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The Most Distant Course

At first, the gang felt uneasy for a child’s present, especially Dana, she wasn’t good with children, it was funny actually, seeing an athlete lose the ability to talk in front of a toddler, Alice could not stop laughing, Lara had to wait for a while to let her girlfriend get along with Noah. And Tasha, she understood what Noah’s mother had really been through. She has seen so many examples like Noah, not all of them were as lucky as him, being adopted by amazing women as Tina.
The abandoned kids seemed to know nothing, yet they could actually sense the distancing from their parents or being abandoned, the fear and uncertainty were well-hide in their eyes, only those who had the same experience could see through them.
And Kit? She loves Noah for his innocent, sometimes he would help her with the kitchen dishes, she even let him serve the customers, carry their food or taking their order. Somehow, Noah has become the little star of The Planet, he is so smart, he could memorize three tables’ order without a mistake in each meal. The customers loved him, some usual guests requested him to serve them whenever they came, and the little boy was so proud that he can help her aunt Kit.
One day, Noah asked Kit to teach him how to make waffles, so that he can make breakfast for his mama. Kit was so surprised and touched, how could she turn down such a request? Bette didn’t know how exactly her half-blood sister taught the toddler, but, before she noticed Tina’s little boy was cooking at home; he could make more than four flavors of waffles with different nuts and raisins in it. Also, the detective almost burst into tears when the little boy prepared her favorite sandwich with double cheese in it, though the ketchup was too much, the onion was scorched, and the egg was so undercooked that she disliked it, but Bette ate it without any complaint.
To Tina’s surprise, when she asked Noah about who’s his favorite aunt, his answer was Kit and Alice. Well, she wasn’t surprised when hearing Kit’s name, but Alice?
She has confirmed from Bette that Alice hadn’t taught Noah anything funny, and the blonde has behaved well when Noah was around, no cursing words, no dirty talking, and most of all, no R-rated discussion in front of the toddler.
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Hi CJ:
Wow, what a great chapter, from what I read and what you mentioned, a hard drama is about to start.
That evil woman Buckley, she is at Shane spelled, no she is worse; unfortunately, the woman is as smart as evil she is, and she already guessed Tina’s plan, and also she has her own plan to destroy Tina.
Tina is not the powerful girl that she was before, she doesn’t have economic resources, but of course, she is still strong as a person and as an avenger.
That wicked man of Aaron, he is garbage, abuser and corrupted criminal, poor Shane.
I hope that Carmen and Christina are going to be safe.
What will Bette do now?
Can Tina contact James and do something?
Well, as you pointed out, it will be drama, so we have to wait for the next chapter.
Very thrilling, an amazing turning of this story; but great as always.
Thanks for the chapter CJ. Please post soon.
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Hola cj me encantó el capítulo no lo espera hoy sino mañana y esperando que subas el otro que está muy bueno y más pags por favor gracias
Hola cj me encantó el capítulo no lo espera hoy sino mañana gracias
Hi CJ,
My heart is beating in angst for Shane, Tina and Bette. I hope Carmen and Christina will be able to go to a safe place.
That bitch Faye is clearly very smart and a devil first class. But Tina is also very smart and is always a step ahead.
You surprised us before with how things turned out and i hope you do surprise us in a positive way again . They are in for the Final battle between good and bad.
Let the good ones win!!!!