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    The Most Distant Course

    Story written on May 11, 2019 by Crystal J.H.
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    “I know so,” Bette says. “We must get back to her room, maybe there is a message, a clue, or…” “Then what? Porter? Then you are going to take this clue to save her from the boss? With no weapon and no people?” Bette ponders over, an idea comes up her mind. “There are people,

    “I know so,” Bette says. “We must get back to her room, maybe there is a message, a clue, or…”

    “Then what? Porter? Then you are going to take this clue to save her from the boss? With no weapon and no people?”

    Bette ponders over, an idea comes up her mind.

    “There are people, and tones of weapons.” Bette says. “But we need to hold until the company meeting started.”

    “This is crazy!” Sam says. “We don’t have a few hours! Hell know what Jodi is planning to do, if she wanted Tina dead, she won’t need a few seconds, looked what she has done to Eric?”

    “Where do you plan to get enough weapon and people?” Tasha asks.

    Fuck the FBI. Bette takes a deep breath, she is ready to risk everything for Tina.

    “The FBI and the squat team are ready to take down the Cooper mansion—”

    “What?!” Sam and Tasha yell out in unite.

    “I know it’s sound crazy, but I—”

    “You supposed you tell us now? In this circumstance? You are fucking out of your mind!”

    “In what circumstance do you think it proper enough to tell these kinds of thing?” Bette tries to be as calm as possible. “I’m trying to come up with a better idea to tell Tina about this and—”

    “You’ve got to be fucking kidding me!” Sam yells.

    “Shut your mouth and listen to me!” Bette shouts back. “I don’t want this happened, okay? I tried to tell my commander to hold back and wait but that asshole didn’t give a shit of what I’ve said! I am one of the head in the organization, one wrong decision I will be dead, do you think I will ask the FBI to attack if I was still in the mansion? And fuck, did you really think I am still standing here just because I can’t bear to leave this place even if I knew there’s an attack waiting outside this fucking mansion?”

    Tasha and Sam remain silence, heavy-hearted written all over their face.

    “When…when’s the FBI going to make the move?”

    Bette exhales. “Tonight, at the meeting, when all six heads sit still, they will make the first shot.”

    “Fuck…”

    Tasha sits on the couch, Sam impatiently pacing around.

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    2. Hi CJ,

      You better promise that things will turn well later on!!!!

      The teaser at the end have me very worried about Bette.

      Ugh Jodi and Henry, i hate them, trying to put Tina as the one who killed Eric, i truly hope that at the end they got what they deserve, a slow and painful death.

      Bette is willing to save Tina at most cost, with her life.

      When this is all over i wish them a happy life and CJ, i have to trust you to make this possible!

      Please update asap, the suspense is killing me!

    3. Hi CJ:

      Very good chapter, finally Bette is becoming strong and smart.

      How could she doubt Tina after hearing Jodie telling all those lies?

      It’s good that she is taking the lead of Tina’s people, I think Sam and Tasha are following her.

      Bette should bring to the meeting the pictures that Jodie gave her where Tina is in Henry’s house, and also the picture the police has, where is showing the blonde that came to visit Eric right before his death, so she could expose Jodie.

      I have no idea how they are going to flee from the mansion I guess is going to be a very tight escape having the FBI and the law forces outside.

      However, my idea of a “good escape” is to make it as clean as possible, which means, without a criminal load on them. Unfortunately, one of the highest criminals here is Aaron, the FBI head, and legally will be very hard to exonerate Tina, Sam, Tasha, and even Bette. At least if you have a hidden card in your sleeve, which you may have if my calculations aren’t wrong.

      But JC, this is your story and it’s great. Thanks for the wonderful chapter, pps.

      P

    4. Thank you for the chapter, but i really don’t follow some of the lines. How the Jodie can interrogate Tina in front of her father when on the last meeting about Carmen she lost his trust?

    5. My liking for Tina makes it a difficult read.
      I am a little disappointed in Bette’s Character and wish her stronger and more determined to believe and help Tina.
      Like Zhenya I find some aspects difficult to believe regarding Jodie and her father but then again I hate Jodie!
      Look forward to your next post and hopefully the Course will become less difficult for B&T
      SG

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