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    The Most Distant Course

    Chapter 28 Two years after the mess

     

    “Are you ready, baby?”

    “Yeah…just a sec.”

    Bette walks out to the dining room, wearing her new uniform.

    “How do I look?” Bette asks.

    “Amazing…like usual.”

    “Come on, Can…give me some practical opinion.”

    “I am…Still the same answer.” 

    The other brunette, Candace Jewell, smiles at her girlfriend, who’s now walking around the house like walking on the fashion show.

    “I feel like a robot.”

    “You have to relax a bit, don’t be so intense.” Candace says.

    Bette makes a small smile.

    “I’ll try.”

    “Okay.”

    Candace pecks lightly on Bette’s lips, and walks back to the bedroom to change.

    Bette looks at herself in the mirror.

    “You know, I thought today is your day, why should I dress up like it was me going to have a promotion?”

    “Because you are the new captain’s girlfriend, that’s why.” Candace yells out from the room.

    “Honey…” Bette sighs. “You know I am not a person who likes high profile…”

    “But I like it,” Candace pouts, she walks out of the room. “Please, baby, will you do it for me?”

    The detective looks at her girlfriend’s expecting eyes, she nods eventually, even if she dislikes those kinds of occasion, she feels the need to continue socializing.

    “Fine…” 

    Candace kisses Bette excitedly, then she happily runs back to their bedroom to prepare.

    Bette takes a last look at herself in the mirror, the uniform somehow makes her feel stressful, like a load of pressure pouring on her.

    “Looking good, huh?”

    She turns her head, sees Dana leaning on the doorframe.

    “Hey, Dane.” Bette smiles.

    “Hey…sorry I just let myself in, the door isn’t locked.”

    “No, no, it’s fine, I didn’t lock it because I don’t think the haters will dare to break into the detective and the soon-to-be captain’s house.”

    Dana laughs. “So true.”

    “Honey? Who is it?” Candace yells from the room.

    “It’s Dana!” Bette shouts back, Dana smirks.

    “Say hi for me!”

    “Will do.” Bette arcs her eyebrows.

    Dana giggles. “How cute.”

    “How’re others?” Bette avoids the command, keeping adjusting her suit.

    “As usual, no big changes…” The athlete shrugs. “Alice was as noisy as always…Lara was busying at her kitchen career, while also helping Kit for the Planet.”

    Dana walks to the brunette, offering her a warm embrace.

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    Comments

    1. Hi CJ,

      I am so happy to see this update!!!

      We are getting closer to their meeting after two years.

      I didn’t surprise me that Bette hooked up with Candace, everyone needs somebody in their life and Bette couldn’t know if or when she would see Tina again.
      I feel sorry for Candace though, she is in love and Bette is that clearly not, but to make a scene like that, not done, but i understand her frustation with Bette’s lack of emotion or feeling.

      It is time to bring Aaron down and punish him for his crimes, Tina certainly has ideas to expose him as a criminal and asshole.

      The ranking just freaked me out a little, thank god you didn’t wrote a scene like i thought.

      Waiting patiently for the next chapter and can’t wait to see the meeting between Bette & Tina. Tina sure has a lot to explain to Bette.

      One request, however i think you will explain it in the future, will you tell Tina’s past two years?
      I love this story!!!

      Thank you so much for this story!!!!

      Xxx, your loyal fan 😘

    2. Hi CJ,

      Delighted to see another post but I still find it difficult to read as I hate Candace so much!

      Please post again soon as this Story has me gripped!

      Hoping you will have Tina explain what has happened to her in the last two years.

      Also hoping for a happy Tibette ending, please!

      Thanks for posting PPS

      SG

    3. Hi CJ:

      Always an excellent chapter.

      Initially, I was disappointed that Bette and Candace ended together, but as I was reading, Bette has no feelings for her (well, she clearly is not in love with the police captain) because of Bette’s heart already belongs to Tina and is only her who Bette is looking for and everywhere.

      In this story, I feel pity for Candace (this Candace, no the one in TLW show) because she is in love with Bette and her feelings are unrequited and because she helped Bette with her PTSD after the fall of the Cooper empire; but c’est la vie, and the new police captain is reluctant to be aware of the situation.

      I’m very curious as to the other readers about what happened these last 2 years with Tina. I don’t wanna know about Bette’s life in the last 2 years because that will give me allergies, knowing she was with Candace (yikes)

      Now I’m thrilled about what is going to happen next because we know Bette is in Tina’s house and the two lovers will reunite.

      So, please CJ, post soon the next chapter.

      Thanks again for the wonderful story.

      P

    4. Hi!

      Like i said earlier – very good job with pictures, i like this graphic part in your story.

      I don’t want comment anythig about Bette and Candance, so i just skip it and waiting next part for resolution.

    5. Great chapter CJ!

      I can definitely deal with Bette being with Candace if it means that a reunion for Bette and Tina is right around the corner! I’d also love to know what has happened to Tina in the last couple of years, but I’m sure you will let us know in the upcoming chapter.

      Thanks and PPS!

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