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The Most Distant Course
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“Mr. Chen.” Bette speaks fluent Chinese, she greets the man with respect. “It’s a pleasure.”
“You’ve helped a lot for the Triad group, Ms. Priston, The Dragon Head is grateful, sent me here to assist you, I hope my ability could provide some help for you.”
Bette snorts in her mind. Giver her a helping hand? Simply said that Mr. Wang heard some news that there’s a turbulent situation in the Cooper organization. He nominally sent a person to help Bette was actually to keep an eye on their business friend.
“How can I trust you?” Bette asks.
“In the name of the Triad, your command is as well as the dragon’s order.”
Bette doesn’t say a word, she blankly stares at the view in front of her, doesn’t really sure what to do. She feels so weak in strength without Tina beside, how did Tina come through this all alone?
At the moment, a vibrate awake her from her thought, it’s duty called.
“What can I do for you?”
Looks down at the phone, since the phone that L provided was gone, the only phone Bette hold is the one Tina gave to her. The one that she got the scam phone call, the phone that almost let her killed…
A crazy idea comes up in her mind, she might not be as smart as Tina Kennard but she still contains a 120 IQ brain. She has confidence that she can twist current event and turn enemies weapon against themselves. In the last few hours in the company, there is something she has to make a closure.
“I need your help.” Bette’s mandarin is perfect.
Tonight is the night, the night that the Cooper mansion will fall.
5 Hours before the attack.
What have I done?
The blonde falls onto her knees, her heart screams in sorrow, her head pounding like a beaten drum, her whole body is trembling, the side effect of the addiction is starting to build in her body.
She has been restricting the drug for several hours, Bette has taught her a few tips she’s learned in the police school. It’s helped, but not always work out very well. This is about drug quitting, even the smoker needs to take at least three to four months to get rid of cigarette, surely giving up the drug will need to take more time.
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I’ve been waiting for the update of this story..thanks C.J
Hi CJ,
You better promise that things will turn well later on!!!!
The teaser at the end have me very worried about Bette.
Ugh Jodi and Henry, i hate them, trying to put Tina as the one who killed Eric, i truly hope that at the end they got what they deserve, a slow and painful death.
Bette is willing to save Tina at most cost, with her life.
When this is all over i wish them a happy life and CJ, i have to trust you to make this possible!
Please update asap, the suspense is killing me!
Hi CJ:
Very good chapter, finally Bette is becoming strong and smart.
How could she doubt Tina after hearing Jodie telling all those lies?
It’s good that she is taking the lead of Tina’s people, I think Sam and Tasha are following her.
Bette should bring to the meeting the pictures that Jodie gave her where Tina is in Henry’s house, and also the picture the police has, where is showing the blonde that came to visit Eric right before his death, so she could expose Jodie.
I have no idea how they are going to flee from the mansion I guess is going to be a very tight escape having the FBI and the law forces outside.
However, my idea of a “good escape” is to make it as clean as possible, which means, without a criminal load on them. Unfortunately, one of the highest criminals here is Aaron, the FBI head, and legally will be very hard to exonerate Tina, Sam, Tasha, and even Bette. At least if you have a hidden card in your sleeve, which you may have if my calculations aren’t wrong.
But JC, this is your story and it’s great. Thanks for the wonderful chapter, pps.
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Thank you for the chapter, but i really don’t follow some of the lines. How the Jodie can interrogate Tina in front of her father when on the last meeting about Carmen she lost his trust?
My liking for Tina makes it a difficult read.
I am a little disappointed in Bette’s Character and wish her stronger and more determined to believe and help Tina.
Like Zhenya I find some aspects difficult to believe regarding Jodie and her father but then again I hate Jodie!
Look forward to your next post and hopefully the Course will become less difficult for B&T
SG