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    The Most Distant Course

    Story written on May 11, 2019 by Crystal J.H.
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    “Thank you, officer.” Bette carefully walked into the huge room, the broken part of some furniture couldn’t get unnoticed by her. “Jesus…” Although Eric’s body was not yet starting to outflow the water, the outflow ptomaine by the condition of drugs overdose is so strong, Bette can’t help but cover her nose. “Indeed, the death

    “Thank you, officer.”

    Bette carefully walked into the huge room, the broken part of some furniture couldn’t get unnoticed by her.

    “Jesus…”

    Although Eric’s body was not yet starting to outflow the water, the outflow ptomaine by the condition of drugs overdose is so strong, Bette can’t help but cover her nose.

    “Indeed, the death of an overdose of the drug is the worst. The body aftermath is awful and hard to direct viewing it. Mr. Cassie should know about that.”

    “It’s suicide?” Bette asked.

    “So far, looks like it,” The officer shrugged. “But this man is someone important, it’s better to do some research before making a conclusion.”

    Bette nodded, she was a detective, sure she knew about the standard process.

    Watched the officer is minding his own business, she wandered around the room.

    “Did he contact to any person before he died? Or get in touch with anyone?” Bette asked innocently.

    “Only one,” The officer thought for a short while. “There’s a woman, a blonde, I reckon, not really clear looking from the camera, but I’m pretty sure that the last person he’d seen was this woman.”

    “May I see the footage?”

    “Sure thing, it’s on the table, I printed it out as a picture.”

    Bette walked to the table, above the glass, there did have some pictures on it.

    “May I?”

    “Sure, go ahead.”

    Bette smiled at the officer for gratitude. Looked down the camera images, Eric was certainly greeting someone, a lady, with blonde hair. And with the body figure and the way Eric receive her, it had to be Tina. Bette has seen how Eric looked at Jodi before, he would never give those respect to Tina to Jodi.

    It would be hard to Bette not to trust the person in it was not Tina Kennard.

    Did she really do that…?

     

    Standing in the top floor of the Cooper factory, Bette looks down at the people underneath.

    Eric was dead, definitely murdered, but how the fuck did someone wanted him dead? So far as her cognition, he didn’t make serious enemies or offend anyone…

    The hustle and bustle of big cities of LA make her feel like everything is in such a peace, there is no FBI or SWAT team waiting for the attack, there is no crazy murderer in the mansion, there is no criminal empire waiting to be taken down.

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    2. Hi CJ,

      You better promise that things will turn well later on!!!!

      The teaser at the end have me very worried about Bette.

      Ugh Jodi and Henry, i hate them, trying to put Tina as the one who killed Eric, i truly hope that at the end they got what they deserve, a slow and painful death.

      Bette is willing to save Tina at most cost, with her life.

      When this is all over i wish them a happy life and CJ, i have to trust you to make this possible!

      Please update asap, the suspense is killing me!

    3. Hi CJ:

      Very good chapter, finally Bette is becoming strong and smart.

      How could she doubt Tina after hearing Jodie telling all those lies?

      It’s good that she is taking the lead of Tina’s people, I think Sam and Tasha are following her.

      Bette should bring to the meeting the pictures that Jodie gave her where Tina is in Henry’s house, and also the picture the police has, where is showing the blonde that came to visit Eric right before his death, so she could expose Jodie.

      I have no idea how they are going to flee from the mansion I guess is going to be a very tight escape having the FBI and the law forces outside.

      However, my idea of a “good escape” is to make it as clean as possible, which means, without a criminal load on them. Unfortunately, one of the highest criminals here is Aaron, the FBI head, and legally will be very hard to exonerate Tina, Sam, Tasha, and even Bette. At least if you have a hidden card in your sleeve, which you may have if my calculations aren’t wrong.

      But JC, this is your story and it’s great. Thanks for the wonderful chapter, pps.

      P

    4. Thank you for the chapter, but i really don’t follow some of the lines. How the Jodie can interrogate Tina in front of her father when on the last meeting about Carmen she lost his trust?

    5. My liking for Tina makes it a difficult read.
      I am a little disappointed in Bette’s Character and wish her stronger and more determined to believe and help Tina.
      Like Zhenya I find some aspects difficult to believe regarding Jodie and her father but then again I hate Jodie!
      Look forward to your next post and hopefully the Course will become less difficult for B&T
      SG

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