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The Most Distant Course
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“Let’s go.”
“Yes, ma’am.”
On the other side of the corner, seeing the senator’s car driving away from the building, some police officers gaze upon each other with pallid faces. After waiting till the car disappears far away from the sight, one of the officers takes out of his phone and dials a number.
Attacking day.
Marcus Allenwood’s meeting point.
“Here, take this.”
Tina and Marcus stand on the porch, watching the men gathering all the weapons and equipment.
“The last few days, by listening to you discuss military tactics in such detail, I am very impressive.”
Tina has no flattered expression on her face.
“This is not all different from fighting a war…Organize our troops, understand our enemies, come up with different tactics according to the environment and surroundings of the place, and also, enabling to extrapolate on possible scenarios.” She smiles. “This is the basis of the art of the war, it’s nothing special.”
Marcus nods with the agreement.
“Allow me to ask, Tina, have you fought the criminal war before?”
Tina remains silent.
Has she fought a war beforehand? If she’s not smart enough, how could she help her father, the great boss Sebastian Cooper to build up a huge empire? How could the Cooper organization become one of the biggest drug dealers groups in and out of the entire United States? Winning endless wars in the mansion, were the reason why she’s still standing here.
Too many people died because of her, the wars she’s seen, fought, and planned had been so many, big or small, it’s unable to count and unable to look back. The lives that have sacrificed in her hand were too many to count.
“It’s a waste that a genius like you is not commanding an army.”
A sudden phone ring saves Tina from the awkwardness, picking up the phone, she knew who’s the caller.
“Yes?”
“We’re all ready.” It’s Carmen.
“Tell Bette to wait at home, I’ll be right back.”
Attacking day.
California, LA, Lake Hughes, Peabody property.
“Ma’am, welcome back.” The butler says. “I have to apologize for not preparing anything, you didn’t say you would come today.”
Peggy smiles warmly. “It’s fine, I just need a quiet room with some wine and tea, I am hosting an old friend.”
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Hi CJ,
First, good luck tomorrow!!!!
You torture me with all those complex mind games!
Faye knew all along what they planned? She is as smart as Tina it seems, but after reading your teaser, Tina was smarter. I assume nobody got hurt and the trap didn’t work out like Faye set up. But Shane is still somewhere held captive in a prison?
I am shocked that Faye would let so many people die just to try to catch Tina (Justine) I hope Candace’s eyes are wide opened about her mothers cold, harsh, unfeeling and cold behaviour and actions to those who serve her. She is one evil bitch who deserve to be beaten down and exposed by Tina, Bette and all others who help Tibette’s fight against her and Aaron.
So Faye was married to Marina and had two kids that Marina took care of and left with their son and they both passed away? How do we know for certain their son died due to a disease and if he is still alive, could it be that he is one of the good guys that help to bring down Faye?
And i am so looking forward to the second teaser?! Tina who asked Bette to pop the question to marry her right here and now and Tina swallows hard, a few seconds of hesitation tells enough????!!!!
CJ, i am glad you posted the chapter now and not tomorrow, i wouldn’t have be able to read it this weekend due to work.
Good luck tomorrow!!!
Hi! Thanks for the chapter! Good luck with your competition!
This is a good chapter….more information and more intrigue. Now, lets get Shane rescued and back with Carmen and their daughter. Lets get Tina healthy and out of the land of criminality and lets give all those bad guys like Faye Buckley and Aaron Kornbluth what they deserve. Excited to see what happens next….
Hi CJ:
Great chapter, now things look scary; Tina doesn’t know Buckley’s plans about Shane, but Peggy knows and I trust she will tell Tina.
Bette is still in the dog’s house, she should apologize no Tina.
I hope that the high experience of Marcus and his men (and woman, if we count Tasha) allow them to prevent a tragedy (and according to the teaser, it could happen).
I hope Candace realizes what kind of person is her mother.
Yes, I know some former lesbians that for unknown reasons change into homosexual’s haters, I see that this Buckley is one of those cases.
CJ, I know you are very good at that sport (your background talks for you), I have no doubt that you’ll do fine, but anyway, good luck, my friend.
Thanks for the wonderful chapter, and please post soon.
P