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    The Most Distant Course

    Bette makes a wry smile, she falls into deep thought, her hand unconsciously stops the movement of comforting Tina. Tina feels Bette’s sudden emotion change, she kisses Bette’s hand, putting a strand of hair behind her ear.

    “What are you thinking? Baby?”

    Tina sits up a bit, she leads Bette’s head to lean on her shoulder.

    “There was a girl…” Bette clears her throat. “She’d told me but I still couldn’t remember her name, we met in the bar, I drank a lot, so we didn’t talk much just went straight to the hotel and fucked.”

    Bette looks at Tina’s face, seeing no judgment on her face, she decides to continue.

    “I finally had a proper talk with her the next morning, but I was busying prepare for the meeting, didn’t really care what she said…until now.”

    “What did she say?” Tina encourages her to keep talking.

    “She asked me if she could see me again, of course.” Bette giggles, Tina playfully slaps the brunette’s arm.

    “Cocky…don’t forget I’m sitting right here.”

    “Oh…T, are you jealous?”

    “Of course, I am jealous, how could I not be? A beautiful blonde hair woman asked you for another night, she really didn’t know who she’s against to.”

    “Oh…T, it’s a long time ago…come on, baby, no need to be jealous about, I love you and you only.”

    “Smart ass…” Tina rolls her eyes. “What did she say exactly.”

    “She said I call your name during the night,” Bette smiles. “She even asked me who you are.”

    Tina raises her eyebrow. “She knew me?”

    “Of course not.” Bette chuckles. “She’s just curious why I said your name in my dream.”

    “Hmm…interesting, what else did she ask?”

    “She asked me who you are and…asked me if I loved you.”

    Tina smiles. “You didn’t reply.”

    “How do you know?” Bette asks in shock.

    Tina only smiled and made no reply, Bette can only continue.

    “It’s taken me a while to realize I was using them to forget you. I thought sleeping with others can make me forget you. Since I was young, my family was barely there, my mother left after my father cheated on her, my father…well, you knew who he is, workaholic, bitter man, worst father on earth…well, not worse than yours. Anyway, I didn’t understand what love is, I was craving for love when I was with those women, you know…hoping to find something special from them, the warm and touched feeling when I was in your place, the pure love that only you had given me when I needed the most.”

    Comments

    1. Hi!

      So, Carmen was L. And It was Henry who tried to set up Bette. But who gave him her number?

      And i like how Bette calm down Tina in the end of the chapter)

      Thank you and waiting for the next!

      • Hi Zhenya:

        Yes, Carmen is L, and I believe that I’ve answer the question about “who set Bette up”.
        As for the one who gave him the number, you will know in chapter 25.
        I’m glad you like it, there is never enough Bette and Tina sex scene. ;)
        Thank you for the comment!

        CJ

    2. Hi CJ,

      Carmen was L?! Never expected her to be it.

      A storm is certainly coming and they are after Bette. Henry and Jodi, they are scum and i do hope their plan will backfire with a loud bang!

      Loved how Bette took care of Tina and showed her the love, support, trust and strenght she has in her.

      Looking forward to the end of the game!

      • Hi Bibi28:

        Yep, she was the other spy and I hope that you like this setting. I like Carmen in TLW really much (no more than Tibette of course.)

        They’re going to do some very awful things, it’s going to be tough chapters later on, you will never believe what these two can do.

        Thank you for your support and comment. Bibi.

        CJ

    3. Tks for the update
      The story has so many intrigues, so many secrets..so many revelations..
      i guess if Carmen is L, then it was one of her planned to set up Bev in order to help her gaining her place.after all, the mysterious person who sent message to Henry using the same way sending messages to Justine. The possibility, it was the same person, Carmen/L, and she could asked Shane to help her get the phone.
      Why Justine felt guilty? I thought she didnt killed Carmen? She put the gun on her left side and took the gun from the right side..which mean she messed up the right side gun and let the left side gun being checked but used the other to shoot..
      And dont u think that Justine and Bev spent too much time together? They are living in the criminal world where the wall was too thin and suspicions were all over the place. Hard to spend lot of time together without raising suspicions from the rest of the criminal, wasnt it? They need to be careful cos one of the leader has smell something on the air.
      Cant wait for the next chapter
      Anyway, good story Crystal, tks for sharing :)

      • Silentreader:

        That’s very good guessing! But unfortunately, Shane was not the person who took the phone, and nor was Carmen gave Henry the number.

        There is a reason Tina felt guilty about Carmen, I will explain in the future chapter. I thought that Tina’s trick wouldn’t be that obvious, but certainly, you guys are very good observing reader! And yes, Carmen is still alive.

        As for your question about that Tibette spending too many times together…I have to apologize for that if that confused you. My native language is not English and it had to spend more than a week to type out 8000 words (I know my grammar was a mess.) I was trying very hard to tell a perfect story but there are too many things that need to be mention and there’s only limited length. Moreover, I really like Tibette get together part…so as you can see, seems like they have plenty of times together but actually, they didn’t. I hope this reason explain your quetions. :)

        Thank you for your comment, and thank you for all the questions, I will keep trying for perform the story in a better way.

        CJ

    4. So, it’s no Sam but Henry tried to set up Bette.
      And don’t worry we love all parts were Tibette together too.
      Waiting next chapter to find up how Tibette would fight against Henry and Jodie plan!

      • Hi Angel1981:

        Thank you for your comments,

        The future chapters will be tough and not so pleasant, although I love Tibette together scene but the show must go on.

        Hope you support the story till the end!

        CJ

    5. Hi CJ

      Excellent chapter, now things are clear. Carmen is wallit, who of course is L and Tina made good use of her modified gun; Henry tricked Bette with the money, I wonder if Tina knows he fooled her lover taking the money of the Chinese drug gang.

      The situation now is that Tina won’t count with Shane at her side, because she won’t come back; Henry is trying to expose Bette with Tina’s father and I believe that there will come not a storm but a tsunami, and Tina will need to use all her power to defend her lover.

      Who took the cell phone? Well, that you will tell us soon I hope.

      Tina needs to establish where the loyalties of each of the six heads lie, and also which other pawns are playing the game and whom they are working for.

      Great chapter as always, I guess the next chapter will be hell, I’ll wear a shield to read the that.

      Thank you so much for the amazing chapter.

      P

      • Hi proteonomics:

        Your comments are always worth waiting.

        I know it’s almost in the final and it’s better not to let too many good characters interfere, Shane of course, should not be involved in such a mess. Tina gave a great help for Carmen, she will surely do the same favor for Shane.

        As for the current situation…well, there will be a great mess in the next chapter, some are going to die, some are going to be blamed, and more secret about Tina’s time in the brothel will be dug out.

        There’s a long way to go to get this crime world ended, I also hope I can last till then.

        Thank you for your comment and support my friend.

        CJ

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