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    The Most Distant Course

    “What do you plan to do?”

    Bette lower her head. “I don’t know, I wanted to tell this to Tina last night but fucking Jodi Lerner suddenly came to me, messed up my whole plan, maybe she would come up with a better plan, but now…? I don’t know.”

    “Does Tina know about the attack?”

    “I don’t know, I just heard the information from my commander yesterday, I have no idea how fast Tina’s informer can get the message.” Bette replies.

    When Bette mentioned ‘Tina’s informer’, a hint of jealousy and anger couldn’t hide in her voice. This certainly couldn’t be unnoticed by Sam, but the new boss of the prostitution doesn’t say a word.

    “Is there really nothing we can do now?” Tasha waves her hand.

    “Jodi must be planning something big, big enough for her to kill any of us, what she’s doing is driving a wedge between us, she knew with our combine intelligent, she won’t be able to win, only break down our connection, made us against each other, so as to make her plan work.” Bette shakes her head. “I think there was no reason for undue haste, we should come up with a proper plan before we ready to make another step. Tina won’t give up herself if she has no plan at all, she must have some ideas in her mind.”

    “I don’t think so, Sebastian Cooper won’t summon anyone with no reason, especially Tina, Jodi, and Henry must have great reason to let him do so…Given that the odd case happened currently, expect Eric’s death, I couldn’t think of others.” Sam replies.

     

     

    4 Hours before the attack. Meeting room.

    Tina slowly sways her head facing Jodi. “What do you want me to say?”

    “You don’t know what you’ve done?”

    “I came as the order of my father, not you. Without knowing what crime is, I dare not take responsibility. If there’s something I’ve done wrong, please, do clarify.” Tina says coldly.

    “Fine.” The boss nods his agreement. “I will give you the opportunity to explain…Tell me, how do you explain the death of Eric Cassie last night?”

    Jodi and boss are waiting for Tina to start a new speech. In fact, Tina digests this information in silence, looking up at the boss, her face shows shock and puzzled. Tina’s face of confusion looks at them enquiringly.

    Comments

    1. Hi CJ,

      You better promise that things will turn well later on!!!!

      The teaser at the end have me very worried about Bette.

      Ugh Jodi and Henry, i hate them, trying to put Tina as the one who killed Eric, i truly hope that at the end they got what they deserve, a slow and painful death.

      Bette is willing to save Tina at most cost, with her life.

      When this is all over i wish them a happy life and CJ, i have to trust you to make this possible!

      Please update asap, the suspense is killing me!

    2. Hi CJ:

      Very good chapter, finally Bette is becoming strong and smart.

      How could she doubt Tina after hearing Jodie telling all those lies?

      It’s good that she is taking the lead of Tina’s people, I think Sam and Tasha are following her.

      Bette should bring to the meeting the pictures that Jodie gave her where Tina is in Henry’s house, and also the picture the police has, where is showing the blonde that came to visit Eric right before his death, so she could expose Jodie.

      I have no idea how they are going to flee from the mansion I guess is going to be a very tight escape having the FBI and the law forces outside.

      However, my idea of a “good escape” is to make it as clean as possible, which means, without a criminal load on them. Unfortunately, one of the highest criminals here is Aaron, the FBI head, and legally will be very hard to exonerate Tina, Sam, Tasha, and even Bette. At least if you have a hidden card in your sleeve, which you may have if my calculations aren’t wrong.

      But JC, this is your story and it’s great. Thanks for the wonderful chapter, pps.

      P

    3. Thank you for the chapter, but i really don’t follow some of the lines. How the Jodie can interrogate Tina in front of her father when on the last meeting about Carmen she lost his trust?

    4. My liking for Tina makes it a difficult read.
      I am a little disappointed in Bette’s Character and wish her stronger and more determined to believe and help Tina.
      Like Zhenya I find some aspects difficult to believe regarding Jodie and her father but then again I hate Jodie!
      Look forward to your next post and hopefully the Course will become less difficult for B&T
      SG

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