spend lot of time together without raising suspicions from the rest of the criminal, wasnt it? They need to be careful cos one of the leader has smell something on the air.
Cant wait for the next chapter
Anyway, good story Crystal, tks for sharing :)
Silentreader:
That’s very good guessing! But unfortunately, Shane was not the person who took the phone, and nor was Carmen gave Henry the number.
There is a reason Tina felt guilty about Carmen, I will explain in the future chapter. I thought that Tina’s trick wouldn’t be that obvious, but certainly, you guys are very good observing reader! And yes, Carmen is still alive.
As for your question about that Tibette spending too many times together…I have to apologize for that if that confused you. My native language is not English and it had to spend more than a week to type out 8000 words (I know my grammar was a mess.) I was trying very hard to tell a perfect story but there are too many things that need to be mention and there’s only limited length. Moreover, I really like Tibette get together part…so as you can see, seems like they have plenty of times together but actually, they didn’t. I hope this reason explain your quetions. :)
Thank you for your comment, and thank you for all the questions, I will keep trying for perform the story in a better way.
CJ
So, it’s no Sam but Henry tried to set up Bette.
And don’t worry we love all parts were Tibette together too.
Waiting next chapter to find up how Tibette would fight against Henry and Jodie plan!
Hi Angel1981:
Thank you for your comments,
The future chapters will be tough and not so pleasant, although I love Tibette together scene but the show must go on.
Hope you support the story till the end!
CJ
Hi CJ
Excellent chapter, now things are clear. Carmen is wallit, who of course is L and Tina made good use of her modified gun; Henry tricked Bette with the money, I wonder if Tina knows he fooled her lover taking the money of the Chinese drug gang.
The situation now is that Tina won’t count with Shane at her side, because she won’t come back; Henry is trying to expose Bette with Tina’s father and I believe that there will come not a storm but a tsunami, and Tina will need to use all her power to defend her lover.
Who took the cell phone? Well, that you will tell us soon I hope.
Tina needs to establish where the loyalties of each of the six heads lie, and also which other pawns are playing the game and whom they are working for.
Great chapter as always, I guess the next chapter will be hell, I’ll wear a shield to read the that.
Thank you so much for the amazing chapter.
P
Hi proteonomics:
Your comments are always worth waiting.
I know it’s almost in the final and it’s better not to let too many good characters interfere, Shane of course, should not be involved in such a mess. Tina gave a great help for Carmen, she will surely do the same favor for Shane.
As for the current situation…well, there will be a great mess in the next chapter, some are going to die, some are going to be blamed, and more secret about Tina’s time in the brothel will be dug out.
There’s a long way to go to get this crime world ended, I also hope I can last till then.
Thank you for your comment and support my friend.
CJ